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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Dem Lovely Witches part 2" from Blackguard
Review:
loving this story so far, can't wait for more. keep up the good work.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [22 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Dem Lovely Witches part 2" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
Good story mate!!! Can't wait for the next chapt!
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [20 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Dem Lovely Witches part 2" from Rob
Review:
Good so far, but I can't decide if I like the Charmed arc being told in flashback or not. Trims out the storyline but the story flow suffers a bit. Interesting style though... :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dem Lovely Witches part 1" from Althalus
Review:
Great part. I like the way you had them interact. But I have to say that this part left me confused about Xander. In one section of the story when Xander and the Charmed Ones first meet you mention eyes for Xander. This suggests that Xander has two eyes. But later you mention him loosing his eye and I don't see an explanation about him healing his eye. So does he habe one eye or two? Or is the mention of Xander's eyes a mistake?
I hope to see an update to this story soon. It has promise to be an epic story. So I'm looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
He has only one eye, Galeb poked the other one out which sort of gave him a minor superpower that allows him to see illusions, lies and true natures of others.

It seems like there was a small part of the text missing, but I fixed it.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dem Lovely Witches part 1" from Neverwillmini
Review:
I'm glad to see this story is continuing and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I will attempt to keep atleast a semi-regular update schelude with a new chapter atleast once every 1 or two weeks. But when you have a wife, two kids and job sometimes you have to sacrifice your writing time for them XD
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dem Lovely Witches part 1" from sunamee
Review:
Great story. I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dem Lovely Witches part 1" from djhardim
Review:
Very good chapter. Xander may not be Mr. Black, but he gets the job done.

Sadly, it's been awhile since I read "Where Destiny May Lead". The scene with the vampires reminded me of Tenhawk's "Journeys".

http://www.grandt.com/Journey/stories/Journeys.html

Two corrections

“Relax I won’t pry if you don’t want to tell me. It’s just that this isn’t the first time I’ve had to deal with things like that. For the most part they tend to be a pain but you have to remember that no prophecy is unbreakable and destiny is just a guideline. Even if you have one, you still have a lot of freeway as to how you want to handle it,” Xander explained.

I think that you mean leeway rather than freeway.

“I met her you see, during my road trip. I was in a bad place but she helped me out a lot. And now she’s gone too” Xander said then proceeding to explain how the two had med.

met rather than med.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the corrections, if you spot anymore let me know and yeah it was from journeys, I often mix the two up :)

Xander isn't Mr.Black really. Harry was more interesting in just going on a vacation and most things that happened were coincidences at best. Xander on the other hand has a pretty clear idea as to what he wants to do.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from djhardim
Review:
Very good beginning. Looking forward to more.

It reminds me a bit of MarcD's "Where Destiny May Lead".

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-6014/MarcD+Where+Destiny+May+Lead.htm
Comments from author:
Some of the series used in his story may appear in the story and I did get the idea of a vampire flying into Xander's car from that story, but other than that it's going to be totally different. No immortal-xander's running around or anything (Xander will stay mortal as he should). This story is more or less a mega crossover-version of Supernatural with Xander solving indivitual cases (some independent, others not) and meeting people from different series while trying to help out Sam and Dean. Some of the crossover-encounters will happen on foreign soil but you'll when that happens.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and intriguing opening.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Brimmstone
Review:
This looks to be a very interesting fic. I look forward to updates
Review By [Brimmstone] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from bex
Review:
cleaner and troubleshooter? Oh I LIKE your Xander, he is all kinds of awesome!
Review By [bex] • Date [15 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
Review:
Bit of a melancholy beginning, but I liked it. I also enjoyed the mental image of the vamps running away from Xander after his "Boo!" Lol! I look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from kayron
Review:
I certainly like this first chapter!! So Xander is like this bad assed troubleshooter who is just going to wander the country helping out the supernatural community? He actually has a rep where the boogeymen are afraid of HIM?! I'm looking forward to more of the man in black! I wonder how Sam and Dean are going to react to him?
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Intriguing start, interesting Xander character, and well woven mix of crossovers.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [15 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
This is the best Xander story I've read in a while. I've missed good multicrossover stories and this one seems to be gearing up to be a great one. I can't wait for more.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [14 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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