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Review of chapter "Part 35 Sometime family surprises us" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Ch 33

good they handled that attack by the bringers so well.

Ch 34

nice that Connor has found some relatives of Heather and all in all nice chapter

Ch 35

Adman on the foremarch and if I read right Xander's father was just shoot and taken to Adam.....
not good.
Comments from author:
Nope badness all around.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 39 SOS MALL Part 39 SOS MALL Part 39 SOS" from CageFire
Review:
Good to see a new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you I had this started for a bit but kept having trouble finishing it. I'm not sure it was exactly what I wanted but it does move the story ahead a bit and allows for more interaction of the family.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 39 SOS MALL Part 39 SOS MALL Part 39 SOS" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Okay for a moment I thought it was the Judge...it's Tony kill him.

Good chapter!
Comments from author:
well he is equally troublesome. Glad you agree with my plan lol. Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 32 Like a fine wine" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Part 30

ahh ok Jocye to that much easier than i thought

Ch 31

ahh good they are all dealing more or less

Part 32 Like a fine wine

Nice small warmup for Methos and the others :)
Comments from author:
Yep it is.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 29 Now What?" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohaa nice phone call and Synder should run :)
Comments from author:
yes
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 28 Gone to Hell" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Glory back with an Immortal as host? Ouch.......
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 36 Meeting Mom" from CageFire
Review:
Rather interesting fic, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from CageFire
Review:
Hmm, I'm not sure of the timeline. You mentioned willow and tara like 1 or 2 chapters ago, but now it's willow and oz and they're still in high school.
Comments from author:
yeah its a bit wacky I may need to fix it. Anyway I'll try to keep time out. I want all the bads at the same time so it kind of skews things a bit.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27 Triads and other connections" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
should we envy Xander or not? :) Poor guy....
Comments from author:
Yes be careful what you wish for lol. Pity him really. I mean Cordy and Faith....He so needs to learn to be smooth and smart or hes a dead man lol,
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 36 Meeting Mom" from Mordare
Review:
Always glad to see this one update. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 36 Meeting Mom" from Eureka
Review:
OK Does Jessica know that he is dead? Cause that was just weird. My Mom didn't sober up till I almost got raped and that took the ENTIRE Summer to get through to her! A drunk doesn't just up and decide OK I am going to stop drinking NOW and clean up.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you had to go through that. But yes you can wake up and see the roses as it were. It not easy and usually its a process one that been mental if not obvious to others but it can happen. You just have to choose it. A sober or straight person is that only when they choose to be. It is a daily sometimes hourly or by the minute thing. Everyone is different in that. This is based on someone I know but again this is fiction so we'll go with it for now. As this is a public review I wont add much more. However I would answer a private one if you so desire.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 36 Meeting Mom" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Okay, it's shorter than usual. It's a little thin on details, I think I'm going to go back and reread the recent chapters and see if I missed something, because Jessica suddenly straigtening things out without anything driving her to do so seems rather forced.

Okay, backed up and reread... it still feels forced. It would have been better if she did this in reaction to Tony being killed, not as a spontaneous "What have I been doing with my life? I better clean my house..." thing before the fact. Drunks don't just decide to dry up. They are usually so immersed in their alcoholism that they can't even think clearly enough to realise that there's a problem until something emotionally devastating happens.
Comments from author:
Or when they realize they have been missing life. Tony really is not important to the work. He is just a part of the problem. One she finally sees when he tries to refuse to work. However its not a going to be just that simple it rarely is.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 35 Sometime family surprises us" from texaswookie
Review:
You know I laughed at the irony of first paragraph considering Methos other name. Nice filler chapter by the way.
Comments from author:
thanks it was not actually intentional but I can see how it works.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 34 Arrivals" from nightshadowlife
Review:
Awesome story! Can't wait to see more!
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 34 Arrivals" from draconis
Review:
Good story with some original thoughts. Thanks for the update.

I'm curious. Why did you put so much effort into dealing with the origin of MacLeod's name? Canon has him being, "I'm Connor MacLeod of the Clan MacLeod" since the very beginnings of Highlander. It seems odd to invent something totally different about the origins of his name without a real need to do so.

I liked your idea that Heather had family that survived her through the centuries.
Review By [draconis] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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