Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from DofEire
Review:
There is no rating higher than 10...! So. Unfair!
I loved the insight into the Patils and Seamus. I knew Parvati was in Gryffindor for a reason, LOL. And that backstory on young Mr Finnegan brought tears to my eyes; it was superb. Well done, indeed.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you!
My best friend is Indian, so I have a vested interest in letting the Patil sisters be all they can be. Also, I think they're underutilized in fanon, so I thought it would be neat to include them here. Glad you're enjoying them!
And Seamus is adorable. I'm so pleased you liked his section. :)
Review By [DofEire] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from twlight
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Wow, this is a wonderful chapter. I love all of it. I really love that you split the chapter into both worlds, I love that. It should be rather interesting when school starts again and Harry has a bunch of students apologizing for how they behaved. I am as always eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I think the universes will be included in all further chapters until Cordelia finally gets to Hogwarts. Then the action will shift and we won't see much of the Buffyverse at all, though it will be made mention of from time to time.
I wanted Harry to have a variety of friends and allies in this story, and I decided on some that would be considered fairly atypical. I'm so glad to see that you think it's working so far! I've always thought Seamus was adorable, if a bit of a creep in OotP, so I included him for some frivolity. And I was always intrigued by the Patil sisters, so I thought they would be a nice addition, as well. Hopefully there will be more to come.
As always, thank you so much for continuing to read and taking the time to leave such lovely comments. You've made me feel so very welcome on TtH, and I thank you sincerely for that. *hugs* :D
Review By [twlight] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from draconin
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“You were expecting Princess Margaret?” “Of course not,” he scoffed. “This is the room of the Queen.”
That's a truly wonderful line! Great to have you updating again. :-)
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you! :D
Review By [draconin] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from Cmiller
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Oh Cordy only you could cause this much of a stir. Liked the look at some of the minor HP characters' lifes.
Comments from author:
It's really what she lives for, isn't it? Hell, she was designed for it! :D
I'm glad that you're liking the use of the minor characters. They don't really get a lot of attention in fanon, and I thought it would be fun to bring them out to play. ;)
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from wackyninja
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I can't blame Xander for getting frustrated with all of them. At least Angel, Anya, Riley and Tara all understand him and support him, even when questioning him. Buffy and Willow are just so damn blind when it comes to him.
And Willow's jealousy over Xander's relationship with Cordy, Anya, Tara and Riley is just annoying. I want to slap her and tell her to suck it up and move on. ::sigh::
but hey! Cordy is awake! major squee-age! and it's about damn time Harry's fellow Gryffs realized what little shits they were being. For the house of bravery, they sure don't understand being loyal to their own.(/rant)
great chapter, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
LOL, well to be fair to the others, Xander's kind of being all shady and secretive here, which is so not their experience with him. Usually he's an in-your-face kind of guy. And Buffy and Angel have been supportive of him to a point; they're just used to being the ones in charge.
As for Willow...I sometimes get tired of and even feel bad about writing her as jealous Xander's other relationships but, well, it was the truth, canonically. She just worries about him too much. So much that it overshadows everything else. Still, he knows she'll come through for him when it counts. They're BFFs, after all. ;)
Yes, Cordy is awake! And now it's time to kick ass. Thanks so much for reading! :D
Review By [wackyninja] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from Irda
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from frankocsic
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it's/they're all coming together. can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yep! It just took a heck of a long time!
Thanks for reading!
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Collision Course: Moments of Lucidity" from dustin
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Sososososososo happy. I'm more loving the Harry potter side of the story though. Please please please tell me it'll be seamus/harry. I would love you forever! Lol, it would be so awesome.
Comments from author:
I love me some Seamus/Harry, so there will definitely be some undertones of that here. Will anything more develop? Perhaps. I imagine Harry will enjoy several flirtations until he finds his EPIC TRUE LURVE.
Or would that be LURVES? Hm. Well, we'll find out together! xx