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Review of chapter "Part 7 Wake Up Call" from Alyspins
Review:
This story looks like it could be really interesting. It is the first one I have read where Cassie is "family" of someone in the Scooby gang. I'm not sure I like the whole Giles/Buffy, but they are both of age and you seem to be doing a good job making it seem realistic, so I'll go with it for now. So far so good, keep up the good writing please!:)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I appreciate the support. I know it is a different take on a theme and that was kind of the whole point. Anyway I will do my best to keep it interesting.

Fire
Review By [Alyspins] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Wake Up Call" from LNR
Review:
WOOT! MORE please!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I am working on this and serveral other stories. I am glad you have enjoyed this.

Fire
Review By [LNR] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 7 Wake Up Call" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Had to laugh at this:

Maybe she was finally inheriting some of Buffy’s grace. She slipped and landed on her backside with a thump. Ok, maybe not.

Poor Dawnie. Then on top of all that, she sees her sister kissing her father-figure first thing in the morning. Who's pinching themselves to see if they're still sleeping?
Comments from author:
I am so happy my attempt at humor worked. I enjoyed that line a lot. Yep it could be a bit of a shock walking in on Buffy and Giles. It was a fun couple of scenes to write. Thanks for the review I am happy it is slightly entertaining.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Wake Up Call" from Cmiller
Review:
hehe...I liked that and I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you like it.

Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Wake Up Call" from mistborn
Review:
Great, looking forward to lots more chapters
Comments from author:
Thank you,
It may be a few days before I can write again then it has to go off to the beta. Who rocks. Then it has to be reread and posted. It may be a week or so unless I get lucky.

Fire
Review By [mistborn] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dark News" from clei
Review:
The Lord of Ashmyre smiled as he finally had the perfect revenge on the slayer and watcher. “I think this will be my finest wish. I end a champion and force others into conflict. Hmmm, I may have to save the White witch to allow for the mother figure. That should not be too great of a help for the side of good if I act with care. I shall simply move the bullet over. A wound in the shoulder will do nicely. The Red witch will still lose control and kill the mortal and still go dark. She may recover a little faster but, this will not change much. The pain this wish will cause far outweighs the lack of grief the red witch will feel. The bonus is I will cause pain to two sets of champions. Yes, saving the white witch is a fair trade off.”
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This is *EVIL*? Sounds more like whoever this guy is, he's doing the world a *HUGE* favor by screwing with the plans of the utter assholes otherwise known as the PTB.

Too bad it doesn't seem like he was able to save Cordy.
Comments from author:
OK semi bad thing lol. Not sure about cordy. We will see.
Review By [clei] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 6 Remembering" from spk
Review:
Great story! So glad you decided to answer the challenge. Love the way you're building the relationship between Buffy & Giles. Nice twist with President Hayes being a Watcher. Can't wait to see the meeting with the President and with SG-1. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks,
When I made the challenge it was because the idea would not leave me alone. It was screaming to be written even though I do not have time for a new fic. Oh well we give it a go and see what happens. I am glad it seems interesting so far.

Fire
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good crossover chapter. Good writing style here, too.
Comments from author:
Thanks, the help I am getting from my beta is making it flow better I thnk. I can be choppy if someone does not call me on it. Anyway I am glad you like it so far.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good explanation of the bond, but I still feel it is a little over the top and unncessary for you to create an adult Buffy with Giles relationship. And no, in my opinion, Giles was wise enough to know that 16-year old Buffy was not his equal - - emotionally or as an adult, even if she was equal to him in power and responsibility/calling. 19-year old Buffy is a different case all together.

Although you explain that the incident with Janet caused the break-through, the growth of Buffy and Giles as a couple or even a "bonded" slayer and watcher could have been its own story in a related series of stories.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. I know the bond seems quick. Their relationship will develop a bit more slowly. The bond merely prevents an angry Buffy from running off before they have time to adjust and repair the damage the last year has caused. I may add snippets later. Right now however I want to work on the main storyline. I am currently editing this piece because Genuka was kind enough to beta it for me. So it may make a little more since now. Anyway I am glad you took the time to read this and review. It helps me learn to write more fluidly.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from aveave
Review:
This is a great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you I am working on it.
Fire
Review By [aveave] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from CindyB
Review:
Very interesting update. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [CindyB] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from Genuka
Review:
Aside from one sequence it was perfect! Here's the corrections:

You deserve a loving mother who can give you a real family. I have not really done that for you. I wish that there were a hundreds slayers and witches so you could be safe from the Goa'uld and free of the NID. So they could help keep the world safe.”

“Janet, oh dear lord no.” Rupert said(whispered maybe?) as he heard a voice call “Wish Granted.”
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I appreciate the help.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from Cmiller
Review:
I like this story and I do look forward to more.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from Malu
Review:
Very nice story so far! A small nitpick: D'Hoffryn rules over a hell dimension known as Arashmahaar.
Comments from author:
Never said it was D'Hoffryn but the point is wel made. I tried to sound it out. Spelling is so not my strong point.

Fire
Review By [Malu] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from twlight
Review:
Just so I understand this correctly, most of this chapter was a flashback correct? I love that because of this wish Tara lives but what else was changed? I am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yes it was. I suppose I should label it that way. I fix it later tonight. Thanks for pointing it out and the review.

Fire
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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