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Review of chapter "PART 5" from gaulty
Review:
interesting story, but its been a while since an update, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PART 5" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Okay, the idea behind the story is great. It gives an entire different take on how he becomes Iron Man. The main problem is that that you need to work a bit on the grammar. You also need add some punctuation in certain places. I hope to see more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from MGrim
Review:
The story itself feels crowded, as if the author decided to fill the story with any idea that fell into his head at the time, though that isn't obvious for the first three chapters. The grammar, however, is atrocious, not just the spelling, but also other things like punctuation, vocabulary and other things. It has potential, but fails to live up to it.
Review By [MGrim] • Date [3 May 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from Downery
Review:
Take back everything i said before. Your not even going to let Xander have a little fun before dumping him into a serious relationship.
Review By [Downery] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phase 1 begins" from Downery
Review:
I know your not one of those "XANDER MUST REMAIN A VIRGIN TILL HE FALLS IN LOVE!!!!" idiots since i've read a few of your other stories. But seriously... Xander becomes a billionaire and doesn't enjoy random sex with gold diggers and models? He is a teenager right?

I know Xander isn't really Tony Stark in this story but he's who your modeling Xander for but i kind of get annoyed when Xander is mixed with Tony Stark in any way and still preaches abstinence. Crappy ass YAHF stories that have Xander possessed by one of the biggest playboys in comic-dom and has him avoiding sex like the plague. Arrrggghh.. kay enough ranting. Hope Xander comes to his senses and starts enjoying the perks of being rich.
Review By [Downery] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing, fun.. loved it! Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
04

nice first meeting with Faith

05

ahh yes I would like to see more of Faith in this fic
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phase 1 begins" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. Turning a Negative into a Positive

curious start and I wonder where this will go.

2. Chapter 2

hehe Buff and new weapons *g*

3. Phase 1 begins

hehe Giles in Geek heaven and KARR? oho....
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PART 5" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PART 5" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PART 5" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written fun update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Knight prepares for the Dark Rider" from wraithrune
Review:
Oh my! A new story that I like :) Nice narrative!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Knight prepares for the Dark Rider" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Knight prepares for the Dark Rider" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Love it. Can't wait for more!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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