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Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Moontrap
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The last part was perfect! I really enjoy this story, and I can see so much possibility with the hotel that can alter itself like Hogwarts. It could copy any defense shown on TV, within reason, and still look nice doing it. Oh, and you could give it a form like the Hogwarts avatars! Maybe make it a Luna Lovegood lookalike, and have it hook up with Harry? Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from michaelangelo
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So it WAS Harry, I know it seemed a bit obvious but there was also the possibility it could have been Sirius. A couple of questions, will anybody follow Harry? like Luna for example? or other people to bring him back when the truth is revealed? and did Harry hop universes?

Before Xander starts his business will he do anything to get some mad skills? or will he just stumble along using his incredible luck? it's just, I know it's an overused cliche, but since he's lost all his memories but kept his life skills would that include the Halloween skills? at least the basic ones, enough to remember basic weaponry? otherwise trying to get a license for a firearm would be amazingly difficult.

Thanks for the new chapter, my god was I happy to see it this morning.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from banner
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Wonderful update - and such a fun way to start the day. I'm sitting with a smile on my face. Thank you.
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Rob
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Poor Harry, he's better off now.
Review By [Rob] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from TharzZzDunN
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Yay! New chapter, with lost of wonderful wanderings and ramblings! My favorite kind! I'm not kidding!

Cheers~!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Sandi
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Ouch! Great idea. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from semkirk
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Sweet! Glad to see another chapter. Look forward to another and soon, please.
Review By [semkirk] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from RoyalTwinFangs
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Harry Potter to?
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
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Oh, cool. I always enjoyed this story. Good to see an update to it.

Heh. I know they're probably out of the story now, but I'd love to see some more of the Faith/Cordy interaction in Sunnydale. ;) They seemed to be hitting it off in the wake of "Alex's" leaving.
Comments from author:
Now that you mention it... that really would add to the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from tavinseven
Review:
this was really original and funny I really liked it. I wish you would have continued but it's still a great story so good job.
Comments from author:
*wish granted*
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Addlcove
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beyond awesome, always a pleasure to read your stories.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Interesting story so far.
I love the fact that Buffy and Willow get what they "Want" but it turns out not to be what they really want.
I love the interaction between Alexander and Faith after Alexander dusts the two leaches, nicely done.
I love the interaction between Alexander and the two girls on the bus.
I actually feel sorry for the PTB Alexander (or Jack) is not one to follow a destiny he breaks prophecy's and destiny's, it is unlikely to turn out quite the way either the PTBs or the Senior Partners want with Alexander playing the role set for Angel. In fact I would throw out all of the books and start over if I were them!

Great story so far, I hope you continue this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
You are going to be so very busy writing to fulfill my reading needs. Please take good care of yourself, I need you happy and productive for many years to come!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from cindlemain
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Okay it's offical, your on my top ten Fav writers list. My favorite part so far.

“I don't want to die a virgin,” Randy moaned.

Laughter bubbled up from the corners of the room.

“That's not good,” Lydia said.

The shadows thickened into solid black shapes that flowed through the room.

“Are those tentacles?” Jack asked nervously.

“I've changed my mind,” Randy whined, “I want to die a virgin.”

“Ditto,” Jack and Lydia chorused.

My husband thought I was going to die laughing when I read that. Please write more, I will give you Twinkies.
Review By [cindlemain] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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ok i guess thats were Harry comes into the game...guessing the Black Robe was Harry.....5000 gold pcs...
ouch...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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