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Review of chapter "If" from Harry
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Well, this group is starting to put things together. And what they are putting together works with the plans of the First Evil. Time to get things together and get Daria/Faith to Sunnydale and FAST! Tara may not like using her magic in the ways that Willow is suggesting, but there may come a time when Tara is going to have to make a choice: Either aid Willow in some powerful Magicks, or GET OUT OF TOWN!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Orangutang and Anaconda" from Harry
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Well, the attempted assassination in Topeka didn't work, and Daria didn't loose her cool. Looks like the First is loosing!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doctor on Call" from Harry
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The conversation with the Doctor has been of help and has given Daria/Faith some encouragement and something to work on as well. But, even taking out Bringers is not enough to stop this obsessed Teraka assassin from trying to take out Daria.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Janey's Got a Gun" from Harry
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The First is not thrilled with all this failure. It WANTS to see Daria get upset, to loose her temper. In doing that, it would open up a way for the First to do some SERIOUS damage! But the allies that Daria has now, are going to make that a lot harder to do. And the allies of the First are not having much success either. Something has got to give, one way or another.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Laws" from Harry
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LOVE the idea of the Three Laws of Slayage. This is something that B, the Watchers and anyone else who might become a Slayer should learn and get drilled into them. This idea, this sort of thing, is something that should be encouraged not only in your stories, but perhaps in other stories by other writers as well! I may have to incorporate them into some of the stories that I am working on. Well Done!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "". . . Mother Can You Hear Me?"" from Harry
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Well, The First tried mind games. Those didn't work. The Bringers: They failed. Now, its the Assassin's turn. But backup is on the way!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, at the Hall of Justice . . ." from Harry
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When W&H do something good for you, there has to be a price. In this case, its in W&H best interest to keep Daria alive. Angel knows that, Giles knows that. But this is one of those times that it pays off for everyone if Daria is kept alive.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams of Glory" from Harry
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A W&H assassin doing a FREEBIE? Must be something important for her to do this.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If" from DieselDriver
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"He would have cooled down by then, though. Anger made you stupid. Yeah, he was boiling at the way the Slayer had treated him – instead of killing him, she’d just tried to embarrass him and leave him helpless."

Flattop apparently hasn't the mental capability to understand that alive and embarrassed is much preferable to being dead. Not saying he's not intelligent, just blinded by his mental processes to not have that capability. Perhaps he was dropped on his head when a baby and in the flattening of his top, it damaged his brain such that he cannot properly judge perspective on life. Yeah, that's it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Orangutang and Anaconda" from DieselDriver
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"Eventually, he slept for a bit, and if any supernatural entity was trying to mess with his dreams, you couldn’t have proved it by him."

Is it possible that Oz is immune to the "First's" dream manipulation, possibly by his meditation & medications?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctor on Call" from DieselDriver
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Not a headshot I presume? Still come kind of protection allowing the faking out of the assassin who will be in so much trouble for missing an assignment while reporting it in as complete...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolf and Elephant" from DieselDriver
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I think she needs to cry. Sometimes a good cry will get the worst of it behind you and you can deal with it without getting angry. Or not so much anyway. Daria doesn't seem like she's ever cried about anything and it needs to be done.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [8 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Battle of Lexington, Part II" from DieselDriver
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Have I mentioned that I don't really care if you follow canon or not as long as the story telling is good. Your story telling is better than good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Arm and a Leg" from DieselDriver
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So is this going to be a reenactment of the battle of "Hemp Bales" or more like the second battle of Lexington which is described as a minor skirmish some places? No battle is a minor skirmish to the ones killed though.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "". . . Rampaged Against a Knife"" from DieselDriver
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It's taken me awhile, especially considering my hobbies, to come up with the question, why doesn't someone just get a rifle and shoot Daria? Are they that close minded? I know the bringers can't but Linda could. Dum dum could have. (I guess [hope] it shows what a basically decent person I am to not have thought of that sooner.)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 May 14] • Not Rated
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