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Review of chapter "CH 5: Of Wolf and..." from Genuka
Review:
*stares in awe* ... WOW! You just blew me away with that chapter!!!! That was great! I can't wait for more! Update soon, please!
Comments from author:
I am speechless. Thank you Genuka. Iam overwhelmed, Bless you!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 4: Jurassic Park My Red..." from Genuka
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Nice take! I'd never think to do that! Keep up the good work and please update soon. I'm looking forward to what else you're gonna do! *gleeful*
Comments from author:
MUCH THANKS for the wonderful review and the great rating :)
Arjai
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH3: Baked From Scratch, & Historic Hodge Podge" from CPTSkip
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I can't wait for them to move out into the "real world". Not to mention find out just what the frak their 'real' mission is. I just have a feeling they still don't have the whole story. You add some nice touches of humor to your tale and the last bit was quite cute, I thought.
Comments from author:
Many thanks for the wonderful review. Reviews to me are like fuel for a car. I run on them :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH3: Baked From Scratch, & Historic Hodge Podge" from jormunguard
Review:
Good story. There is one little problem I saw in chapter 2 you had Willow, Dawn and Buffy sound shocked when Xander said wives, but in chapter three you have Willow knowing about his marriage to both Buffy and herself. So the only one of the three that should be shocked would be Buffy. At least that's the way that I read it.

Other than that your doing a great job. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Memories are comin back, but slowly. their memories were implanted, therefore not natural. It has been noted that when a person wakes-up from coma or coma like state memory is fuzzy for a period of time from days to months.
Thanks for the review.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [20 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH3: Baked From Scratch, & Historic Hodge Podge" from Genuka
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Nice! You're doing brilliantly! I can't wait for more! Update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you Genuka!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
This story reminds me of a Edmund Cooper story called 'Seahorse in the Sky'.

http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/1113525.Seahorse_in_the_Sky_A_Science_Fiction_Novel


Like the story so far.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are WE Really The We We Were" from SmithAndWesson
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#1. She thought about her friends Xander and Willow were 30, Faith was 28, Dawnie was 25, and poor old Giles was 62!

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Fearing the worst she screwed up her courage and slowly opened one eye. Slowly she opened the other one and cautiously looked around. Sunlight streamed through a multitude of windows and glass ceiling tiles. To her left lay Willow, not the 27 year old Willow she knew so well but the 16 year old Willow she met her first day of school in Sunnydale.


So, I'm confused, is Willow 30 or 27 here?


#2. "Temperance is the most respected foremost forensic anthologist in the world today." she said.

Anthologist?
Comments from author:
The time that her essence was taken was when Buffy was 30 while her tissue sample was taken when she was 35 at the time of her death. All of the girls were cloned to be about sixteen though eventually when the fog clears they will have all of the memories that they had at the time of their actual death. All of this will be made clearer as the story progresses. Willow and Dawn did out live Buffy, and Xander (Dre) outlived them all! Anthologist, Damned Spellcheck anyway!
The story has been editednow to correct the confusion...thanks.
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from sistercity
Review:
OK, if the bodies were vat grown, why has Dre only got one eye? The eye loss was not genetic and neither is Dre original Xander made young again, so she should have two eyes.
Comments from author:
The ones who grew it for the Doctor(s) were not human as we know them and were told that the loss of the eye was a badge of honor for the man that the girl was grown from. Plus I never said that Dre only had one eye only that she had a patch over her left eye. ;)
Sneaky Arjai.

PS: thanks for the continuity check to keep me honest.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful! If you're going to have the doctor and/or torchwood continuing to show up you might want to list them too. I'm gonna be watching this one. It looks like it's gonna be fun! Update soon please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from Gideon
Review:
If I had to choose a team to save the world I would choose them too! (+ Faith)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from batzulger
Review:
Oooookay...This will be odd.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from Genuka
Review:
You might want to also list this in the NCIS and Bones sections of the site. After all you can list multiple sets just use the secondary set up and do it more than once. You'll get more readers and reviews. Gonna go read your story now!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the suggestion! :)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from Wolflady
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Well, that was one strange explanation!

Anybody else notice that he never did get around to what the bleep they are supposed to be doing there?

The teams are picked but nobody knows what game they are playing. This should be fun!
Comments from author:
Oh believe me the mission is serious but with this team it's going to be fun alright!!
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off To See The Wizard: Are You Really The Girls..." from CPTSkip
Review:
Now this is an interesting, not to mention semi-cracked, beginning. Lol! I think I'm going to miss Faith, and possibly her ex-husband Xander will also, but I am looking forward to seeing how everyone interacts while they go adventuring. You picked an fascinating selection of women, er females, er whatever for the Doctor's party. It should also be interesting to see how the hyper rational Bones, and if Bones, accepts non-scientific actions and creatures. More, please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
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