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Review of story "Back Burner" from trongod
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Like the Crow snippets; but the M.I. was way off. Xander is a geek - so he reads Heinlein and knows how much a Charlie Foxtrot the movie was, so he'd have ensured his bestest bud knew as well. And Willow would no doubt at some point read The Deans magnificent works, especially with his Women As superiors, But Kind Enough to let The Men Imagine They Are Equals belief that IMNSHO permeates his writings.
Review By [trongod] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "HP/TMNT" from Omegaprime
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Well, this is an interesting idea to write about.

Mr Dursley just made a really stupid move.

I like to see how this new Harry would handle the tournament and Voldemort.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "Back Burner" from jormunguard
Review:
You have alot of interesting story ideas here. I definitely like this one about Glory vs Comics. However, you did make one slight error. You have Tigra say that she was the strongest one there. This is incorrect, Tigra would know that Wasp would be able to become stronger than her by increasing size rather than decreasing. Wasp just doesn't like using that side of her powers. Other than that little error a very good idea for a story with some interesting potential side-effects.

EDIT: I truthfully didn't think she had always had the power to grow either I just assumed the costume that was chosen was from after she did, because you had Xander says she could grow or shrink.
Admittedly, I think it would be funny to see that fight especially since at max height she goes up to the near 50 ton range. One good surprise stomp at max height and major ouch. .
Comments from author:
Well to be honest I didn't know Wasp always had the giant size power I thought it was a recent development and I could ignore it. Later found out from some sources that its always been one of her powers. Makes sense since she and Pym have the same source powers.

So in this case I will gladly bow to your greater knowledge of comics.

EDIT: I imagine that such a fight would be a lot like Hercules fighting a giant. Super speed and super strength would give Glory something of an ace up her sleeve though. A giant sized Willow might be to slow to hurt Glory without hurting her teammates. The whole grow while she's under her trick would probably work best.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Real Family" from FireWolfe
Review:
OK this one I want to see.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alien Alliance Multi Cross" from deamon
Review:
I like this idea but I am opposite you lol. I am more a xander person
Review By [deamon] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alien Alliance Multi Cross" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I've Done" from QOShea
Review:
This rocked.

I'd love to see it expanded on.
Review By [QOShea] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I've Done" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet, I wonder what Ino and her clan would make of the mutant telepaths and vice versa.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of story "Back Burner" from FireWolfe
Review:
Ok you so have to write this one it will be a damned fine xover.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from ShalaDakiri
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I like the idea for this, but unless there was either a drastic change in leadership at the SGC or some serious political dealings, I have a hard time swallowing the blatant prejudices of the soldiers accompanying the mutants. Some of the lower ranking ones, maybe, but not someone in a leadership position due to the potential diplomatic problems.

Edit: No, Weir, Shepperd, and the Atlantis side were fine. I just meant that, if the mutants are supposed help defend Atlantis, I can't see O'Neill (or Landry, if that's the timeframe) sending someone they won't respect. If the choice was out of his hands, fine, but it would be nice to know if that was the case.
Comments from author:
You do remember that the Colonel was only around for the defense of Atlantis and then Weir had Sheppard promoted so that he could continue as CO right? Unless you think that Weir is going to be prejiduce that is.

EDIT: I was thinking that it would have been orders from the politicians that want a quick and easy way out of a problem. Toss them into another galaxy gets them out of the way don't you think?
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Technically speaking, a dormant gene that is triggered by an outside force or a genetic complex or change introduced into someone classifies them as a mutate. The Fantastic Four, in their own universe, stand as a prime example. So does Spiderman when the Mar Well Bull(crap)pen isn't hinking about with his backstory.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
I gotta admit that I like most of the premise for this. Not sure that Magneto would be okay with being sent to what basically sounds like a containment center, but other than that, very cool idea.
Comments from author:
You make it soundlike they would have a choice in the matter
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "What I've Done" from CaptainCaliene
Review:
I sooo would love to see you continue with the 'Predator: Hunted?' Storyline. Even mah Husband read through it and he agreed that this would be a definate winning storyline - he even laughed at the banter between the characters, which is hard to do at times when meshing together multiple realities, and the characters from said realities.

I really do hope that this storyline is continued at some point as it is so far one of the better ones you have posted in this Story Block you named "Back Burner".

Hope to read some more of your exquisit ideas soon.
Comments from author:
Experimenting with it at the moment.
Review By [CaptainCaliene] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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