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Another Bite at the Apple

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Good start!
Comments from author:
And hopefully it will continue.
Review By [Bill] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
Cool story!!! Can't wait to read next chap. Wonder when he is, or what'll be his first actions here... Real good man, real good.
Comments from author:
I'm not sending him back to where he can change everything. Be warned.
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
Review:
this has plenty of potential, perhaps a bit more after the 'xander' squeel woulda been nice, could use some comedy, perhaps a few shots at angelus....

all in all, as I said, this has potential.
Comments from author:
He didn't go back that far. There will be some comedy.
Review By [Raider] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from espinosaca
Review:
Damn, didn't know you were still writing. It's been a while since I've seen anything from you. Interesting storyline. I somehow doubt Xander is going to simply sit back and let things play out as they did. A preemptive staking of Angel? I look forward to anything else that comes from this.
Comments from author:
Slowly but surely. It's been a rough fifteen months, not just emotionally but financially and physically.
Review By [espinosaca] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sunamee
Review:
I look forward to seeing the next update.
Comments from author:
I'll see if I can get it out today.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting start, but it was too short. I'd like to read more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, well, that was a decision of 'do I get this out _now_ or do I keep futching with it and _never_ put it out?'
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Omegaprime
Review:
Wow, Dying of cancer and still he wants to kick ass out of everything that moves. now thats how I think he will fight.

But who is the glowing lady and to what time period did he get sent to?

Keep up the good work
Comments from author:
The glowing lady... that'll come back into play later. The When, that's in the next chapter.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banditobane
Review:
whoa now you have my interest. and i can see xander like that, all his friends are dead thanks to putting so much blind faith into a bunch of beings who work for the so-called greater good of man kind, he lost his bother in every way but blood to their plans, he was forced to part with the love of his life because one of the powers went rouge and needed her to become her vessel. no wonder he became a bitter old man that would make cotton hill look like a pussy.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Less Cotton Hill and more Clint Eastwood's 'get off my lawn' meets the old James Ryan from Saving Private Ryan.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
That was kind of brief, and not a lot of info, but from what I'm getting the PTB doesn't want Xander coming their way and he's a white hat who doesn't deserve to go to Hell. Even if he did, Xander makes them nervous too. So Xander is going to get a rewind. That will be cool, as long as he gets to fix some things that went wrong the first time around. I'll be tracking just in case the story is continued.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it was brief, didn't want to over-analyze it simply because that's how my stories tend to go down the crapper in the first chapter (and most of them never get posted, either).

Xander's rewind isn't going to be all peaches, kittens and roses. The last time sucked. This time might suck in different ways. Only time will tell.

Thanks.
Review By [kayron] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
interesting beginning, rough way for Xander to spend his last days though. Hope you decide to do something with this, I'd be interested in following along.

red
Comments from author:
Thanks. yes, rough way to spend his last few days (using personal experience at seeing it; brings back a lot of bad memories I've spent the past fifteen months trying to work past), but now he can have fun. Hopefully. Maybe.

...


Given his luck, he should probably know better than to be too hopeful.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
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