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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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So, this story takes place after the destruction of Adam and before the arrival of Dawn and Glory, eh? Sounds like a lot of pent up feelings on Xander's part and a need to clear the air with Willow. And if Buffy doesn't like it, TOUGH! The one who will have to deal with it the most is going to be Oz.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from BrownFinderth
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This has been a very intriguing story!! Especially nice in that Xander and Willow got together!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Current Donor)vladt
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never was a xander fan. found this due boredom. very glad i did. very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
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Definitely an interesting concept, and one that you've put some thought into. That being said, there are some issues with this fic.

First, your characterization of Oz needs real help. I'm not arguing with him turning evil - that's part of what makes writing fanfic fun. But the way that you write it is simply not something that Oz would do. Oz is all about keeping things inside until he can work them out himself. He would not be tagging along with the group that obviously does not agree with him on an issue of extreme importance to him - He'd leave. In fact, you haven't given us a reason why he didn't leave after the Veruca incident. Be honest with your readers. Change how he acts, but explain why. Separately, he would not be seething noticeably unless he was just about to do something wolfy, and for that very reason, the Scoobies would catch it immediately, and it would become an immediate priority. You have it as someone who is being completely ignored by everyone.

For the other BTVS characters, you seem to have them much too involved in Willow's love life. I kept expecting Joyce to have an orgasm in the middle of the living room, so much was exposited about Willow and Xander getting together being her fondest dream and all. The same, in lesser degree, for the rest of the Scoobies. As a minor point, people don't change that much between 17 and 22, even if they cut their hair. Xander would have been recognized instantly.

I'm not with you on Xander and Willow instantly making up and becoming soulmates, but that's definitely arguable.

A couple of plot points that you didn't address were - if Xander was gone, who made the bomb that took out the Mayor (and organized the students at graduation), and why aren't the Scoobies dead because of the bomb the zombies set off when they were fighting the Sisterhood of Jhe?

I do like the way that you had him change his name, though you occasionally use Alex when the person would more likely use Xander and vice versa.

And finally, I like the close relationship that you have between Xander and the X-files crew. Well done.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [4 Jun 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Cool beans. More! LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from IcemanII
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Great update, keep up the good work.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [30 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kayron
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That is an interesting point. Who will stay and who will go?
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from kayron
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At least now they know what the Syndicate is doing in SunnyDale.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from IcemanII
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Great work, keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [23 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from kayron
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I never followed the XFiles series all the way to the end, but I did at least see a couple of seasons. CSM man and the Syndicate were human as far as I know. They were powerful people who made major power moves, in secret, that happened to affect the world. I never understood WHY they wanted to help aliens take over the world. What did they expect, to be spared for being helpful?
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from kayron
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Well okay! Krycek has let them know the CSM's plans. Now they just have to realize that the place that they are looking for, is the place that they have been talking about! The butcher shop. Will our heroes save the world yet again? We'll see!
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from kayron
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So, this is going to be the final battle with CSM (cigarette smoking man), and the whole team is needed to take him down. I'm still wondering wondering if this is an alien related thing, or a supernaturally related plan.
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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At your suggestion, I've continued to try to read this story as updates came out. No longer. This really is 100% pure character-bashing, with every single character in the story displaying blatantly OOC behavior. The people here have little in common with either BtVS or X-Files characters except their names.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kayron
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This is the first time, whether in the series or in fanfics, I've EVER heard Willow admit that she was just as responsible for what happened as Xander. In all other instances she acted as though Xander did everything by himself and she was just the innocent bystander. Everyone ELSE just reacted as though Willow was an attack victim and Xander was guilty of the attack! I'm glad to see her admit her part.
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from moringstar
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nice flow like the way thsi is going. though i would have liked to the effect of xander coming back dealt with a little bit first.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [10 May 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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