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Review of chapter "Bourn-journo!" from KrisB
Review:
I love this fic. This is actually an odd shot to develop Xander abit differently. I was thinking on the hidden skills that there are tons of things that you could do with that. First there is the entire primal thing. That's got to have a proper method to it that'll give him boosts.

Next is the solider possession. Now, I like the idea that Xander went as a generic solider so the spell tossed all sorts of generic solider skills and training to him. That one's actually a given and pretty minor over all.

Now, for the fun stuff would be his undeveloped affinity with chaos and tantric magic. I can see the girls having a blast helping him out with that. I can even see Jim learning that field as well to earn man cred. Actually, I think that the snake tongue thing needs to be developed. It usually means boosts in healing, warding, and some time sex magic as well.

You know you mentioned that your version of polyjuice would have all those kids be Harry's biologically. Well, you should make that entire generation speak snake as well. I've always leaned more that the ability was Harry's or was absorbed into Harry over time, but could be passed down.

I like Luna and she is the only one from HP land that I could see joining Harry. Gabby might be interested, but she has a sister and parents. Ginny? Nah. Hermione? Could happen.

I'd actually be interested in lesser paired brainy girls like Padma or maybe Daphne. Padma has a twin so wouldn't likely do a world jump. Daphne could if she was going to run from a bad marriage setup or something.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A week earlier:" from raxadian
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It kind of makes sense, with no memories, no friends, no hunting at night, he has a lot more time to think and study, and Xander was never an idiot.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from raxadian
Review:
The only way Xander will be free of the 'Night life' is if Buffy makes him move to another city, he is a demon magnet after all.
Comments from author:
Demons infest the BtVS-verse, nowhere on the planet is free from them.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bourn-journo!" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Keep the Omake especially Draco's Deathwatch! I know and you know that Xander's not CIA trained buuut Jack don't know Jack about Xander. I will LOL repeatedly if in the future Jack runs into Angel and automatically dusts him without Angel even noticing him (it would be hilarious if Jack groin-stomps Angel without remembering WHY). An exceedingly excellent story that I look forward to more of.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bourn-journo!" from Bobboky
Review:
Awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bourn-journo!" from CageFire
Review:
Haha, nice chapter. Although I fail to see how the harry potter thing is an omake of this story, it seems unrelated, but oh well it's still funny.
Comments from author:
Jim is Harry Potter.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bourn-journo!" from IronOx
Review:
You are making my life difficult. I had been hoping for more of this story - it's both hysterically funny and dead serious (NO PUN INTENDED!) at the same time. But I'm also following and enjoying the rest of your stories, so begging you to work on one could slow down the others.

I second (or third) the call for more Luna. :)
Review By [IronOx] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Dayloc
Review:
This is a fun story, but one question, should I know who the mage was? Looking forward to when the Sunnydale group finds him, assuming that is your plan as it seems.
Comments from author:
Harry Potter.
Review By [Dayloc] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from jaeger
Review:
I think the hotel could do with more luna...

Anyway, enjoyed this like all the others.
Thank you for sharing
Comments from author:
Yes, it could.
Review By [jaeger] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riding the Rails or On the Right Track" from DieselDriver
Review:
Better and better. In fact, I'm betting that lefty was on the right and righty was on the left.
Comments from author:
Yep!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not so Sunnydale" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, this is so silly... Hilarious. I started laughing about 3/4 of the way through the chapter and all the way to the end. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Write more quick. There's not enough to keep me going very long.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from DieselDriver
Review:
I don't know what comes next but as prologues go that's pretty good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from stonewar
Review:
oh wow. I like how you turned the founders on their heads a bit. Slytherin the reformer, Hufflepuff the revolutionary and Gryffindor the Pious.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Genuka
Review:
*stares in shock* You're evil... Will there be more?
Comments from author:
Of course.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope you will be adding more soon.

-What other crossovers will you use?

-Edit: I'm not offering suggestions, I'm asking what crossovers you already plan to use?
Comments from author:
I think I have enough crossovers for the moment.

Edit: I have BtVS and HP, there may be some odds and ends but they are pretty much it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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