Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written set-up although it will be interesting to see how many keep the powers and/or knowledge from their possessors. Looking forward to developments. Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zafaran
Oh, this is a dandy beginning. I like YAHFs anyway, and this looks like it has the potential for being one of the really good ones. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran email@example.com
Review By [zafaran
] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated