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Buffy Summers and the Girl Who Thought Too Much

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Sudden Case of Freedom" from Caminus
Review:
If Quentin is going to be offhandedly naming semi-outrageous amounts of money, he probably isn't going to even bother to convert it to dollars and you'll get to use some goofy Buffy comment about not knowing how much a pound is worth if you want.

Otherwise I was pleasantly surprised by this, you're good at taking ideas that seem sorta dumb on the surface and making them enjoyable.
Comments from author:
thanks. I had to assume super intellectual Quentin was capable of talking in dollars, although you're right I may have missed an opportunity for a quip.
Review By [Caminus] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Sudden Case of Freedom" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Oh great, Quentin is hanging out with Lucius. That can't be good. Hey, at least Buffy won't have to worry about an early (second) death now. I await to see her first reaction to Draco. I'm sure it'll make Harry and the gang love in an instance.
Comments from author:
oh yes, there will be much love. with hermione. eventually.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Sudden Case of Freedom" from deathgeonous
Review:
Thanks for the update, and thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
no matter how much you say goodbye, I say hello
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Sudden Case of Freedom" from Tempi
Review:
Now if the Watchers Council had decided to be this generous upfront to Buffy from the start then I suspect they would have had a much more motivated and happy Slayer working for them.

I look forward to finding out whether Buffy have some ancestor wizards or if her sudden magical ability is caused by dying and then being revived on the Hellmouth.
Comments from author:
if you read the challenges that this story is based upon you can make some predictions.

thanks for the review!
Review By [Tempi] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Sudden Case of Freedom" from Cmiller
Review:
okay i like this so far and have to say the end with buffy, the money, and the shoes was very in character.
Comments from author:
thanks! dialogue is both the best part of stories and also the hardest to write. I'm happy that my laboring over her lines worked out.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from burmafrdnow
Review:
definitly different. I guess Joyce convienently forgot about being told about slaying.
Comments from author:
this happens before that. this is the beginning of season 2 - joyce hasn't found out yet.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from toastbox
Review:
Awesome chappie! :D It's funny how Buffy reacted in the typical end-of-the-world teenager melodramatic-nest. Except every word she says rings true for her situation... And Lol how Joyce threaten Buffy to never return and then proceeded to kick Hank out of the house. She must be really frustrated.

Yay for fire shooting Buffy! Looking forward to the next chapter!


** A small typo near the end? "something alien even to the abilit discipline her training had taught her"
was it suppose to say "ability" or "albeit little" or...?
Review By [toastbox] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, if you're still looking for beta's, I would like to do that for both this and Ursa. Anyways, this is the second time I've read this fic and this time I was curious enough to actually look up the challenges and I must say that I like the idea of mixing the two. And now with this fic I think that you are well on your way to becoming a new favorite author of mine on this site. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
thank you. I'm a little hectic for the next two weeks, but I'll get back to you about the beta thing.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from ecifrog
Review:
Buffy/Hermione femslash? You are my new favorite author....
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [3 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice beginning. A little short, but still, very nice. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from (Past Donor)CrashxBurn
Review:
I love this so far! :D It's a creative take on the challenge and I think your portrayal of Joyce was very accurate. I hope that you keep writing this and I look forward to seeing what comes next.
Comments from author:
I've actually written about 4-5 chapters for this story, but they weren't written in a linear progression so I can't post them yet! Hopefully soon, though!
Review By [(Past Donor)CrashxBurn] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
Well, I'm intrigued. I look forward to where you take this.
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting start. Will Buffy and Hermione become animagus'?
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Buffy Summers and the Girl Who Thought Too Much" from Horizon
Review:
Last line is epic. xDDD
Review By [Horizon] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Oops I did it again" from CPTSkip
Review:
I loved the last line and really look forward to more of your story. I feel sorry for Joyce. I hope Giles can explain everything to her before she totally ruins her relationship with Buffy. But I am now wondering if Joyce is an untrained witch or a squib.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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