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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ChiVayne
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Well, the lines have been drawn now. Looking forward to what happens next.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from sunamee
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I hope you will update this story again soon.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [11 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Almadynis
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Nice! Can't wait for more!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
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Great update, thanks. Especially well written confrontation in the library.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kayron
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I guess Buffy gets to be a selfish idiot in this story. If an experienced witch states that a spell is too dangerous, and she won't do it for fear of harming herself or her child, why would a neophyte witch be anymore successful. And Buffy just jumps on the bandwagon shouting let's do it! Buffy doesn't care that the spell is dangerous. She doesn't care about Willow, or she wouldn't want her FRIEND to risk her life or soul to do this spell. All she cares about is getting Angel back. Even if the spell succeeded, there was no Acathla incident, Angel never goes to hell, and she never runs away, none of it would matter. Buffy can't have a romantic relationship with Angel, or Angelus comes out to play. The Slayer, her watcher, and the Scoobies are supposed to be in the business of protecting the world from the big bads. Not protecting the big bad out to destroy the world. They are just so angry at Xander and Jenny that they won't see sense. Xander was right about what he said to Cordelia and Giles too. THEY dumped him and Jenny. They had no right tobe angry that the two of them got together.
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChiVayne
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Bringing in Kendra, excellent idea. I've never held with the idea that Angelus couldn't be killed until Buffy accepted the fact that she had to do it. It certainly wouldn't have been any consolation to the people that Angelus killed or their family and friends.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [10 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Almadynis
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Nice! More please!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [10 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Vilkath
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Well I have to say wow.. I mean I know one night of fun can turn into a life time of comitment often enough in real life but it's rare to see in fanfiction. Well unless the story wants to be an angst driven piece about being a parent and all that. Given the Buffy-verse usualy has enough trouble just staying alive real family relations and development usualy falls behind that.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
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Interesting idea and I am glad to see some one voice a few concerns about this canon event. Some stories may save Jenny's life, others let her die but almost all of them let the attack happen without question. Why should she be working late at night in a public place when she KNOWS about vampires? Add to that she seemingly didn't have so much as a cross, a stake or anything on her for defense?

Worse yet she is both a computer teacher and a self proclaimed Techno pagen how can a SCHOOL computer be the only computer she seemingly has access to? If she had one at home it should be light years faster than a high school computer lab's, and a million times safer. I can understand her working on the curse but I never could understand why it had to be alone after dark in a public place.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarthPayne
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Now this story i like.

Keep 'em coming.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from moringstar
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this is good start if keeps going well, i can see my rating going up.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
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Cue fainting Xander. Great update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from WolfWriter
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Hoo boy! What a way to end a chapter!

I liked the fight with Angelus. Xander is really showing just what a vicious S.O.B. he can be under certain circumstances.

What other fandoms are you going to cross this over with?

I'm dying to see the people from Stargate SG:1 show up in the future.

Please don't kill Kendra. I always liked her.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [9 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from kayron
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Wow!! She told him. Angelus scares Xander. Of course he would. Any intelligent person would be afraid of a psychotic killer. The thing is, Xander doesn't let it stop him from thinking and fighting back. This pregnancy thing though, this might seriously freak Xander out. Not to say that he wouldn't want to stand beside Jenny, and take care of his baby. But yeah. I see freaked out Xander time coming! Good idea about Kendra though.
Review By [kayron] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChiVayne
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Janna/Xander pairing? Way to go, Xan-man! But they will have to be lucky as well as good to escape from Angelus.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [8 May 10] • Not Rated
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