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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from timelordwannabe
Review:
I really love this, its an amazing idea and I love the character you've created for Connor, how its him but not quite because he has a whole new life, anyway, really can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. The thing about Connor, he could have turned out so many different ways. 'Normal' is subjective, after all.
Review By [timelordwannabe] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from sabinbc
Review:
I loved this. I was not sure what to expect but it was made of win! Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More soonish.
Review By [sabinbc] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Moondragon
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I'm so exited about this story! It's new, fun and I really enjoy the way you write the characters. Connor's family history is interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I just went with the kooky feeling this one inspired. Glad you're liking it.
Review By [Moondragon] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from DemonChildeKyra
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*giggles* Oh I am sooooo loving this! Connor is just all sorts of awesome! Definitely can't wait to see what happens! Any plans for a pairing for Connor? I thought I may have seen a tiny bit of Connor/Reid foreshadowing there, butI tend to see slash everywhere, so I could be wrong....LOL! More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it. Connor, in all his crazy glory, is a blast to write. I'll probably leave it as unrequited, but those slash goggles are in good shape, sugar. Connor's maybe got a little crush. As TouchoftheWind has told me she'll go mad without more, it'll probably happen soonish.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from shinysolace
Review:
Just so random... Not that there isn't a story or plot etc because there really is, but it's just SO random!!!
Comments from author:
But I like it that way! And there is plot, even if it's hidden away under many layers of kook.
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Ceallach
Review:
I'm not usually one for Conner stories but I love Criminal Minds so I gave this a try and I'm glad I did. You've done a great job making Conner a character I can like. I can totally see him as Kevin's brother. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
It's nice to try new things sometimes, no? Fleshing out little used or much abused characters is probably one of my favorite things about fan fiction, so I'm glad you enjoyed the results. And I'm not going to lie. The idea for him to be Kevin's brother came directly from the mind of TouchoftheWind. Thank you very much.
Review By [Ceallach] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from AllenPitt
Review:
I wonder if any of Angel's crew is still alive? If so the Destroyer series might seem eerily familiar. I assume they don't remember him, still? Angel might take drastic action if it looks like Connor's identity is coming out. Very drastic. And/or he might seem like a serial killer to the Criminal Minds people....cause he kinda was...
Comments from author:
This is set some time in the fifth season, so yes. They're still alive. And yeah. He kinda was...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Almond
Review:
I like this. Criminal Minds is one of my fave shows. You've got the characters down pat. And I love Connor's memories, the names, etc. Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm really glad to hear it. I mainlined 4 seasons in like four weeks, so I'm glad something came of it. ;)
Review By [Almond] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from TouchoftheWind
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GREATNESS! I bow before you awesome-ness! I loved the newest chps- Connor throwing shoes at Hotch's door was brilliant and I could see Reid being amazed by it- also Connor actually manged to make Hotch freak a little bit! Lol!
Comments from author:
He may have been a little afraid of more flying shoes! I couldn't help myself with the Reid hinting! It probably won't go anywhere but Connor being weirded out by someone he maybe thinks is hot.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Squeallikeapig
Review:
Ooh, wow this is interesting. And holy crap, is the other brother gonna be Xander? That would be kinda funny considering how much Angel and Xander dislike one another.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And, uh, I can't tell? Because that steals the plot. And Angel would hate this scenario all the way around, anyway.
Review By [Squeallikeapig] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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