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Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Bobboky
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from LordSia
Since they needed to keep Moody alive, I guess that the effects of polyjuice are superficial - that is, you can't just polyjuice yourself into someone, cut off a lock of hair and use it to polyjuice yourself into that person again, ad infinitum. In which case all those pregnancies? Not Harry's.
Good chapter; keep the funny stuff coming.
Comments from author:
Moody was kept alive for plot purposes, not because of something needed for Polyjuice. If simply cutting off a lock of hair caused it to change back people would have much simpler tests for it. The kids are biologically Harry's.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from AlexanderMcpherson
Little suggestion if you ever get round to it: The team if/when they get 'modern weapons', (aka guns) Harry and Fred (she has to be brought in) come up with guns that work on demons and vamps. But they dont go into the techy side of why like many writers try, like "blablabla velocity blabla balance blabla impact spread blabla explosive"

Just imply something simple, like: "See this Glock? It's a normal glock, right? you've seen the rounds, they look normal, right? Well, surprise.... they are normal. But they work on vampires. How you ask? Well, as my good friend Al said, 'Fuck you that's how'."

(a reference to the 'a wizard did it' trope, aka, 'a wizard did it, its not important, now can we get on with the show?')

actually, can you please bring Alucard into it even if just for that? And I don't mean the regular anime one, I mean the abridged version, who'd blackmail his boss for a 72 inch plasma TV with Netflix, and makes terrible puns of anime shows with his name, "well, you activated my alu-card. geddit?" and takes enthusiastic walks through the woods.
Comments from author:
Now I have to go watch that series again!

Very enthusiastic walks!
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not so Sunnydale" from Muadzin
I was quite enjoying this story when suddenly you renamed Xander into Jack, and kept naming him that way, including in his mind. For me that was the moment this story jumped the shark as its now no longer about Xander but instead about some OC character named Jack's adventure in the Buffyverse. That was my 'uh, what the....?' moment. I can understand why he gets a new name, that Xander has amnesia, but to mentally have him think like that, that's where I draw the line. Thing is, the name of the character is really important in fanfics, especially in fanfics, because there are tons of stories out there that have the characters act and behave in ways that are nothing like in the series, and yet, as long as they are named Buffy or Xander or Willow or Faith in my mind's eye I still picture them as such. But give them also a different name and have them think that way and the picture in my mind gets ruined and they're some new OC instead. And unless so specifically stated that is not the kind of story I want to read. Feels kinda like a bait and switch. So I guess this is where I take my absence.

Probably just for the best as I couldn't help but notice in other reviews that Harry Potter is now making an entrance. Don't like that franchise, want nothing to do with it, would kill it with fire if I could, so I wish you the best of luck with your story, lots of happy writings, good fortune and all and maybe your next story is more to my liking.
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
And sadly, even with proof; Harry is still a virgin and screwed, Bad Faith will skate thru free and clear if still a ferret, and lastly the last two of the trio are still morons.
Comments from author:
The Ferret is screwed and yes Ron has far too many 'didn't think' moments. Hermione did what she did to protect Luna, as no one would have believed her proof anyway.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from mackiechandler
I am wildly happy to see you writing this story again - and what a loop - A whole nuther universe.

I reeeeealy like this and appreciate your writing.
Review By [mackiechandler] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from CageFire
Interesting story so far, keep up the good work. Is that harry potter thing at the end of this chapter part of this story, a different story, or just a random plot bunny?

Edit: Oh right, it slipped my mind at the time I made the review.
Comments from author:
The Nameless wizard is Harry Potter. Didn't you notice the heartstone?
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from DarthPayne
I look forward to seeing what more happens in the HP'verse before Harry arrives in the Hyperion...
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from jokersole
I have been looking forward to this one. Can't wait to see where you are going from here.
Review By [jokersole] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from WCSII
Good story so far, a little silly at places (not quite CrazyDan getting a run for their money, but probably someone that Danny [sh]ould take on as an apprentice)

That said, I don't suppose there's any way I can convince you to do more than twice a year, when you feel like it, so we can see what happens next sooner rather than later? And sorry, but no, I don't have money to pay you to write this.
Comments from author:
Sadly I have to work for a living which means I can't devote all my time to writing fanfiction, which in all actuality I probably would.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Studyofchaos
Loving this. Great to see this story continuing and you writing. Luna joining Harry and Xander would be great. Maybe Faith could come from Sunnydale to join the crazy crew.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from WolfWriter
Well, the fallout from THAT little plot of Draco's is going to come back and bite him in the ass, BIG TIME! None of those children will be Harry's, as I don't think that Polyjuice actually overwrites DNA, it simply alters appearance; therefore, none of them will be eligible for the Potter family fortune.

As for Hogwarts, Hermione, Minerva, et al.; they can all go straight to Hell. Do not stop. Do not pass Go. Do NOT collect 200 galleons!

I'm looking forward to Luna telling the school to kiss her arse, pack her stuff and leave to join Harry.

How many feet of mathematical calculations did she use again? From what I remember, it was a LOT!

Hermione needs a good punch in the face, never mind a kick in the pants. Ron just needs to be neutered; the gene pool doesn't need that kind of stupidity polluting it.
Comments from author:
Minerva and Hermione were convinced by the memories the girls shared as they wanted hard proof and that seemed to be pretty fool proof. The fact that so many girls had such evidence left them stunned long enough for it to be pulled off.

Hermione was protecting Luna because some of the fathers were influential and they were getting pissed. She was wrong and did the wrong thing, but for the right reasons.

Ron... yeah he was pissed Harry didn't share, and said something loudly about it. Hermione was not amused and Ron is in medical.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from tavinseven
YES! I am so glad you're back and writing again. I really love this story and really wanted to see it continue. I can't wait to see were you go with it. I actually liked the Harry Potter side story and really hope you continue it. Even if you don't type your stories yourself please keep writing them because you have some really great ideas.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from meteoricshipyards
Harry and Xander together -- look out LA.

Is this LA in the same universe as Hogwarts?

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.
Comments from author:
Different universe, unless I decide they aren't later.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from LFW
Veela? is as good a chapter as any or Heartstone.

Awesome addition to an amazing fic
This is a group that can actually run the hotel and be detectives
Hopping for more of this excellent fic
Comments from author:
Heartstone would have been a good name for it and would have linked the two sections.
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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