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Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Faust made the Ring of Amara an area effect? Oh, brother!

Oh, well, maybe some of them will take out Joker..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from JediKnight
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Great job on the new chapter, I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.

-Where have you been, I haven't heard from you in a while?

-How are your other fics coming?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Harsh Light Of Day Part One" from JoshuaRichardson
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So, your sorry for not updating, huh? Well you should be. And to make sure it doesn't happen again, I am sending the Toon Patrol (the group of five anthropomorphic animated weasels that serve as henchmen to Judge Doom in the film Who Framed Roger Rabbit) to insure you do nothing but work on the next chapter! =)

Thanks for the new chapter, hope you enjoyed the review. And the weasels enjoy pizza for dinner.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from thundever
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Great chap and great series, brilliant interaction, please update soon, will there be anymore flashbacks about before Zarina returned to Sunnydale?
Review By [thundever] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from DarthPayne
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Ooh, i like.

I look forward to the talk about Zallana. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from Dragonelf
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I have just read the series and I hope you get inspired to add more soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a serving of Mohnnudel::

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The only questions that really matter
are the ones you ask yourself.
- Ursula Le Guin
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from Blackguard
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Happy to see a new chapter, looking forward to more.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from GundumM
Review:
very nice
Review By [GundumM] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from Wolflady
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I'm curious. Just how was Buffy trying to stop Angelus? I can understand letting him go at the school, what with shock and the fact it would have been hard to get him while also keeping Willow alive. However with any deaths after the Mall she would legally be considered an accessory before the fact. He was free because she would not stop him.
Comments from author:
I know and that is frustrating, don't you think? What is worse is the fact that she doesn't even feel guilty and it seems that he didn't feel guilty either. The only time Angel was confronted with his past was when the First popped up as the people he'd killed. He kills at least one person a day for four months and she just takes him back. Buffy is a lot like those women who get abused by their husbands but forgive them when they 'quit' whatever they were doing. Whether it be drugs, alcohol, or mental illness (I consider stupidity and being an @$$hole as well), they end up taking them back.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from Stormrider
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Another chapter for this story. I did my review on ff.net. I think this is going to be interesting. Zallana is going to shock a lot of people with what she says, (ZZ or Triple Z must be her nickname because I'm not going to be surprised that Zatanna is her middle name like Zarina's middle name is her grandmother's first name) I love to find out how Zatanna will react when she meets Zallana not to mention the rest of the justice league.

The shadow court was a bit unexpected. I was expecting a bit more of what was happening in the shadow court and the case, and how Zarina reacted when John Constantine was defending Buffy. Dawn is coming into her own as a heroine, and I like to see Dr Fate wards Lorne's bar. Angel is now an investigator for the shadow court, love to see how that works out for him.

Choatica is wreaking havoc again, and she forced the canon Xander to come with her, I wonder what she wants with him, most likely revenge against Zarina, and speaking for revenge for Zarina I think I know who the woman who broke the joker out of prison, If I'm right I'm not surprised. It will be a rematch between the two.

Great chapter love to see what happens next, BTW did you read Zatanna's new series. If you did what did you think, got some great villains and interesting meetings. If you didn't I'm suggesting you read it. It's written by Zatanna's own creator, so it's going to be good, and I was right it is good. Keep up this series it's good so far
Comments from author:
Zallana will be a rather unique surprise to everyone and I'm considering different people as godmother and godfather. My rather unique canidates for godmother are Ravager, Raven, Wonder Girl (Cassandra Sandsmark), Oracle, Drusilla, or Buffy. My godfather canidates are Jonathon, Giles, Oz, Dick Grayson, Jesse, or Doctor Fate. Zatanna would probably do the same thing that everyone else has done and faint.

I will admit that I rushed the Shadow Court but that was due to a few e-mails that I had recieved wanting the next chapter so a few things got rushed to completion. Dawn still needs a few scuffles and I'm trying to create a villain for her. The reason I did what I did with Caritas was the fact that I loved that karaoke bar and hated the fact that Holtz blew it up. Seeing Angel on stage uncomfortable singing was hilarious.

Chaotica's bit of havoc will have far-reaching consequences and it it partially for revenge against Zarina but it also has something to do with that little bit of her that is still Willow. About the woman who broke the Joker out of Arkham Asylum, there are three things. One, she didn't just break out the Joker but everyone of the dangerous criminals locked up there. Two, Arkham wasn't the only jailbreak that occurred. Three, you shouldn't be surprised as it is her.

I haven't had the opprotunity to read Zatanna's new series as I can't find it.
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny work on this, I hope you'll post more soon.

-What fic might you update next?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. While I'm trying to work on my other stories, I'm trying to work on this too so I don't know yet.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from darkcarnage
Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad that you didn't abandon it.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, this chapter took too much time. I'm trying to speed up writing Chapter 3.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from atticus
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Forgiven, cause this is a doozy. Wow. If the next chapter's like this I'll take two.
Review By [atticus] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadow Court" from DHX
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Technically buffy was guilty and was lucky she got off due to outside interference

Edit: just remembered i have a grievance with your general story direction so it's best if i step out here and don't continue reading this story.
Review By [DHX] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Day" from Blackguard
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Happy to see the new story has started, looking forward to where this goes. The bit with Janus in the classroom was awesome. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [24 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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