I enjoyed this quite a lot, even if I got stabbed in the heart a couple of times. The pacing was good, lovely descriptions, no strange spelling or WTF grammar that booted the reader out of the story flow. All in all, great job.

Thanks for the highly entertaining read.

Thank you so much! I was really worried that the story wouldn't flow properly, so it's nice to know that it worked. :D

Interesting idea for a fic. I actually like it until the end. I would have liked to see Michael adn Buffy reunited in heaven. I would say they both earned that. The rest however was very good if a bit dark. I generally like Buffy and Dean pairings but I can see Buffy falling for Michael easily enough. It is a shame that the father did not step up and save her and reward them for their pain. It kind of defeats the idea of a higher power not to let that happen. Over all I would say this is a definite 8/10 or 9/10 piece.

Thank you. When I wrote this story, I knew the ending wouldn't be for everyone, so it's nice to know you liked it anyway. :)