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Review of story "Back Burner" from TaraLi
Review:
I actually think I kind of like this story, though there are a point or two...

1) While the Council could, in fact, use a spell against Buffy, they were threatening her with *Kendra*. And yes, in a direct hand-to-hand fight, Kendra might be able to do something - but why would Buffy let her get that close? Heat vision, and I have no clue why Superman/Supergirl/etc. never figured out how to use small puffs of super-breath almost like bullets (various ways of puffing would result in anything from bean-bag knock-outs to armor-piercing rounds). In the mean time, Xander is not particularly vulnerable to the Supernatural, and he can handle them far faster than they can possibly react.

On the other hand...

2) What happens when, during this meeting with Nick Fury, they explain to him about a group who uses teen-aged girls with low-meta level powers as "tools" to fight vampires and such, who's only allowed medieval tools to do so? Who's bought or kidnapped from her family, or the family killed to give them an opportunity to get her under their control? I'm thinking Nick might live up to his last name, even.
Comments from author:
Glad that you like this thing that came out of my head.
For point 1. Why does Batman get so close to Supes when they have one of their slugfests? Also you have consider Buffy would be inexperinced in using her abilities if she had made a move no matter how many memories she had.
For point 2 Fury will do whatever he think is best for the big picture of the world. If he got bothered by teen soldiers don't you think he would have shut Xavier down a long time ago? Fury would mainly be pissed about weapons and support more than anything else. Also Fury is WWII veteran like Wolverine and Captain America. He learned war with seeing 15 and up kids going to war. Do you really think it would affect him that much?
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Iceflame
Review:
VERY nice! And a big spit in the eye to the "Xander is God, worship Him NOW" crowd >:).
Comments from author:
Amen brother!
Sorry couldn't resist.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from DarthPayne
Review:
Ooh, this could certainly be continued.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from greenfalcon
Review:
Really hope you get the inspiration to turn thisficlet into a full multiple part story (and hopefully long). And I totally agree on the super Xander weak Buffy stories going around don't know were they got the ideas were Xander could have the disposition to handle that kind of upgrade or Buffy would suddenly be meak and take orders from someone. Was starting to think I was in the minority there
Comments from author:
Glad to know I'm not alone in that.
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Harry Potter II" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work... though Neville reminds me more of Spike than Malfoy does (at least if you take into account pre-vamp personality)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter II" from yrfgd
Review:
OK, so that concept was really interesting, and I sure would like to see more of it. Just some encouragement to expand this story.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter II" from Sandi
Review:
You have the most interesting ideas. Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
glad you liked it
Review By [Sandi] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter II" from deamon
Review:
I ;ole this idea...though Imay like the idea I never agreed with the whole angel/buffy saga. I mean if he became human and became less of a duechebag like half way through the angel series i wouldnt mind. But laying with a vampire is gross. But I would love the idea with xander and dawn or xander and cordelia.
Review By [deamon] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/Super soldier non cross" from IcemanII
Review:
Great work, this ch. is a great story. Keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Ward" from deamon
Review:
You dont seem to like xander that much lol. In like 70 percent of your stories he seems to be marginalized. But besides that there are some stories I would like to see as real stories. I liked the HP/SG1, HP/raised Heroic, Relic Hunters, Power Rangers II, HP/X-men, Shaman King,
Comments from author:
Yeah I know for some reason I never overly enjoyed the Xander character. He had his good qualities and he was loyal to a fault at times but he was also a jerk to people and seemed to jump around on his opinions more often than a hormonal preganet woman at times. Personally i think it was his mouthing off to people without need. If the character had grown some instead of being a mouth, bait and towel boy then I might have enjoyed him. He had potential they just needed to expand on it. Since so many fics like mine are based on Xander i know that's why I get fewer reviews.
Review By [deamon] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Ward" from IcemanII
Review:
Great work, this ch. is a great story. Keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Ward" from JoeB
Review:
I think this was just about my favorite chapter of this series.

My only real complaint was when Willy told Buffy her mom was dead and the flip reaction Buffy had.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Ward" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Cool. You let Buffy grow up, but also let the others grow up too.
Comments from author:
Yeah that's a problem with most fics I think, (mine included) they focus so much on one character growing and changing that all of the other characters seem like whiny brats afterwards. Hopefuly I'll keep that in mind from here on and let it help my writing.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Back Burner" from DesitaniaF
Review:
Oh God! I really like this. I spent an hour looking for this as a one-shot but it was part of your bigger story. :)
Comments from author:
It is being turned into a real story.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
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