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Review of chapter "HP/X-Men I" from Greywizard
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Liked this idea, and I would expect Logan to gut Dumbledore for even suggesting that he would consider betraying (at least by his way of thinking) his teammates/protegees after they told the old fart to piss off.

And teh scene with the aurors threatening the young mutants just screams of a bunch of idiots with extremely suicidal impulses. After having to deal with some of the menaces the X-Men deal with on a weekly basis, they wouldn't be considered more than a simple training exercise. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/X-Men I" from ChiVayne
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"What would your parents think Harry if they knew that you abandoned everyone that they fought for?"
-Given everything that has happened to Harry, they'd probably be applauding.
"You Potter are under arrest and are slated for Death for receiving the kiss." Dawlish said as he held a wand at the boy. "Any resistance will only make it worse for you..."
- Worse then sentenced to the kiss? Does he listen to what he is saying?
I personally don't see Logan taking Dumbledore's deal.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/Raised Heroic" from Neverwillmini
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Cool idea; I hope someone expands on it.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP/X-Men I" from Neverwillmini
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In any negotiations, I think they should demand their needs are met BEFORE they provide any help, after all - they're the honorable ones who will keep their word while the fickle Wizards have proven to hold information back and change their attitudes with every little rumor and made up story. I'd also require them to swear on their magic to provide full disclosure and not hold any information back or do/endorse/allow any word or action which may cause them harm or infringe upon their liberty.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP/Raised Heroic" from (Past Donor)ridert
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while the X-men chapter would make a good story I think the raised heroic chapter with Harry as a member of the arrow clan and Hermione as a Bat would be simply epic. I love the idea and hope that you can flesh it out at some time or that one of the other great authors here decides to adopt it.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP/X-Men I" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Grrr. I hope Wolverine uses his claws on Dumbledore for daring to try and manipulate him like that!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/X-Men I" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/Mystic Knights" from Bobboky
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cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/Sci-Fi" from WolfWriter
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Now THIS chapter has some teeth to it! I love the premise! I only wish that I could do it justice by taking it up myself.

Maybe SOMEone here can do that. HINT, HINT YOU ALL!!!!

I'd love to see this as a story from start to finish, through all seven years.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/Sci-Fi" from IcemanII
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Love it, Jedi Potter. ROFLOL
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP/Sci-Fi" from mybrokenangel
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this story is fantastic!!! love all these one-shots :) is it possible for me too steal a couple of the story ideas and expand them into actual stories? i'll credit you ofcourse.

let me know if thats ok, ta.

love jenna xoxox
Comments from author:
Go ahead and have fun.
Review By [mybrokenangel] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP/SG1" from Genuka
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I might just adopt this one.... it's really good!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Back Burner" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
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I wanted to let you know that this one is the start of a good story... it's been years since I've read Dr. Strange, but I do remember it, and this one could have come from the comics...

I want to see more of it [I don't have time to write it right now, though.]

I hope you continue it one day!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "HP/SG1" from chaggett
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Major Potter, in the RAF the rank would be Squadron Leader or Wing Commander
Review By [chaggett] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP/SG1" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. One correction -

"Major Potter nice to see that you're greeting our new people with such enthusiasm." The American Lt. Col. Said with a smirk since Harry had yet to untangle himself from the grip that Hermione had on him.

O'Neill is a full Colonel, not a Lieutenant Colonel.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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