I kinda liked it but I dont undestand why its in Xmen section? He did mention a couple xmen by name but there were no xmen in the story. It was more a crossover with NCIS. *very confused* Also it didnt seem finished even though it said complete. It had alot more story to go. Hope you will put more to it or make a sequel.

Awesome stuff.

good work

Freaking A awesome. Your Xander/Magneto story is the best one out there, and the fact that you actually did the 1 shot you said you might do brings hope to you producing the sequel. Hope it actually happens, because this is all sorts of awesome.

Love the stories and hope he gets to see buffy again and she and xander truely get to live the dream they wanted.
Marriage, kids, then grandchildren.


But i am certain if you do write it ( and i hope you do continue story ) it will be a hard battle to get there

I found it intrigueing how Xander interacted so well with Ducky and Gibbs. Even though both men were quite a few years older than him, the three of them seemed to have a bond. Their life experiences, difficulties, joys, and pain shaped who they were. Although Xander was young he shared that bond with them. It was amusing to see how frustrated Tony was about that closeness, and how everyone kept referring him to boy even though he was ten years older than Xander. Xander left SunnyDale because he lost Buffy. He decided to do some travelling and look into a job offer. Since Stargate was introduced into the previous story as the cause of the Glorificus event happening early, I think that it would be very interesting if the job offer turned out to be from the SGC. I wonder how Xander might react to finding out about the program, and learning that SG1 caused Glory to arrive. Another route to take in the story would be Willow bringing Buffy back, and Xander coming back to the Dale to help Buffy readjust after being pulled from Heaven. The First tried to get rid of Xander. I'm assuming that this would have been a pre-emptive strike so that he wouldn't be around to help fight against it. I'll have to keep an eye out to see if a third installment is made. I did enjoy this second story. I like how well got along with Gibbs, and I like that Xander was able to intimidate Spike through his words. Seeing Xander shown in an entirely new environment, interacting with new people, just reinforces his changes and maturity.

Wow! Dialogue was masterful. Loved it.

great addition to the story, and also a good way to keep spike away from sunnydale incase willow does bring buffy back and also keeping him busy that he might not get it in his head to go after the gem of amara.

keep up the great writing.

Epically excellent. I really do hope you get around to continuing this series. I perfectly well understand having no motivation to continue a story that people seem to love to death (for one reason or another) but I really think you'd be doing everyone, including yourself, a disservice if you don't keep going with this one. It's got way more potential than any other similar (and not so similar) stories. Excellent.

I just re-read Echos yesterday and Each time it gets better and better. I love that story and have been wondering when you would get around to doing a sequel. When I saw this posted I did a little squeal, I admit it. I love that Gibbs knew Xander and that you are going to expand on Xander's life not on his relationship with Buffy. I love Buffy in your story but as a rule I am not much of a Buffy fan. I love when Xander ends up with Cordelia or someone not from the show. Please update again soon!

I like it, especially how real your characters seem.

Great continuation from the first Story, a pleasure to read.