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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kayron
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I was wondering what would make Xander go back to SunnyDale. I guess seeing the others die decided it for him. No matter how angry Xander is, he will usually try to do the right thing. I don't know if that means that he would forgive them though. Xander prizes loyalty. What was that part about no one recognizing him though? He hasn't been gone so long that they wouldn't recognize him. Is he going to wear a disguise or something?
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarkFaerieYumi
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He returns to Sunnydale! WOOT!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Cool. I like.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from kayron
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What annoys me most about the group deciding to push Xander out, ''because he's the normal one', is that being outcast puts him in MORE danger not less. Being a part of the group, even though they do fight the evil demons, offers its own protection. They are there to watch each others' backs, and being a memeber might make random demons less likely to attack in fear of retribution. Being outcast just makes Xander, as Spike puts it, another Happy Meal on legs. If they think that Xander is dead because of their ostracism then good! They deserve the guilt!
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
Great work, keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [23 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sunamee
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Interesting. I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [10 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
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Good on Xander for finding someone to actually teach him! If Buffy thought that he was so helpless, she could have taught him to fight! It's too bad that Xander lost his friend. I think that Willow deserves to have nightmares. Xander was her best friend. She knew him best. She should have known that Xander claimed his friends as his family, and that having his chosen family tell him that he was useless and that they didn't want him 'getting in the way' would break his heart. She shouldn't have supported Buffy in that.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting opening.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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