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Review of chapter "Emerald Dream" from deedsday
wow ok good chapter need more this has to have more please pleasse
Review By [deedsday] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emerald Dream" from silvergaurd
Love xanders pairing. Can't wait to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emerald Dream" from hello
Hiya Lil' Sis!

I'm liking it so far! I can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out!

My only bit of constructive criticism is that the end exchange between Angel, Spike, Xander, and Conner seems a bit rushed. However, you might address some of the stuff later in the fic which will make it not seem rushed. So...yeah great story!

I like how you handled the Harry vs. Hermione confrontation and how Sirius backed Harry up. I think it's a good point that you made about the house-elves. We're never really given any indication in the book that most families actually beat their house-elves. The closest thing to an indication is that maybe some of the purebloods do (case in point - Malfoy).

'See' you after you update! [cos' I'll be reading and reviewing again ;) ]

Big Sis
Comments from author:
Hello? You named yourself hello. Ugh. Really.

Anyway, thanks for readin' sis! I'm so happy! My first story! That I will actually be dedicated enough to finish!

Why am I writing in exclamations!

Review By [hello] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Emerald Dream" from Nanelovesslash
Me like *G*, a very good and interesting start for a story, I really want to read more

Winky as Harry's house elf and bringing all the food and than when she told Hermione what's the what, I smiled like a loon and could see that scene, well done

Love the Xander/Spike/Angel-Consort thing and that Conner is with them as family and okay with the relationship between the three.

One thing, I'm not sure if you just intend to show that Xander hadn't paid attention, but Draco would be Spike's great great nephew, wouldn't he?

Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! :) You are the first and only one who's reviewed! :(

But to answer your question, I'm currently working on the first chapter. I will address the situation? yeah, situation in the next update. I'm deciding whether or not to have Xander freak out or calmly accept it. (Though, I have to tell you, I'm leaning towards freaking out. It's so much fun to have him freak, specially during Christmas.)

It's so hard to write, but I'm so happy because I'm almost done the first chapter! YAY! So, I'll probably post within the week.

Review By [Nanelovesslash] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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