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Review of chapter "HP Baslisk Venom" from QOShea
Review:
Interesting take on it.
Review By [QOShea] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP Baslisk Venom" from Jearom
Review:
An interesting premise, I'd be interested in seeing this expanded more.

There is a plausible reason for why the scar-horcrux wasn't destroyed, and that is that the venom did not reach his brain before Fawkes' tears neutralized it. If the venom had enough time to reach his head, Harry would likely have died before the tears could help him.
Comments from author:
Nice reasoning, however how long would take the blood to reach multiple points in his body from getting bitten after such an adrenaline rush of fighting a giant snake in that time he had to drop the sword then fall down then tell fawkes he's great. Blood circulates through the average human body while at rest in one minute while under the conditions Harry was under it would have been much less.
Review By [Jearom] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP III Jaded Heroes" from ChiVayne
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I liked this one a lot. Good job.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP III Jaded Heroes" from Raider
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this one, I eagerly look forward to reading a full story of.
Review By [Raider] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Animal Avatars/Totems: Non or Minor Marvel Crosss" from twilightwanderer
Review:
If you don't mind, I was wondering how you selected which animal went with which Scooby. Was it random, semi-random, based on personality, coolness, etc. or what? I'm just curious.
Comments from author:
Just went with some of my favorite animals mainly. I also thought of creatures that went somewhat with the personalities and the various kung fu styles. Monkey style bear style the usual.
Review By [twilightwanderer] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naruto" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Very good read. Other then calling the shadow stuff a blood line, you did very good, IMO, in the Narutoverse. The Narus working of shadows in just a ninja art that is passed down through their family and not a blood line. And like I said, other then that, great job. Would not mind see a full story on this one.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of story "Back Burner" from tannin
Review:
LOL

Please (lol) continue (lol) this (lol) one (lol) Please????

LOL
Comments from author:
Someone has requested to take their own stab at it.
Review By [tannin] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from RubyPaladin
Review:
I like this idea that you have and I noticed the remarks you made. I'm sorry I annoyed you.
Comments from author:
As much as your character choice annoys me I have to say that your being original with how you do it and love that you've got some real character development in your tale. Hey update your F4 story and we'll call it even. I'm curious who got the slayer essence X-23 or Shadowcat. I also want to see how else that one goes. If I offended you and your muse I apologize as well your story is a good play on merging the 3 worlds together.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Raider
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this one, I very dearly hope gets made into a full story some day.
Review By [Raider] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from TaraLi
Review:
I actually think I kind of like this story, though there are a point or two...

1) While the Council could, in fact, use a spell against Buffy, they were threatening her with *Kendra*. And yes, in a direct hand-to-hand fight, Kendra might be able to do something - but why would Buffy let her get that close? Heat vision, and I have no clue why Superman/Supergirl/etc. never figured out how to use small puffs of super-breath almost like bullets (various ways of puffing would result in anything from bean-bag knock-outs to armor-piercing rounds). In the mean time, Xander is not particularly vulnerable to the Supernatural, and he can handle them far faster than they can possibly react.

On the other hand...

2) What happens when, during this meeting with Nick Fury, they explain to him about a group who uses teen-aged girls with low-meta level powers as "tools" to fight vampires and such, who's only allowed medieval tools to do so? Who's bought or kidnapped from her family, or the family killed to give them an opportunity to get her under their control? I'm thinking Nick might live up to his last name, even.
Comments from author:
Glad that you like this thing that came out of my head.
For point 1. Why does Batman get so close to Supes when they have one of their slugfests? Also you have consider Buffy would be inexperinced in using her abilities if she had made a move no matter how many memories she had.
For point 2 Fury will do whatever he think is best for the big picture of the world. If he got bothered by teen soldiers don't you think he would have shut Xavier down a long time ago? Fury would mainly be pissed about weapons and support more than anything else. Also Fury is WWII veteran like Wolverine and Captain America. He learned war with seeing 15 and up kids going to war. Do you really think it would affect him that much?
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Iceflame
Review:
VERY nice! And a big spit in the eye to the "Xander is God, worship Him NOW" crowd >:).
Comments from author:
Amen brother!
Sorry couldn't resist.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from DarthPayne
Review:
Ooh, this could certainly be continued.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from greenfalcon
Review:
Really hope you get the inspiration to turn thisficlet into a full multiple part story (and hopefully long). And I totally agree on the super Xander weak Buffy stories going around don't know were they got the ideas were Xander could have the disposition to handle that kind of upgrade or Buffy would suddenly be meak and take orders from someone. Was starting to think I was in the minority there
Comments from author:
Glad to know I'm not alone in that.
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Harry Potter II" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work... though Neville reminds me more of Spike than Malfoy does (at least if you take into account pre-vamp personality)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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