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Review of chapter "Headfirst" from Arekanderu
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Nice one! I am glad to see Amy back. Can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Headfirst" from Dmitri
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Well, that's one way to outmaneuvre Tommy Sherman, but in canon, it would take something heavier to bring down - a goalpost, I think.
Comments from author:
YEah, but this is something being wielded with Slayer strength at close range. Enough to knock him out.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Headfirst" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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The First really does have the B team on this one.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night in Alexandria" from VillageOrchid
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I'm enjoying the plot and characterization. I like your brand of cliff-hanger where we want to know what happens next, but aren't traumatized by the chapter break.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from VillageOrchid
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Okay. I think my confusion with the location had to do with not finishing reading one of your earlier stories and/or not remembering how the situation with Glory turned out AU. I'm all caught up now. Thanks for continuing... and also not being big on the Daria stuff I had indeed forgotten that the sister was Quinn, thus your title having two meanings.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night in Alexandria" from Dmitri
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Daria's roadtrip grows more and more troublesome by the hour, doesn't it?
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night in Alexandria" from AllenPitt
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hm, if she's involved in yet another fight with people with the same physical characteristics as before ('bringers) --the police might start to get a bit suspicious. Anyway--he really is that stupid, parking in sight of the apartment? Wow. heh.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night in Alexandria" from JoeDineen
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Solid enough chapter and I think aunt Amy is going to find out about Faith.

The CD did skip once:
"The tension in the room had jumped considerably upwards. Jane figured she’d better try to do some quick defusing. Besides, it was the wrong time to settle anything except who got to sleep where."

That sentence repeated, I presume it was not intentional.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night in Alexandria" from (Recent Donor)ElessarNett
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I don't know how else to say it - this story and, yea, this entre series, is Awesome. Take whatever time you need to get the next installment of this or any of your other stories out, so thru can continue to be Awesome.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElessarNett] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from (Past Donor)DonSample
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My theory has always been that the stuff about Buffy's second death, and resurrection, was a red herring. It was her *first* death and revival that gave The First its opportunity. That was the death that split the Slayer line, after all.

A being as old as the universe would make Ents look hasty. Coming up with a plan to take advantage, and putting it into action in only 5 years, would be charging ahead at a breakneck pace for it.
Comments from author:
It may have been a red herring, but it's the red herring I'm taking as canon.

And nothing about the First Evil necessarily screamed "patient." I'm guessing it could have spent eons just being bored out of its nonexistent skull.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from AllenPitt
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Makes sense; it was Buffy's resurrection that made the First so powerful, otherwise it's limited to brief appearances & its bringers. 5 minutes more chanting than you all have to go to bed! and all that. I guess it can't get any Turok-Han yet. Those were kinda cool, and could fight a slayer and have a chance at winning.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

And no, there will be no Turok-Han in this story. More bringers, though. And Tommy Sherman. And possibly a few other evil beings.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from Gideon
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It will be interesting to see someone go up against the first evil and try to outsmart it, as I imagine Daria will try to do.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from Dragonelf
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You have done great job with the series.

This part of the series looks pretty good so far and I am already looking forward to start reading any future additions you might get inspired to add to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Apple strudel::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from EternalPrelude
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! You kept this going!!! This is probably my favorite fanfic, BAR none. That it's still going is just awesome. Great so far, as well....love the angles you're playing. Can't wait to see more.
Review By [EternalPrelude] • Date [31 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Nothing Like the Mighty . . ."" from Dmitri
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Roadtrip! And First Evil is paying Tommy Sherman's tickets too, I reckon!
Comments from author:
Well, Tommy Sherman's not broke, and anyway he'll have some Bringers to haul along. Hard to get them tickets on Amtrak.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
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