Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Caliadragon
Review:
This whole story was a hoot! I love that Xander is fitting in with the insanity that is the Lynch brothers. I am thrilled to see that they got their happy ending.
Thanks Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks. It wasn't supposed to be real serious, so I'm glad you liked it. He's just crazy enough to fit. And of course they did. Happy endings are my thing. :)
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Good story, but it tended to just skip over stuff. Particluary at the end there. Conner got that big bomb-shell at the end there, chapter ended a couple of paragraphs later, then the next chapter starts a year later and most everything is hunky dory. No aftermath or acclimantization.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm happy with it that way, though. So, no apologies from this writer for the abrupt ending.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Neat story. I can't help but think that Angel would have been real upset to find Connor ended up related to Xander of all people. And hey, Lorne did survive the 'end'--maybe he looked him up eventually.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I doubt it, either. ;)~ He did, indeed. But I think, for now at least, that this story is finished.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Now the normally weird starts coming in, as opposed to the weirdly normal that has supposedly been Connor's life so far. Kevin has no idea how far downt the rabit hole goes! I love that he understands all Connors quirks and still loves him, that is being there for his family in a major way. I wonder why Xander is there if he is suprised to see a familar face? Maybe the Council detected a Slayer-like energy in the house and sent Xander to induct the new Slayer. So he turns up looking for a superstrong girl - and finds no girls!
Comments from author:
Heh. I like how you put that. Kevin, our poor dear, is going to be a little freaked.
I have answers! But you have to wait. (For just a little while.)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Caliadragon
Review:
Poor Kevin, things are just not working out the way he planned.
Thanks Calia
Comments from author:
I get the feeling that's something he's used to.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from starshinedown
Review:
OH COOL! I might start fangirling.
I've been digging Connor as Kevin's younger brother--the Lynch family as the family Wolfram and Hart squirreled him away in--as a unique and awesome twist. It doesn't hurt that I love Criminal Minds something fierce.
And now, seeing Xander show up on the Lynch doorstep, I'm giddy. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Heh, I'm glad you like it!
It's an awesome show and I'm glad you think I'm doing it justice.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]