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Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from IrFane
Review:
I liked the new snippet, didn't really expect this to be continued after the last scene.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from aeraveil
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About the only guy Xander would have a problem with is the Joker. One he abuses Harley and two he's a clown.

Xander does not like clowns.
And nobody messes with his girls.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from LordCorwin
Review:
Excellent!
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from KrisB
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I think that you need to add a scene where he has something like 6-8 some what girl friends. Bascially, all the girls agreed to keep adding a few more until he is worn out and they have a proper rotation so that they can rest and what not and go back to their day jobs afterwards. ;)

I'm actually surprised that Cat woman didn't wind up with him.

Hmm. Xander has been racking up some nice favors. What would be something fun for "a friend" to do for him? I could actually see him gaining some sort of immortality / agelessness.

I can't wait until some actual goddesses come around to try him out. Hmm, of course, if you want, you could always include a scene where Xander is amongst all of his various "girl friends" when Dawn uses her new found portaling ability to try to track her Xander down with Willow and Buffy in tow.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from Genuka
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Yup, definitely not sunnyhell!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from missinglink
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Always glad to see more of this. Couple things. Would wonder if there is any fallout from Ivy & Harley's use of Batgirl and Supergirl to waylay Xander's amorous attentions. Something about Clark and Bruce having a discussion about Clark forbidding Supergirl from spending too much time in Bludhaven. The surreal nature of it sounds fun. Same would go for awkward conversations between Dick and Xander with Dick pumping Xander for details. Maybe them being caught by Barbara while this is happening. Lots of fun ideas there.

A nice chapter would be the setup of Xander having to eject an unruly super villain from the bar. Some fun interplay as other villains try and get the offender in line and warning that person/thing only to have it be too late. Best part would be not telling exactly what he does,but just reactions and possibly gossip between the heroes or villians after the fact.

Hope it keeps coming and that the ideas above help some. Really appreciate the fun reading. Later!
Review By [missinglink] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from Bobboky
Review:
Awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great to see this story continuing. I love your writing, it's just the right amount of crazy.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from Compston
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More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please.... More Please....
Review By [Compston] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Odd Jobs" from Compston
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Oh mY I laughed my Head off. Chasing Croc with a Chainsaw to use him in Gumbo and Soloman Grundy with Needle and thread....
Review By [Compston] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Compston
Review:
interesting story
Review By [Compston] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from sdperry
Review:
Loved it from start to finish!
Review By [sdperry] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I have to ask; was the Busted Flush set up by a member of the Royal Flush Gang while they were out of jail?
Comments from author:
No, just a name I thought would fit a bar where super-villains hang out.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Night at the Busted Flush" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting ideas here.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Odd Jobs" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Seems like Xander is having surreal fun, and has two friends (Babs and Dick). Interesting twist that he's a "favorite bartender" and some of the villains actually like him.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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