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Equinoxium II: The Fading

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from kiwi
Review:
an excellent update. thank you!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Jave
Review:
Please please update
Comments from author:
Thanks for the poke - it was great timing as I had the very rare free time at that moment to make it happen. :) Ask and ye shall receive, apparently. :)
Review By [Jave] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from bradsan
Review:
Well Buffy isn't any ordinary Slayer she always did the opposite. One in the world became two then became so many. Two vampires as lovers. turning enemy's to allies, not killing every demon she saw, dying two or three times, becoming immortal etc.

So there is no happy ending for heroes knowing Buffy she changed so many things so why not this. She always was different. I really hope you'll update this story because I really love it.

And just like the story before very well written.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Jave
Review:
Can't wait for the update :)
Review By [Jave] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Callista
Review:
I love this story so far! Please update soon? I really hope Buffy and Legolas will have their 'Happily Ever After', they deserve it, but I'm sure you'll let them suffer for a while...
Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [20 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I liked Arwen & Buffy's exchange.

I REALLY hope that she and Legolas get to Valinor okay! I'm so worried you're going to make this a tragedy :(
Comments from author:
A tragedy? Me?? ... Okay, so my past track record hasn't been so hot on that account, but I SWEAR that this story was meant to be lighter than my past adventures. I just happened to have started the story at an unavoidably dark period in the lives of our favorite characters. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from indis
Review:
Well first of all thanks for the update, and congratulations on the imminant arrival of your little one. :)

As for the reveiw Arwen just breaks my heart, elves are just completly at a loss about mortal death aren't they? It's just such an alien concept for them, still maybe Arwen's conversation with Buffy will give her some clarity and some peace of mind.*crosses fingers*

Buffy seems to be trying to deal with her own fears and questions about her mortality, although seeing as this is the beginning of the story and I read Equinoxium I can't help but feel she might of jinxed herself at the end there.lol

I know it could be a while between updates now, but I'll still be here waiting patiently.
Comments from author:
Thank you for both the review and the congrats! :) And while these chapters have been dark, I, too, was hoping that at least in this AU verse, perhaps Arwen will find some of the comfort she so obviously lacked in canon at the end of her days. I'm hoping that at the least, Buffy could have given her that.
Review By [indis] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Nicessus
Review:
Stoked that you've put another chapter up. Can't wait for the next one and to see what hiccups are going to be thrown at the group this time around.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review - they really do help to keep my butt in gear. :)
Review By [Nicessus] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Horizon
Review:
Ah! An update! And just when I'd quite given up hope of one. I'm only too glad, and eager for more as well. Ooh, a kiddy? Congratulations!
Comments from author:
Thank you for both the review and for the congratulations! :) Now if only this kid would cooperate and get his butt in gear and make his appearance...
Review By [Horizon] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Horizon
Review:
A story with far too much potential to leave unfinished. I've only just reread Equinoxium, and fallen in love with it all over again.
Review By [Horizon] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Simple so far, but should be interesting to see how things go from here, and the idea of Buffy's Slayer powers granting her a longer life does make sense.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AtotheM
Review:
Thanks for posting another chapter! Can't wait to see what troubles you throw in Buffy's way now. Yipes!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from yakoba
Review:
ah! very nice chapter :)

great writing, and the end 'argument' between elf and dwarf had me laughing.

can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [yakoba] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zlataslawa
Review:
Really like your story! I have a feeling that something would happen while Buffy is on the way and it worries me. Why?
Comments from author:
Because I'm sadistic? Seriously, looking back at the prequel it's perfectly understandable that you're feeling a bit worried. :)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [zlataslawa] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from indis
Review:
So Buffy's traveling with Arwen on her last journey, I have a feeling that Arwen's going to give one last piece of wisdom to Buffy that will be relevant later on. This is going to be sad, everytime I read Aragorn & Arwen's story in the annals it always chokes me up at the end.

Thanks for the speedy update, it's great stuff. :)
Comments from author:
I hate that Tolkien couldn't give them a very happily ever after. Everyone deserves one in the end - despite Buffy's own misgivings in this story. And thank you for the review - I love to hear your thoughtful ruminations!
Review By [indis] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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