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Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from WolfWriter
Review:
Well, the fallout from THAT little plot of Draco's is going to come back and bite him in the ass, BIG TIME! None of those children will be Harry's, as I don't think that Polyjuice actually overwrites DNA, it simply alters appearance; therefore, none of them will be eligible for the Potter family fortune.

As for Hogwarts, Hermione, Minerva, et al.; they can all go straight to Hell. Do not stop. Do not pass Go. Do NOT collect 200 galleons!

I'm looking forward to Luna telling the school to kiss her arse, pack her stuff and leave to join Harry.

How many feet of mathematical calculations did she use again? From what I remember, it was a LOT!

Hermione needs a good punch in the face, never mind a kick in the pants. Ron just needs to be neutered; the gene pool doesn't need that kind of stupidity polluting it.
Comments from author:
Minerva and Hermione were convinced by the memories the girls shared as they wanted hard proof and that seemed to be pretty fool proof. The fact that so many girls had such evidence left them stunned long enough for it to be pulled off.

Hermione was protecting Luna because some of the fathers were influential and they were getting pissed. She was wrong and did the wrong thing, but for the right reasons.

Ron... yeah he was pissed Harry didn't share, and said something loudly about it. Hermione was not amused and Ron is in medical.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from tavinseven
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YES! I am so glad you're back and writing again. I really love this story and really wanted to see it continue. I can't wait to see were you go with it. I actually liked the Harry Potter side story and really hope you continue it. Even if you don't type your stories yourself please keep writing them because you have some really great ideas.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from meteoricshipyards
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Harry and Xander together -- look out LA.

Is this LA in the same universe as Hogwarts?

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.
Comments from author:
Different universe, unless I decide they aren't later.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from LFW
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Veela? is as good a chapter as any or Heartstone.

Awesome addition to an amazing fic
This is a group that can actually run the hotel and be detectives
Hopping for more of this excellent fic
Thanks
Comments from author:
Heartstone would have been a good name for it and would have linked the two sections.
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from CPTSkip
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Lovely to read more of one of my favorite stories. Thank you.

Luna and Hogie were two of my favorite HP characters and I'm glad to see your versions are still 'Good Guys'. But if Harry came to the Buffyverse, I am just sorry that Luna didn't come along with Harry. But she just might show up eventually, right? She and Lefty and Righty would probably be great friends and none of the Scoobies 2.0 would steal her belongings and treat her like s**t.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from lokison
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Someone else can read Dogbertcarroll's handwriting? Amazing! Just joking as always love when you post more maybe, with two people that can type for you we can have another full story join "I Wouldn't Exactly Call that Sitting" as Complete maybe "A Boy in the Hand"? Great as always and keep up the good work.
Review By [lokison] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from KrisB
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Yeah! Anohter chapter. I love your stuff and hope this story gets a few more chapters. With your hogwarts part, it is easy seeing another hogwarts chapter just to see the actual ones being found out and also finding out every so many girls actually knew that it wasn't Harry should come out as well.

I was originally thinking that Harry jumped dimensions. WR&H called it nexus which sounds like a cross roads of such. If Harry did jump away from home, I hope that he grabbed his family estate. Hmm, Harry should be Vengeful and hire WR&H to sue all sorts of folks in the wizarding world as well as to move his family wealth there. Even if Harry is in another dimesion WR&H should be able to offer services for him as well as likely to actually leave the place alone after finding out that it has its own guardians.

I like the idea of handy man Harry. I really hope Luna finds him. Oh who are we kidding? Of all people, she will be able to reach him when she wants.

I think that Jack and the girls should do all the suggestions! Hotel, Witness Protection Agency, Bar, and Detective Agency. I can't wait to see who else drops by. The only person from HP that I like is Luna. Noir might be fun if they were trying to escape from their past lives and stumbled to the hotel.

You need Jack and the girls accidently rescuing Fred so she can be their techy R&D person. Than you need some one that is a book worm that likes to read and research in general stuff. Maybe Yomiko Readman?
Comments from author:
No anime characters. They mix poorly with mainline realities. Fred is a good idea tho', get her out early enough and she wouldn't be all that crazy as she was in canon.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from OtteryLexa
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I'd forgotten what was happening, so I had to start again from the beginning ;-)

It's a fun story so far, here's hoping for more.
Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Tjin
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love it, please more
Review By [Tjin] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Jaylynn
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I was almost late for work since I saw you updated this and had to read it. I would love to see the reactions after the viewing of who actually did it and them realizeing they convicted an innocent guy...again. I can see Harry or whatever he is called now, saying 'screw you' if they actually located him to say they found out it was all a mistake and he can come back now.

I am curious to see if any other crossover characters come to stay or visit the hotel.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Interesting chapter, I like it. Glad to see an update.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from BlueEyedJedi
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Me being a Loyal Lunatic, hopes that a certain Blonde Ravenclaw will soon claim her soulmate with the Lightning bolt scar. She can make him forget all the betrayals.

Jack is the Man

TTFN
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from Moontrap
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The last part was perfect! I really enjoy this story, and I can see so much possibility with the hotel that can alter itself like Hogwarts. It could copy any defense shown on TV, within reason, and still look nice doing it. Oh, and you could give it a form like the Hogwarts avatars! Maybe make it a Luna Lovegood lookalike, and have it hook up with Harry? Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from michaelangelo
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So it WAS Harry, I know it seemed a bit obvious but there was also the possibility it could have been Sirius. A couple of questions, will anybody follow Harry? like Luna for example? or other people to bring him back when the truth is revealed? and did Harry hop universes?

Before Xander starts his business will he do anything to get some mad skills? or will he just stumble along using his incredible luck? it's just, I know it's an overused cliche, but since he's lost all his memories but kept his life skills would that include the Halloween skills? at least the basic ones, enough to remember basic weaponry? otherwise trying to get a license for a firearm would be amazingly difficult.

Thanks for the new chapter, my god was I happy to see it this morning.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless chapter!" from banner
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Wonderful update - and such a fun way to start the day. I'm sitting with a smile on my face. Thank you.
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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