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Harry Potter and the Renascent Seer

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Review of chapter "Horizon, Part Two" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. I have to say that I really loved the part with Hedwige. I also liked how Harry's friend's were thinking about what Harry is acting. Again I love this story so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Comments from author:
I'm a huge fan of that snowy owl, and she'll definitely remain part of the story. Glad you liked the stuff with Ron and Hermione, and thanks for reading! :)
Review By [twlight] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part Two" from DofEire
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Oh, dear, only 3 chapters? :( *groan* I have to wait? *whine* This is wonderful so far, an exhilarating start. Keep up the good work & I hope to see more soon... feed the bunnies! I would also like to add how much I enjoyed reading thoughtful!mature!Buffy -- we don't see nearly enough of her and her appearance was very welcome. And Whiny!Willow! Mother Goddess, that little girl needs her head smacked. I hope Cordy gets to do it...or, ooh, better yet, Hermione! The two of them are a little too much alike right now and maybe seeing what Willow has allowed to taint her will knock some sense into our Miss Granger...hmmm? :)
Comments from author:
Aww. *petspetspets* Don't worry, there's more coming! SO glad you like Buffy here, I'm really trying hard to write her as the awesome chick she can be. Still, she'll have her phases, as will all the Scoobies. There's no drama without conflict! Definitely agree about the parallels between Willow and Hermione, and that will absolutely be touched on later. I'm just thrilled that you recognized I'm NOT bashing Willow here, she's just very insecure where Cordelia is concerned, as I think are most people who were bullied (though I do believe Willow gave as good as she got from Cordelia).

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such wonderful comments! :)
Review By [DofEire] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part Two" from (Past Donor)sabriel
Review:
Really really loving this story. Love that Xander is going to take care of Cordy. You have made Anya more human which is great as Xander and Anya are perfect for each other. Like that you have Luna in the story as she is my favourite Hogwartian, always thought that with her insight she would be a great help to Harry. Hermione bugs me. Even in the books the way she always thinks she knows everyting and that no one can know more than her. You really got her right. Like your Ron. He and Harry are close and there is a deep friendship and feelings there. Can't wait for more. Love the length of your chapters!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I think Anya is wonderful and often unfairly maligned in fanon. She was a totally cool chick who, while blunt, was a good person. I thought she and Xander were great together, and I thought that whole wedding debacle was relentlessly contrived. *grimace* Luna is made of total win, and she's a HUGE part to this story. I'm going to try to keep her somewhat kooky, but I believe there's a lot under the surface that we never got to see. And YAY for long chapters!

Thank you so much for reading! *smish*
Review By [(Past Donor)sabriel] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part Two" from Cmiller
Review:
hmm...so that was interesting and I hope for more soonish. Can't wait to see the clash of Scoobies/Fang Gang(Faith is in one of the two) and the Harry Potter world.
Comments from author:
Well, only Cordelia will be going into the HP world. More like an invasion, really. ;)

But don't worry, Faith will still be putting in an appearance!
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [17 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from purrfus
Review:
Not being a Dumbledore fan... reading the scene between him and Narcissa was wonderfully satisfying.

Harry wising up can be good or bad, this version was intriguing and left me looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I admit I'm not much of a Dumbles fan either, but he's not malicious here, just misguided. Glad you liked his interaction with Narcissa. She won't be the last to have a go at the old man. ;)

Harry wising up is good, insofar as he's now thinking about different things, but he knows he can't handle everything on his own yet. Thanks for reading!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
Review:
Since I knew this was a HP cross, I had a bet with myself about when and how contact would be made. I lost. Very nicely done.
Comments from author:
Hee! I tried to make it sneaky, and I'm glad you thought it worked. Thanks! :)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from AriaDeloncray
Review:
Very interesting idea! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AriaDeloncray] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from TurquoiseGirl
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I like your characterization of Narcissa. She's a sly, intelligent, mama bear willing to do anything. What a cool customer! I like that she pretty much blindsided Dumbles with the magical nature of 'muggles'. It doesn't surprise me in the slightest that he would really think muggles are inferior to wizards deep down inside. That kind of closed society, all kinds of things get to be subtly pervasive. I'm very interested in the friendship between Harry and Luna. I'm rather anxious about how Ron and Hermione will take it, due to their personalities. All in all, I like the wizarding set up you have going.
Comments from author:
Oh, I'm so pleased you enjoyed Narcissa here, because she will be integral later on. I always enjoyed her in the books because her morality is flexible. I believe that, at her core, she's only concerned about her son. I can appreciate that, and it makes her interesting to write. As for Dumbledore, he's always struck me as being somewhat ignorant, despite his learnedness. Luna is absolutely essential to this story, and she's going to be making some, uh, interesting choices in the future. With regard to Ron and Hermione, well... :X
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from twlight
Review:
I love this wonderful story so far. The way that Xander reacted to the news about Cordy is perfect. I am extremely glad that you are portraying everyone the way that you are and making it believable. I love how you are changing the pov's it's wonderful. I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you so, so much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying it! :D
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from Rod
Review:
Interesting, and with promises of entertainment despite the sort of over-egged Dumbledore I strongly dislike. Unfortunately the hilarity in this chapter looked rather unintentional; Narcissa "getting a leg over" on Dumbledore means they had sex, which probably wasn't what you intended. There were a few other squiffy anglicisms, but I forget what they were, sorry.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave feedback; it's much appreciated. I don't have a Britpicker, so I apologize that the idioms aren't what they should be. Where I'm from, "getting a leg over" means something radically different. As far as Dumbledore is concerned, in this story, he has reasons for what's he doing, but he's not evil, just misguided.
Review By [Rod] • Date [13 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Horizon, Part One" from Cmiller
Review:
okay so I started to read this and when I noticed that you wrote that Cordy is connected to more then one Champion. Other than Angel who else is she a seer for? Anyway this story is really good and I hope you add more soon. I kinda hope you may bring more of Faith in *looks thoughtful* but then again she is in prison...hmm...well I only want Faith cause she is/was my Favorite character from BTVS and A:TS.
Comments from author:
Cordy *is* connected to more than one Champion, but not necessarily in the role of Seer. And Faith will be a part of this, don't worry! I adore her, so I bring her in whenever I can. :D
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [13 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Kiristeen
Review:
I'm enjoying this story. : ) You've a unique take on things and I look forward to seeing where you go with the story.

Kiri
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! :D
Review By [Kiristeen] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from zafaran
Review:
Oh, this is a *nice* beginning, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Your comparison to 'The Taming of the Shrew' was an interesting touch that I really liked. If the rest of this story goes half as well as this beginning has, this is going to go into ebook for future rereading on my ebook reader/PDA. Well done. Zafaran
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you so much for your kind words! They're sincerely appreciated, and I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! :D
Review By [zafaran] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is a brilliant fic and I am enjoying getting to read it once again. Sadly due to health issues I haven't been to lj to finish reading what you had written on many of your fics, for that I do feel bad, but I look forward to seeing where this goes.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Oh, sweetie, I'm so sorry to hear that you're still ill. I've been fighting chronic illness, as well, so I can only imagine what you've been going through.

I'm editing this as I go, so even though it won't differ too drastically from the original, hopefully the narrative will be tighter and there will be fewer typing errors!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ora
Review:
This is a fabulous start. I can't wait for the next installment!
Comments from author:
Thank you! :D
Review By [ora] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
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