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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from kayron
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If Tara can feel Xander's anger and agression, and she isn't even sure he's in town, then this is going to be an explosive reunion!
Review By [kayron] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DarkFaerieYumi
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OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! This is getting good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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The fact that years have gone by and they never thought of doing a locater spell till now seems suspect.

The hospital doesn't just run random DNA checks of everyone who comes in to see if it matches people listed as dead and I don't really get why he's hiding out either or why he appears to be insane.
Comments from author:
actually the locater spell thing never accured to me when I did this at the time. Plus usually when someone goes missing in sunnydale it means they are dead. So I had the gang fall into this mindset. As for him been insane no not realy just really angry. razial
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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You can't get an adult listed as dead without a body until a minimum of five years has past.
Comments from author:
really? well I have to say I did not know that.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Poor Wills.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarkFaerieYumi
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This is getting good. I loves it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from kayron
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EVerybody thinks that Xander is dead. Did he just walk away, and everyone just assumed?
Comments from author:
something like that...and someone disappearing without a word in SD usually means he was hit by a gang on PCP. So he was assumed dead.
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JediKnight
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Very interesting job on the story so far, I'm hoping that you'll add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kayron
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I was wondering what would make Xander go back to SunnyDale. I guess seeing the others die decided it for him. No matter how angry Xander is, he will usually try to do the right thing. I don't know if that means that he would forgive them though. Xander prizes loyalty. What was that part about no one recognizing him though? He hasn't been gone so long that they wouldn't recognize him. Is he going to wear a disguise or something?
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarkFaerieYumi
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He returns to Sunnydale! WOOT!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Cool. I like.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from kayron
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What annoys me most about the group deciding to push Xander out, ''because he's the normal one', is that being outcast puts him in MORE danger not less. Being a part of the group, even though they do fight the evil demons, offers its own protection. They are there to watch each others' backs, and being a memeber might make random demons less likely to attack in fear of retribution. Being outcast just makes Xander, as Spike puts it, another Happy Meal on legs. If they think that Xander is dead because of their ostracism then good! They deserve the guilt!
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
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Great work, keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [23 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sunamee
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Interesting. I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [10 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
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Good on Xander for finding someone to actually teach him! If Buffy thought that he was so helpless, she could have taught him to fight! It's too bad that Xander lost his friend. I think that Willow deserves to have nightmares. Xander was her best friend. She knew him best. She should have known that Xander claimed his friends as his family, and that having his chosen family tell him that he was useless and that they didn't want him 'getting in the way' would break his heart. She shouldn't have supported Buffy in that.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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