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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from daveykins
Review:
So far - so good!

:)
Review By [daveykins] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
OOOH! Ms. Calendar is feeling a bit sick is she? I'm getting thoughts of babies crying and booties. The question is, will she survive to possibly be a mother? Buffy and Willow really had no cause to be angry with Xander. At least not long term. I could understand the teeth sucking, disgusted exasperation, and a feeling of Xander you're such an idiot, and then GETTING OVER IT because he didn't try to take advantage of them. When they made advances he turned them down. It was a poorly thought out action, but it wasn't something to end a friendship over. I wonder how Xander and Jenny are going to survive Angelus.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting opening.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nikolaos
Review:
I like the summery for this story and the chapter was real good too. A little bit to short^^
But I know how hard it is to write something^^
Review By [Nikolaos] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting beginning...more?
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
Jenny's PREGGERS???? By a 16/17 year old boy?

Uh, won't that be a problem as she's a teacher and he's a student, when it gets out?

Or is she going to blow town with Xander before she starts to show?

This story is very interesting, and I want to read more of it.
Comments from author:
actually I have Jenny as about four years older than xander and he is at the 17/18 mark or there abouts. As for what she will do well you will have to read more and find out. it will spoil it If I tell you

david
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [8 May 10] • Not Rated
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