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Review of chapter "Holidays and Celebrations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nice chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holidays and Celebrations" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Awesome chapter! So much happened within it. Seriously can't wait to see what she had and what you name the baby. As well as her getting back into slaying, which would bring her right back into Batman's line of sight, I'm thinking. Just my thoughts. Waiting for more.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from Gideon
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I guess Donna would be a very good source of info on female warriors, and keeping an eye on wherever the current Slayer is stationed only makes sense. Pity that Dick does not even know the right questions to ask. Or maybe it is a good thing because him finding out anything about Buffy will probably only be bad.
As for the middle bit, I shudder to think what Harley might do if she can't help out her clown. Best case she might get a case of bat envy but I don't think Batman will ever trust her with the location of his cave!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Hmmm... Interesting, but I do have a question...

Buffy hasn't died... the Hyena incident was before things with the Master and Buffy's drowning...

Soooo how are there rumors of Kendra's calling? After-all, did you not establish that Xander's Ghost is empowering Aura to give the impression that the Slayer is still on the Hellmouth?
Comments from author:
You'll have to read the companion story to this one, "It's Not Him", once my muse for it starts cooperating again. All will be explained there, though you are the first one to bring up the question. I was beginning to wonder if I'd been too subtle with that little tidbit.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from Greywizard
Review:
As usual, I'm enjoying this story a great deal, man. ;-)

I hope Dick learns that emulating Bruce's 'don't tell anyone more than the absolute minimum amount of information you have to tell them' attitude will come around and bite you in the ass, eventually. Had he mentioned what he really was looking for to Donna, he would have learned some invaluable information. As it is, he ended up thinking that he was on a wild goose chase. ;-)

If Harley is looking to come up with some grand gesture to make Mr. J look favorably on her again, and decides that such a gesture needs to involve Anne or Janice, she might not live long enough to learn just how huge a mistake that would be. Oh well, Darwin will prove his point again. ;-)

Great job, buddy. ;-)
Comments from author:
True, he might have gotten some additional info from Donna but he still would have had to get passed the 'only one at a time' aspect of The Chosen. Of course he and Bats might try and figure out a way for there to be more than one at a time should they follow Sherlock's credo of 'After eliminating all other possibilities, the one that is left, regardless of how outlandish, is the correct answer'. The California connection would definitely made them lean more towards Anne being The Chosen. Or A Chosen in the case that there really were more than one.

Glad you are liking the story.

Harley shouldn't be too much of a concern for a while as she learns to walk again and deals with various problems having to do with her lung being pierced by a dusty antique crossbow bolt. But should she do something stupid, thus making even Harmony look like a genius, her time to learn something from that mistake will be very, very short.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Poor, poor Dick! So close! Ouch. Well, that'll throw Batman and Robin off their trail for a while, at least. Can't wait to see what happens when he finds out he was on the right track after all, though! Looking forward to the next chapter. ^.^

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from war
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Interesting news on Harley. If the Joker has abandoned her i wonder what she's gonna do with her life?

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Goes On" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good to see more... felt too short! I like how Dick didn't know what questions he should be asking and Donna didn't feel the need to volunteer information.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to School" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see Anne making some friends - cheerleaders even! Dick's book seems interesting - he better hope that Anne doesn't find out he has it though :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back to School" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back to School" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Another great update! Looking forward to seeing what Dick learns from that book. ^.^Love it and waiting for more!

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to School" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter, and the book that Dick is reading might be of interest to Buffy, if she got her hands on it. Nice to see things progressing over a period of time.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why can't we be friends?" from AbigaelRose
Review:
lovely chapter.
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why can't we be friends?" from justapiranha
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I am really enjoying what you are doing with this fic.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why can't we be friends?" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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