I really like the story so far and I look forward to it continueing.
I do believe that you are incorect with Giles title. Rupert Giles xth baron/earl/baronet xxxxx KG OBE PHD.
For example one famous figure's official title was Peter Alexander Rupert Carington, 6th Baron Carrington KG, GCMG, CH, MC, PC, DL
Just an idea but if you send Buffy or Scooby's with Giles for moral support have some of the SGC soldiers at the funeral be ex initiative. Hammond will get confused at the high level of respect shown by his people to this stranger.
Comments from author:
I will have to look up the title. I thought I got it right but it has been a while since I played with them. Anyway I am glad you liked the story. The title is a minor part really.
I was hesitant about this story at first but now that I have read your newest chapters, I can hardly wait to see how you develop Buffy and Giles' relationship. I am a huge fan of B/G. I am so going to recommend this story. Keep up the excellent work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I appreciate the recommend. I will try to keep it interesting.
Fire
Review By [fyretyger] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Being able to see through somebody else's eyes sure would help when you aren't sure of their feelings. So...can Giles feel Buffy's emotions as well? Can he feel that she loves him back?
Comments from author:
Now that will be telling. :) I will more then likely have it go both ways. Not sure yet.
I love this fic! I've never really enjoyed Giles/Buffy, but I like how you used the Watcher/Slayer bond to make it work and not seem creepy :D I can't wait to see SG-1's reaction to Giles and his makeshift family! Please update again soon! Is Connor going to show up at some point?
Comments from author:
I am glad you like it. I cannot take credit for the bond. I found that in another fic someplace. I would credit it if I remembered who did it first. As to Connor I am not sure. I origionally had it in the challenge but we will see. Thannk you for the review.
Nice chapter, although the giant monster of a paragraph towards the end was a pit off-putting. I'd suggest splitting it up into a couple of separate paragraphs instead of just one large one, to make it easier to read.
Not much to comment on plot-wise, since we're only three chapters in, but it's interesting so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. It will likely be a bit of a slow start but it will have action eventually.
Fire
Review By [Katricia] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
More, more, more, please. This is an interesting beginning, and I can't wait to find out what happens in the Watcher/General face-off. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Comments from author:
It should be interesting. The thing is both care for Cassie so she will be protected. It might be a challenge at first but both sides honestly have her best interest at heart. Fire
Since you are answering your own challenge, I am looking forward to which story-branch choices you make based on the challenge. You might want to rephrase your summary as about the story rather than about the challenge.
Comments from author:
Yep, I had to do it. The idea was bugging me. I made it a challenge to try to get it off my mind but it did not work. So, here goes nothing. I hope it entertains.
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Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Thanks, More will come as time allows. It will be posted on this site and others. However, I have a lot of WIP and summer classes so it may not be as quick as the others. Fire
Review By [LNR] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I see you are responding to your own Challenge. I really like BtVS/SG1 xovers, and this with Giles as the relative is a rare and intriguing variant. I am keenly looking forward to the next installment. I think General Hammond's phone call from the President (ie what the President says or hints at) will cause him quite some puzzlement!
Comments from author:
The call is intended to do just that. I had to give Giles a little power in the dynamic as he will be facing off against the General and SG-1. I am glad the idea intrests you.
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Review By [Xovervore] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated