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Review of chapter "Chapter 09" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 09" from SCIfilover
Review:
So far Razial not much has happened, I mean you have a plot point here you can abuse to your hearts content but you don't. I mean both God Emperors (the warhammer one who I shal all godem and the other Paul) ruled massive empires and either personally killed or ordered billions upon billions upon billions killed. And you don't take advantage of bringing them to buffyverse to create tension like having Willow call them Hitlers because they did acts like hitler against the jews. Buffy, who we all know sees the world as black and white except when it comes to her vampire lovers, not being angry against them or Giles questioning them about their action in their home universes.

You don't show a situation where either Emperors size and questions each others decisions.
Seeing as both Emperors did heinous acts like godem's act of absolute xenociding or having biological children and not caring about them at all.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 09" from DarthPayne
Review:
Very nice.

Btw, if you're in need of somewhat original ship designs, KavinVeldar on Deviant Art has a lot of good ones.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CPTSkip
Review:
I think it has been a while since I told you how much I am enjoying your story. I just finished rereading your whole story and look forward to reading more. Please keep up the excellent work.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from Eureka
Review:
Is Lotho's Childe going to be waiting for them outside?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Eureka
Review:
More please....
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another well written update with especially welcome detail about Merrick.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Vilkath
Review:
Eh can't say I really care for Pike, then again Buffy always over reacts to old friends more than current friends. Like the chapter pointed out Pike has a lot in common with Xander, yet she dated and liked Pike but shuns and almost ignores Xander later on. Buffy always had the worst choice in boyfriends frankly.

Still I would have to say Joyce wouldn't be much of a mother, no matter how desperate Pike was for a place to live, if she really considered renting a room out to her daughters Ex Boyfriend. Putting your teenage daughters ex-boyfriend, whom she really seems to be crushing on again, in the same house? Only an idiot parent would do such a thing.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Frardowin
Review:
I have to say you hit a home run with this story.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from mfung
Review:
Yay, Pike is here!!! I've always wished that he and Buffy had worked out!!! I hope the situation with Paul is going to be fine. It was sad what happened to him in the Dune series, and now Chani can't be here for him. I hope the others can become his new emotional rock.
Review By [mfung] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SCIfilover
Review:
Good, so far. I am still reading this story because as i already said you are one of my favorite authors. What i really want to see though is the confrontation of the two emperors- Paul vs God-emperor not necessarily fighting but about who was the greater or more powerful emperor and who ruled better.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from darthridian
Review:
nice addition mate, looks like things are about to heat up in sunny california. :)
Review By [darthridian] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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