Ouch. A little harsh of Fury, but hopefully his motives were good - at least where Buffy's concerned. Lots of cool stuff in this bunny, but who are the two people at the end?!
Comments from author:
The idea/thought is that the two would be Buffy and Cap. In the ultimate verse the super soldier serum is starting to weaken after so many years. He had to take a steriod supplement before most major battles from what I understood. My thought is that the blood of a slayer and the blood of cap would supercharge each other giving you a near Spidey effect on both of them as far as basic physical abilities go.
Hi Texanwookie - reviewing you here at TTh for a change... You *know* I'm all about the Batman of course - loved the bunny here; if you ever get the chance - let this one reproduce! :) Great snippit, logical progression and a blast to read!
Tracey
PS - If you ever get the chance, post the "Persistence" set here - I have recommended it to anyone who is a TTH fan!
Review By [TraceyC] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
How come the first part of the story came up twice?
Other than that, I really like it. Buffy training with the Bat Family.
If, and I do mean if, the Council ever finds out that Buffy is Sineya, and that she has received training from someone other than her Watcher (shudder!), they are going to have a collective conniption fit to end all conniption fits.
Should be real fun to read! *Snicker*
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Not Rated
You repeated the first part of the story, but other than that *two thumbs up!* for a great idea. Definitely like the idea of Buffy becoming part of the Batclan.
Oh, this one needs to become a story - if only so Buffy and Xander can smack Jack for that last line. Or even better, they save his snarky a**, and he has to apologize.
TraceyC
