Well now that wasn't a turn of events I had seen coming...
I had a feeling there was something not cosher with the Shepherd's in this fic. After all, why would one so callously dope a man who was obviously terrified and chained to a bed?
This new twist is making things most interesting author-person!
I look forward to more.
Regards,
--Tremerid
Review By [tremerid] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh my ohmy ohmy. (I think I have been saying that a lot but this story is so full of twists and surprises that I may end up using up my entire stock of ohmys.)
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
OK, I totally did not see that coming. I am now in the state of total confusion. Which is next to California, if you must know. I furthermore must say you do know how to write a mother of a cliffhanger.
I continue to love your story and am impressed with your complete grasp of the main players' characters. When I read: Seer glared at him before moving his glare to Shepherd. At last he looked at Wash and waved. As he walked away he heard Wash say, "I think I might be the only one who doesn't need to worry about getting killed in their sleep tonight." this perfectly sounded like something Wash would say. Plus this bit made me laugh so hard I couldn't read through my laughter induced tears.
I really hope you update soon as I really, really, really want to find out what the frak is going on. Thanks for a terrific story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
This is fantastic! I love that you had Wolf and River saved by the hyena. I really can't wait to see if the newcomers to the party are trouble or help.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [14 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is both entertaining and mightily confusing... I like it!
Lol, nice work on this chapter and the last two as well. Grammar was good, it flowed well, and your characters were interesting. I look forward to more :).
Keep up the amazing work!
Regards,
--Tremerid
Review By [tremerid] • Date [14 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is so demented, twisted, freakish, and flat out strange that I love it. Who's on the two ships? Unless it is Angel or Angel and Spike I don't think it will be terribly good for the Seer and his friends (?).
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [13 May 10] • Not Rated