Review of chapter "If you've Got a Big Enough Hammer" from
rdmcmainsReview:
Speaking of typos, isn't your typist named Godogma?
Love this. Too bad Xander didn't know about the clearance back at graduation; ANFO may be nice, but I'm betting military grade explosives would have made the Mayor's day even worse (or if he'd grabbed some more rocket launchers).
So, is the Hammer stabilizing the split, and that's why he needs it on him at all times?
How long are you going to let him labor under this misapprehension that Jack's a little light in his combat boots before you actually introduce Sam to Xander?
Keep up the good work, and really, update anything; I don't think there's anything you've written that I haven't read at one point or another (and that includes the Anime Addventure).
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rdmcmains] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DrDamageReview:
This is really cool!
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DrDamage] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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XanderHalcyonReview:
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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XanderHalcyon] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MarcelReview:
I have no idea how this story will unfold, and the beginning is so ridiculous... it's actually funny. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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Marcel] • Date [20 May 10] • Not Rated
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naraicReview:
Love the story hope you continue
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naraic] • Date [20 May 10] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
A great fun opening, well done.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
