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Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from twlight
Review:
Just so I understand this correctly, most of this chapter was a flashback correct? I love that because of this wish Tara lives but what else was changed? I am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yes it was. I suppose I should label it that way. I fix it later tonight. Thanks for pointing it out and the review.

Fire
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. The whole bond idea is rather cool. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thanks it ( The bond)was supposed to be a way to explain their reconnection and Buffy's sudden need to help and protect Giles.

Fire
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from Genuka
Review:
That was great! Minor, grammar but the next one you do just send me it to beta and I'll fix it. It was the perfect meeting of the minds and reconciliation.
Comments from author:
I will I just did not see to many errors in this one. Anyway thanks for the offer. I work on a chapter to send you tonight after work.

Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from Bobboky
Review:
strange to have Buffy and Giles start in a relationship in a fic... for some reason it is not nearly so weird when they are already together or get together in the background...

nice work though, nice job on the writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I know it seems a little strange but the idea can work if you let it. I hope this fic continues to amuse you.

Fire
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from Twoboots
Review:
I am starting to suspect you are a Buffy/Giles shipper. :) Good story so far.
Comments from author:
I love Buffy with a strong male character. I do agree with Spike assessment however. Buffy does like a little dark in her men. It is the reason Riley never had a chance or Xander in the begining. They were to good and to light. Buffy needed someone who had faced their own demons as it were. Spike or Giles in the series are her best matches. I am Buffy/Giles in many ways. I think it is mostly because he was just so damned cute in that tweed and then Ripper off set it so nicely. The kind of man you could take home to mum but, would never, ever bore you. Rupert is the kind of man who would treat Buffy like a Lady when she wants it but like a slayer when she needed it. That had to be a perfect combination to my mind.
Thanks for the review.

Fire
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four Saved Bond" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Stupid PTBs and their idiotic manipulations! Who knows how much pain and suffering would have been saved if Buffy and Giles had been allowed to bond without Angel's interference.
Comments from author:
I always thought it was stupid of the PTB to try to hook up Angel and Buffy. It was a disaster waiting to happen.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from twlight
Review:
Well this last chapter is rather interesting, having Buffy see Giles' memories is new and different I think I like it. I am looking forward to how the SG-1 team reacts to both Buffy and Giles. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I am happy it amused you. More will come when I can. Unfortuately I have homework this weekend and work. So, it may be a while before I add more then a chapter or two to this or my other fics. I have a lot that need attention. To bad I cannot do this as a living. :) Of course if I was that good I would not do fanfic lol.

Fire
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Genuka
Review:
This is great! I'd love to see more. I'll even be your beta if you want! I can't beta my own stuff but I can beta other peoples just because it's not mine. I'm glad you followed up on this one. I was going to follow up on it my self when life let me and answer this challenge for you. Beta or no beta this is great! Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I love that.
Send me your email on a pm and I send the next parts to you when I have it ready.

Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
I was with you up to A: Tara being alive, and, B the Oogy lover relationship that is kinda so OOC, I could buy Tara's ressurection by Buddha easier than this concept. It seems you're just grooming an instant lioness of a mother-figure for Cassie. Was loving it up until those.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from CindyB
Review:
Excellent story idea! I love BtVS/SG:1 crossovers almost as much as I love B/G. :) Having Giles be the one related to a member of SG:1 is unusual, but interesting. I also like that you have President Hayes as belonging to the Council.

I do agree with one of your earlier reviewers that having some ex-Initiative soldiers would be very cool. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Connections" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
"Lord Sir Dr. Rupert Giles"? You have to be kidding.
Comments from author:
When you consider what the council was it is almost logical. Anyway it just a minor plot point.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from PSchri
Review:
Hi,

very interesting story. I have not thought of such a cross-over before, I look forward to seeing how you imagine it. I'm interested to see how much you will meld Janet and Giles' worlds. Also, did Janet really never mention to anyone (even her friend Sam) that she has someone else in mind as a guardian for Cassie?

I have two suggestions: first, update with longer chapters, rather than updating twice in one day. It can be very annoying, for many people, to read only 600 words on one page. It's okay to take a week (or even a month) to update, as long as the chapters are juicy and worthwile.

Secondly, try to not write such long paragraphs. The information and flow in your paragraphs is good, but it is very dense to read, so break it up and put in more spaces.

All in all, I am excited to see where you will go. Thank-you for sharing your writing with us.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the advice and I will try to keep it in mind. Generally my chapters are about 1,000 to 1,500 words or so.

I will try to keep in mind the suggestions about chapter lengths and paragraph lengths as well. No promises but I will try. I appreciate the adivce.

Thanks,

Fire
Review By [PSchri] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
While I don't mind an adult Buffy with Giles, I'm a little confused about a full-reveal info dump complete with emotions. Even if Giles was always an empath but shielding it, this is a bit counter productive to storytelling.
Comments from author:
Yes it was a quick and easy way to give Buffy a kick in the head. She was being closed to Giles and his needs. This method made it instant and allows her empathy. It will make sense eventually.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from naraic
Review:
I really like the story so far and I look forward to it continueing.

I do believe that you are incorect with Giles title. Rupert Giles xth baron/earl/baronet xxxxx KG OBE PHD.

For example one famous figure's official title was Peter Alexander Rupert Carington, 6th Baron Carrington KG, GCMG, CH, MC, PC, DL

Just an idea but if you send Buffy or Scooby's with Giles for moral support have some of the SGC soldiers at the funeral be ex initiative. Hammond will get confused at the high level of respect shown by his people to this stranger.
Comments from author:
I will have to look up the title. I thought I got it right but it has been a while since I played with them. Anyway I am glad you liked the story. The title is a minor part really.

Fire
Review By [naraic] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from fyretyger
Review:
I was hesitant about this story at first but now that I have read your newest chapters, I can hardly wait to see how you develop Buffy and Giles' relationship. I am a huge fan of B/G. I am so going to recommend this story. Keep up the excellent work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I appreciate the recommend. I will try to keep it interesting.

Fire
Review By [fyretyger] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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