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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and humorous demonstration.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Liking it so far.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
Review:
If only they'd been that organized before "Chosen"... and meanwhile Willow is the most dangerous one of them. So--Faith is one of the 4 'held back just in case' ? Makes sense, she's at Buffy's level or close to it.
Still, at this point they don't have anything to do, no supernatural threats in this world...
Comments from author:
This take place a couple of months after 'Chosen', I figured that Buffy and Giles would work hard at instilling as much discipline as they could. If nothing else the threat of, "Do you want to end up on someone vivisection table?" Would probably instill it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JoeDineen
Review:
Niice, what about Willow, or is that a shot Buffy is still keeping in her locker?
Comments from author:
Pretty much, it's always good to have a surprise or two tucked away.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Frakking cool update. Man, I wish you could have shown us this update on the Big Screen. Lol!

Edit: If you go for a costume theme for all the Slayers, how about cards? Willow would of course be the Red Queen of Hearts. Faith could be the Queen of Spades and Buffy the Queen of Clubs. Then the Mini-Slayers could be either Spades or Clubs with their rank given by how high their number is.
Comments from author:
I don't think I've ever really seen any of the Scoobies interested in card games. I can't really seeing them gloming onto that kind of theme. Thanks for the idea though.

The problem with showing it on the big screen though is the same reason I can do it in a story, I don't have to worry about a special effects budget.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Hope I don't disappoint.
Review By [war] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really like your story. It got me thinking about costumes and super-names for the Slayers and Mini-Slayers. I just wonder what Edna could create with black bullet proof leather for Faith. Or should she be called Leather Queen? Or maybe Shadow Bitch? Lol! I see Buffy more in a pastel cheerleader's costume. She could be Valleygirl or Slayerwoman. Lol!
Comments from author:
Cheerleader? Ah, no. Comming up with costumes for everyone is going to be fun, espically with Finding Home, a City of Heroes cross I have two sets of costumes to come up with.

Would it be cheating to duplicate?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
Review:
They'll be disappointed to find that "no capes" is one of the superhero rules. Too bad Spike didn't make it, imagine being the only vampire in the world. Got to wonder if any other portals have opened/will open & if anyone else will come through. I could see Angel & his gang coming through after "NFA"...
Comments from author:
Not quite what I have planned, but you are heading in the right direction.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SamDragon
Review:
A bunch of young superheroes needing costumes.I think a certain clothing designer will be thrilled. :)
Comments from author:
Exstatic.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JTM
Review:
Edna will be thrilled at all the new supers she'll get to outfit especially since they don't really have preexisting secret identities, and she'll be create their look from scratch.
Comments from author:
Truthfully one of the big problems plotting this out. Do the Slayers get a uniform of sorts, or does each one get to be individual?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JTM] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cute! So What year is it?
Comments from author:
Mid Seventies.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maddog
Review:
I liked the first chapter and the second is a strong continuation of the story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll do my best.
Review By [maddog] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from slmncpm
Review:
i like! i hope you continue this soon. *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
As I can.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from batzulger
Review:
Neat!
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [batzulger] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Shaky start, but it promises to be entertaining.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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