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Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from rigger
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I'm fascinated as to how memory loss facilitated awakening various possessions/powers that Xander didn't previously show. Was he repressing that strongly -- did he have hints and feelings but think they were automatically bad? Or did he try to tell his friends or Giles and get shot down? Giles definitely thought he'd taken care of the hyena.

Maybe they should start wondering whether his amnesia was magically induced in order to awaken these abilities for some reason.
Review By [rigger] • Date [21 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
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This is really good. I hope you add more.

I'm really enjoying your take on Alexander unleashed and the girls are just too cute.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [20 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from dialNforNinja
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Another fun chapter for another fun story. Maybe not my favorite of yours, but that's praising with faint damnation at worst.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from LordSia
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Wait, it can't be over yet guys...

So awesome. Please continue.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from LFW
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An excellent scare for the Buffy crew and I do wonder if Jim is correct and Jack is going to return soon
Hoping for more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Oh wow...nice to know Xander's limits sit up around Rambo level, if he doesn't get immediately ganked assaulting a militia-held diamond mine. Wonder what pushing past his limits would be...a Metal Gear Solid game?

;D

Excellent work to you and Falkun, dogbertcarroll! Loving this series!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from RorschachsBlot
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Gold, pure gold. How long before 'Jim' notices and blocks the scrying? How long after that before the girls hound Giles to put out feelers to locate 'Jack' in Africa? How long before 'Jim' gets tracked down by an overly amorous Lovegood with a part Veela in tow? Nice, as I said, very nice.
Review By [RorschachsBlot] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Zyanadryn
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Wicked awesome update!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from LordDream
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Its an awesome fic, I just wana see more of it.
Review By [LordDream] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Neverwillmini
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Happy to see more of this! Funny that the Sunnydale group is seeing his training out of context. Can't wait to see what they think of the 2 demon girls babying or teasing an injured/tired Xander :)
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from DieselDriver
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Interesting. to bad it's not written ahead of time so you can post more often. The delay makes it difficult to follow. And it's definitely worth following. More sooner please.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from djhardim
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The one thing that gets me in this story is Giles.

Giles sipped his scotch. "Don't look at me, my opinion was ignored in the matter."

What is his problem? He's the adult. He should have had backbone enough to do what he felt was right.

One question - Since Harry made it to this dimension, what about Sirius?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from KrisB
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So does Jack make it to Capt. America levels? I was re-reading, he has better reflexes, hearing and lung capacity. The hyena and swim thing and solider training. Also what ever magical twist you want to toss his way as well. You could do something like Roy Mustang's flame abilities.

Now, that I'm thinking of it, skilled demon hunter should also come out in his test as well. Why? Well just because he didn't know that he was a demon/vamp hunter doesn't mean that he doesn't have the skill set. We also never know just how much he was hiding as well.

I was reading a few of comments. I can't help but wonder how folks thought this was ever slightly a bash fic. O.k. Buffy wanted him removed and didn't really have to do much. Presto, he had reason to leave town. The rest were just scratching their heads about how could he leave! Not so much bashing. To me it's that they wanted to protect him and also keep him in their lives as he was and around. That wasn't going to happen.

Alexander didn't like being treated like an utter moron or such and did try to improve. He quickly figured out that he wouldn't get the best personal development there so he left.

Damn, I loved the Faith scene/moment. In this latest chapter, we are finding out just what Jack can do with a cheering section that says "Hey, you can be a trained CIA Assassin, type!"

Re-reading all this, there is a part of me that wouldn't actually mind Cordy and Faith pairing up with Jim/Harry. He does need a bossy girl and a fun girl... Wel, that could apply to Cordy and Faith rather easily.

I'm interested in what Jim will find when he does his testing on Jack. They've got vague ideas of what Jack's shifting is about, but Jim is only experienced with those that shift into one form. Jack is showing a furry form and a wet form. He also seems to get various stamina/stat boosts as well when needed. I like the mystery more than anything. It's fun that the girls pretty much think he is Clan though. I can't wait until Jim gets run through the training room. Jim likely is a tad brighter than that. He would really, really not want to be stressed to his max as well as having an entire medical team on hand for when things go badly when he does it.

Re-reading the Cordy/Faith scene, it sounds like what Jack will get from Xander that's positive is the entire spy/ninja/Lu Tze the sweeper outlook/way of life.

I guess Faith forgot Cordy already mentioning the entire swim thing to her. That shouldn't have been a new thing for her. Well seeing it would.

Poor Lefty and Righty. Nothing that they tell him would be as embarrassing as what he's likely dreaming up for them with a banana.

Why do I see a future scene with some guava fruity drinks when they get settled in at home? Oh, who am I kidding those girls won't need that.

I can't believe that I missed that he girls were perving on Xander while he was in the shower! It's so worth re-reading to catch things like that.

Harry is so awesome in his intro in this.

I love the Harry cleaning out the RoR and getting both a warehouse full of junk and valuables out of it. I wonder if that second hearthstone picked up anything from Hogwarts over the years? That's going to be one interesting Hotel.

Jim setup an Unspeakable training area in the hotel that was more danger room than training room? Too awesome. I can just see Riley's group being so annoyed that they don't have anywhere near that quality of training rooms at their base.

If that training room can bring out hidden skills, it would be rather worthwhile for all of them to go through it. Just seeing Xander's results is enough for me though.

It would be rather fun for Gabrielle and Luna to show up for Harry. Luna of all people could figure a way. I can see Gabrielle coming along because she wants some of that, and a quest is sounding a good idea to kill time.

You know if that actually was the veil Sirus might be around. It would be funny if he ended up with a Clan set of girls as well.

Willow cussing... priceless.

I loved them watching him run through the extreme training course. Their scrying spell should stop before he gets out of the room though. They'll all be thinking he is in Africa and coming up with all sorts of ways to try and find out how to track him down... And the first spell that they cast points them right to LA, which would confuse them.

I like the Daniels family. I think that says it all right there. I vote for Harry accidentally marrying/bonding them together.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from raxadian
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Xander is no longer Xander and got superpowers, I would have preferred a badass normal, but whatever.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from MickyLee
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Once again, nothing to say but "I LOVED IT!!!".
Hope the muse for this one stays with you a bit, because this is just FUN!
Review By [MickyLee] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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