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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jimk
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"I never understood how human life would spring up on a world created by demons nor how a civilization as advanced as the Ancients clearly were could possibly be routed by such a simple thing as a disease."

Bingo. That addresses the key problems in both of 'verses. The unanswered question in your scenario is why would the Ancients, the Asgard and everyone else lie about it? I think you hit the key problems and your solution clearly makes more sense than canon but still leaves doesn't quite fit it all together. At least it is closer.

It's one reason I always had a problem with Star Trek as a kid. The various series and movies have so many holes in it that it is ridiculous. It was better than nothing but really almost all if not all television scifi shows have really serious flaws that most books would not be able to get away with.
Review By [jimk] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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So, if I read you right, Harry is offering them minimum exposure by sending Buffy directly to them.
Comments from author:
Kinda. Maybourne's trying to continue what he always has had as a goal: protect the Earth and ensure the continuation of the human race by whatever means neccessary. He also knows the Scoobs are going to make sure he goes back to prison for the crimes he's committed. A full alliance and joining of forces between the SGC and the Council will better support those Maybourne has come to realize really do have the best chance of achieving his goal.

After all, every time the NID/Trust/whoever manages to gain control of the SGC things go to hell so fast it spins heads 'round the world.

Road to hell - and Maybourne knows he deserves it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
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oh my ...
interesting things have come to light ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very good start. thank you for the fine read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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Great work, you have blended the universes quite well and I like the first contact being through someone none of them like or trust - it makes it more likely they will trust each other!
Buffy should walk up to the mountain and say she is looking for Daniel jackson because mayborne sent her and then hand over a card which says - Buffy Summers - Warrior. (Since they may not know what a Slayer is)
I hope your sequel works out one day.
Comments from author:
Could work; alternatively, given the SGC's experiences with Maybourne, it could massively backfire. Oh the possibilities...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vorax
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I loved this! I wish there was more and that we got more then one vote for the CoA.
Review By [Vorax] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ecifrog
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Very well thought out....
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hottmess
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this is an interesting concept. it would be nice if you explore it a bit more...

Its always interesting to read a realistic way that the Slayer and the SGC can meet and work together
Review By [hottmess] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geyer
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I liked this very much. You came up with a great explanation for both the presence of demons and other supernatural elements on Earth and why the Ancients left. Harry's a great character--definitely not a nice man, but he did come through for Jack and the SGC on several occasions. His very believable motivation here reminds me of Spike's--they like this world too much to want anything awful to happen to it, and if that means helping the good guys sometimes, so be it.

I hope you continue this.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [29 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanrei
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interesting start
Review By [fanrei] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tosca
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Nice! I can just see this happening that way. :-)
Review By [tosca] • Date [25 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silentflux
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I really enjoyed this cross - the two different perspectives and the characterizations were fun and well done. I especially like Maybourne sticking his neck out again :) I hope you decide to continue this in a sequel? Please? :D
Review By [silentflux] • Date [24 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
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That was different. I liked the characterizations, and the juxtaposition of, effectively, two ficlets, was very well done. Maybourne was always so pragmatic. I always liked him much more than I should have.
Good storytelling - this one goes in my favorites.
Comments from author:
I don't like Maybourne much, but I will give the guy that much - he does honestly want the earth to continue existing, and he has no qualms whatsoever about making sure it happens. Road to hell indeed.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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I think this story very neatly deals with some of the massive holes in the backstories of both the BtVS and SG1 universes.

Well done!

Any chance of a sequel? Please?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arekanderu
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Interesting idea but there is still one major flaw. Namely that once we get past our fan love for the world of BTVS looking objectively at a Slayer she is pretty much nothing more then a human with slightly elevated level of strengths,speed and a few senses. Even if this level is a bit about above a Jaffa in a universe like the Stargate one where they wipe out whole solar systems before breakfast and it's full of genuises and enough firearms that can be easily modified to shred anything to pieces. Unless you give Buffy some sort of special ability I just don't see why SG would bother with her. It just doesn't seem realistic universe wise. Make sense to exchange info with someone like Giles maybe even do a few tests on magic with Willow but that's about it

Oh well here is to hoping you find a cool solution :)
Comments from author:
The thing is though that its Buffy canon that bullets don't work on a lot of demons. In my story that's because of the changes of crossing barriers. Yeah, the SG1 verse has geniuses and big honkin' space guns but those don't work on a lot of demonic species - and didn't, in the ancient history of my fic.

As for the SGC not bothering with Buffy and the Slayers without adding special abilities... I don't need to add any special abilities. The only edges any military soldier would have on Buffy in a fight would come from his weapons and tactical training - and we see in early Buffy season 4 she takes down an entire team of special ops all on her own, so even all that training (which Buffy could get also to increase her knowledge base further) didn't do much good.

Plus, with the sheer increase in number of Slayers they don't need to worry so nuch about taking away the only line of defense earth has against the supernatural. Actually that ties into a theory I have - Slayers are natural attractors of events/things that want to end the world. Sorta like black holes and any nearby matter.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
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