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Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from banditdoz
Review:
hehehe I always like it when the royalty comes in and kicks a little but :D
Comments from author:
Thank you. I once read that the King had a major part to play in WWII acting as an advisor to Churchill and the other leaders. So it seemed only natural that they would have a more direct role. For the purposes of this story they are magical and powerful. I honestly believe they serve GB with honor and hard work for the most part. SO making them heros seems only fair and its intended to show respect and honor not to belittle and I hope most take it in that way.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from locard
Review:
Another great chapter and I am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks I am workng on it. I have started the next part but it maybe a bit before it is posted. I am fighting writers block again. Its rather annoying.
I appreciate the review and support a lot it does inspire me to keep at it.
Fire
Review By [locard] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 48 talking it out part 1" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Hi FireWolfe, I'm enjoying this but you do have one error that is driving me nuts...

The President is the 'Commander-In-Chief' not the commander and chief... note the capitalizations, hyphenations and the replacement of 'and' with 'In'. I usually don't pick nits, but you use the phrase fairly often and because of that it became a bit grating.
Comments from author:
Ill try thanks for the review
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 48 talking it out part 1" from immortalsilence
Review:
thanks wicked as usual , more when you can pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five The Power of a Wish" from Wise
Review:
"In Colorado, Cassandra Frazier woke and rolled out of bed. She wanted her mother but, knew that was not going to happen. She already missed Janet so deeply. How could she lose another parent? It wasn't fair. She had lost her whole world and now she was alone again."

No. Not like this. Not 'she wanted her mother, but knew that was not going to happen.' Not 'it wasn't fair.' As cliched as it sounds, you need to show, not tell. Let her wake up, roll out of bed and call out for her mom, with the oppressive, empty silence of the house her only answer. Let us feel Janet's absence. Show us the empty hole in Cassie Frasier's life that her mother used to fill. Let her eyes burn with unshed tears, and be afraid to give voice to that traitorous thought that comes again and again, like a relentless tide sending neverending waves of self pity to break against the rocks of her grief: 'Alone again.' Let her seek refuge in the comfortable numbness that comes when you've cried yourself to exhaustion. Let her grief grieve the reader, and above all, let it be a specific thing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [Wise] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 47 Surprising Messages" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done so far with the story and I am already looking forward to read any new chapters you might get inspired to add to it.


"Now he was still Edmund but he went by Darius Edmund Giles Black a distant cousin."

I wonder why I starts thinking of Harry Potter when I sees the Edmunds new alias?

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Princess Cake::

# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #
"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #

PS. I like the Carbon Creek stories you have posted on FF.net
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 47 Surprising Messages" from Eureka
Review:
thank you for the update! so they are going back to the Giles' at least for now?
Comments from author:
We will see what happens.
I added a bit more and am working on the next parts with my new beta so hopefully it will come up soon. Rl a problem however as my beloved Baappi is very ill. That's my female dog. She older and I fear her time may be coming to an end. SO I want to take care of her for that time. Writing will have to take a back seat for now.
Fire
Review By [Eureka] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 47 Surprising Messages" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhh family reunion all the more thanks, more when you can pretty please
Comments from author:
I added a bit more and am working on the next parts with my new beta so hopefully it will come up soon. Rl a problem however as my beloved Baappi is very ill. That's my female dog. She older and I fear her time may be coming to an end. SO I want to take care of her for that time. Writing will have to take a back seat for now.
Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 46 Warning" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhh love it thanks more pretty please
Comments from author:
Thank you I am working on the next chapters now. I hope to have them posted soon. Sadly time is limited and right now I am a lot more concerned with something else. Idle no more has got my attention and I am working on a piece for that. I hope to have a story for it soon. Fiction but, maybe not so much. This song below just inspired me.
Fire

Idle no more artists
Published on Jan 4, 2013
Song by "237productionz"
lyrics
~IDLE NO MORE~
------------------------------*Hook
Published on Jan 4, 2013
Song by "237productionz"
lyrics
~IDLE NO MORE~
------------------------------*Hook
Idle no more
lets settle the score
our land is what we stand for
vote stephen out the door
------------------------------*Bridge
our treaty was signed
as long as the sun shines
and the grass grows
and the rivers flow
------------------------------*Verse 1
my rights are in trouble
the man stephen harper
should be at the bottom
of the gutter so he can suffer
tryna take our identity
tryna take whats left of me
no homiie i aint playin
prayin for me people cause of bill c-45
spence is on a mission
for the nation heres the crisis
he sees native pride fadin in his eyes
time to rise, now we stand for our rights
come on every body put up votes together
and put him down forever
-everything would be better
need a little bit of courage
and i gotta put and effort
yeaa the treaty was signed
stephen you cant deny
that the fact that your blind
cause imma native till i die-
--------------------------------*Verse 2
stephen you prick
you make me so sick
billc-45 frickin that bullshit
yeaa whatever happened to the agreement
that we had in 1871
our people shook your hand
your people are white
but us natives are brown
tryna take our rights?
lets see you go through the crown
let me tell you that aint gunna get any better for you
cause us natives protest is stronger than you
-everything would be better
need a little bit of courage
and i gotta put and effort
yeaa the treaty was signed
stephen you cant deny
that the fact that your blind
cause imma native till i die-
• Category
Music
• License
Standard YouTube License
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbMTBpQuIrs Eagle over the Idle no more

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i9OP6WmRLgY
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 45 Paranoia" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I certainly am looking for an update on this slayer expedition to the stars!!!
Comments from author:
Yep soon.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 45 Paranoia" from Netchka
Review:
Just read this story again, and still Love it. Can't wait for the rest of the chapters to come. I hope Kinsey gets what is coming to him. With the SGC and the Council not liking him it will happen. :-) :-) :-) :-)
Comments from author:
I'm still planning Kinsey demise can not decide what to do with the wanker. Oh well time enough to make him pay. Glad this story makes you smile a bit.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 45 Paranoia" from Shadowman
Review:
Very good story.
I can understand and see the reasons behind the conflict between the two teams, but I do hope that in time the will settle down and realize that they are on the same side. Especially Jack at the moment.
Hope to see the next update soon.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 45 Paranoia" from immortalsilence
Review:
i love it , thanks more pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks I'll try.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 45 Paranoia" from grd
Review:
I hope Kinsey gets eaten by something soon.
Comments from author:
I'll think about it lol. Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 44 Worries and Laughter" from Oddshot
Review:
Inheriting Family by FireWolfe , A fascinating crossover between BtVS & Stargate Sg1 which has caught my eye and has me hooked so please FireWolfe update this story soon . P.S. I must also say I love & hope that - Be careful what you wish for you might just get it will also soon be updated , as I believe that this detailed Harry Potter / BtVS crossover richly deserves to continue as well.
Comments from author:
Thank you I plan on finishing both work. RL work and family commitments have drastically reduced my writing time. I hope to update with in the month of September if not sooner. As the next week may be very busy.
Thank you for the kind words and support t hey mean a lot.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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