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Equinoxium II: The Fading

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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I liked Arwen & Buffy's exchange.

I REALLY hope that she and Legolas get to Valinor okay! I'm so worried you're going to make this a tragedy :(
Comments from author:
A tragedy? Me?? ... Okay, so my past track record hasn't been so hot on that account, but I SWEAR that this story was meant to be lighter than my past adventures. I just happened to have started the story at an unavoidably dark period in the lives of our favorite characters. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from indis
Review:
Well first of all thanks for the update, and congratulations on the imminant arrival of your little one. :)

As for the reveiw Arwen just breaks my heart, elves are just completly at a loss about mortal death aren't they? It's just such an alien concept for them, still maybe Arwen's conversation with Buffy will give her some clarity and some peace of mind.*crosses fingers*

Buffy seems to be trying to deal with her own fears and questions about her mortality, although seeing as this is the beginning of the story and I read Equinoxium I can't help but feel she might of jinxed herself at the end there.lol

I know it could be a while between updates now, but I'll still be here waiting patiently.
Comments from author:
Thank you for both the review and the congrats! :) And while these chapters have been dark, I, too, was hoping that at least in this AU verse, perhaps Arwen will find some of the comfort she so obviously lacked in canon at the end of her days. I'm hoping that at the least, Buffy could have given her that.
Review By [indis] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Nicessus
Review:
Stoked that you've put another chapter up. Can't wait for the next one and to see what hiccups are going to be thrown at the group this time around.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review - they really do help to keep my butt in gear. :)
Review By [Nicessus] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Horizon
Review:
Ah! An update! And just when I'd quite given up hope of one. I'm only too glad, and eager for more as well. Ooh, a kiddy? Congratulations!
Comments from author:
Thank you for both the review and for the congratulations! :) Now if only this kid would cooperate and get his butt in gear and make his appearance...
Review By [Horizon] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Horizon
Review:
A story with far too much potential to leave unfinished. I've only just reread Equinoxium, and fallen in love with it all over again.
Review By [Horizon] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Simple so far, but should be interesting to see how things go from here, and the idea of Buffy's Slayer powers granting her a longer life does make sense.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AtotheM
Review:
Thanks for posting another chapter! Can't wait to see what troubles you throw in Buffy's way now. Yipes!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from yakoba
Review:
ah! very nice chapter :)

great writing, and the end 'argument' between elf and dwarf had me laughing.

can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [yakoba] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zlataslawa
Review:
Really like your story! I have a feeling that something would happen while Buffy is on the way and it worries me. Why?
Comments from author:
Because I'm sadistic? Seriously, looking back at the prequel it's perfectly understandable that you're feeling a bit worried. :)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [zlataslawa] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from indis
Review:
So Buffy's traveling with Arwen on her last journey, I have a feeling that Arwen's going to give one last piece of wisdom to Buffy that will be relevant later on. This is going to be sad, everytime I read Aragorn & Arwen's story in the annals it always chokes me up at the end.

Thanks for the speedy update, it's great stuff. :)
Comments from author:
I hate that Tolkien couldn't give them a very happily ever after. Everyone deserves one in the end - despite Buffy's own misgivings in this story. And thank you for the review - I love to hear your thoughtful ruminations!
Review By [indis] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Dapsy
Review:
I very much enjoyed the first three chapters, they seemed to connect real well with earlier story. Also, character here seem to have more depth than before... not that they did not have depth before, but the way years weighted on them and how they dealt(or did not deal) with passing time was really amazingly written. And the moment of Aragorn's passing, Arwen's grief and despair... I did shed a tear for her... as somehow, I felt I could connect the feeling she might have had... as if your own soul would suddenly be torn out.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for this review! To hear that you may have felt even a fraction of Arwen's pain in the moment of Aragorn's passing must mean that I did something right. Thank you for that - it means the world to me. :)
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I haven't read your first story but just read chapter 1 and had to comment that it was beautifully written. I'll have to find time to go back and read the first story!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for trying out this sequel without first wading through the prequel. Unfortunately so much of this story is built upon the last that you might find yourself quite lost without it. Either way - thank you for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed that first chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Iceflame
Review:
I'm enjoying this, and happy to FINALLY see an update! And while I have no doubt there is Darkness indeed on the horizon, I hope Buffy does, indeed, find that there ARE some Greater Powers, who honor the hero, rather than seek their endless torment.
Comments from author:
Wait - Powers that honor the hero actually exist? In the Buffy verse? Are you sure?? *grins* Either way, thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I liked the glimpse of Buffy-Legolas's life and the other characters. I hate the loss of Aragorn and the grief that Eldarion must feel with that and his Mother's wish to live in Lothlórien on her own. I loved the banter about the boat and it's sea worthiness. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review! I really loved having the opportunity to show a bit of the normality of Buffy and Legolas' relationship - as well as the banter. Banter is always good. :) Thanks again!
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AtotheM
Review:
Oh, this is off to a depressing start.

So is it going to end up like 'Gargoyles' with them in the boat and it not taking them where they intend to go? Hmm?

So well done! Its been a few months since you updated, I hope your fanfic fires are still burning!

Thanks for writing such wonderful stories.
Comments from author:
The fire might be somewhat guttered, but I will never abandon the project. Promise. :) Hopefully I'll find time this weekend to sit down and get the next chapter formatted and uploaded.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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