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Review of chapter "What I've Done" from Ramenth
Review:
This is an interesting collection, although I think many of the ones towards the front seem more polished than more recent ones. Still, a great read over all.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "F4SG1BTVS" from djhardim
Review:
Great beginning. A few corrections

One of the suits nodded in agreement as a projector was brought into the room and the lights dimmed. "SG1 is a classified team that does work that you are most assuredly not cleared for so you will have to just accept what we are showing you and try and keep your curiosity in check." The man said in a manner that offered no chance for argument. "The first up is team leader of SG1. '''''Lieutenant Colonel''''' Jack O'Neill, he has had his IQ jump several hundred if not a thousand points upward

Jack O'Neill is a full Colonel, not a Lieutenant Colonel.


"Finally we have the last member of the that was affected permanently by your spell. The SGC was trying to lure the girl into service before this incident. According to our files she's a civilian consultant and combat specialist for another operation. Now that this has happened they'll probably do just about anything to get her to come and work for them though since the current force seems to have control of the situation and there are others that can handle her duties. She dressed as Carol Danvers, AKA: War Bird or ''''''Miss Marvel'''''''.

The character's name is Ms. Marvel.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sg1 IV: The Trust" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
not terrible but I have a very hard time believing that Willow of all people would fall under Ba'als power.
Comments from author:
Yeah but if Willow was able to get away without becoming affected she'd just wave her hands and make Ba'al into a harmless worm. She'd have to be taken out of play for their to be story.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vengance" from Valandar
Review:
The only problem with the latest chapter is that two of the three have powers dependant on WILLINGLY signing their souls away, which Xander and Buffy didn't do. And Willow doesn't fit the requirements of being a Crow, either. So odds are they'd be able to easily overcome D'Hoffryn's control, despite the power of the Wish, simply because the powers have already been warped enough to fit them as it is.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Back Burner" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
*snickers* I liked the snippit too - I agree, it's got potential...! I like the plot bunny exhibit, it's fun to see someone else's nibbling at the cages!

T
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Back Burner" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Anubis certainly picked the wrong planet to attack.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "SG1/NID" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Yikes! Kinda sucks for the Scoobies and the SGC to be on opposite sides. Just hope that they (meaning the Scoobies) figure out it out before too many good guys get hurt or killed.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP Marvel Assassins (WIP)" from IcemanII
Review:
Great work, this ch. is a great story. Keep up the good work
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP Marvel Assassins (WIP)" from oldgirllost
Review:
So ---- You did say you had more of this done--- I would dearly love to read it

This is especially good -- although I am enjoying the rest of 'Back Burner"

Thanks
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "HP Marvel Assassins (WIP)" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I think some one did this concept a couple of years ago. With the same costumes (Atleast for Harry and Ron, I suspect Hermoine, and the others also had the same costumes.) The story collasped, when the scoobies decided to go to England to help their new friends.

Peace
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP Marvel Assassins (WIP)" from Neverwillmini
Review:
I like the two HP crossovers and would really like to see the HP Marvel Assassins idea of an appropriate 'reward' for Ethan's Halloween gift!
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mighty Morphing Power Rangers I" from djhardim
Review:
Good.

Just so you know, as of 05/12/2010, Saban Brands (a company started by Saban Capital Group) bought back the Power Rangers franchise from Disney.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saban_Capital_Group
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "HP Marvel Assassins (WIP)" from djhardim
Review:
Great. One correction - It's horcrux rather than horux.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dark Angel" from war
Review:
good story.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Starship Troopers" from war
Review:
with the tech in that verse the Scoobs are gonna have some nice toys to play with.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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