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Review of chapter "Part 16 Life's a soap" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, I accepted a lot in terms of changes in the time line, the girls still being in high school and Dawn existing earlier .... but Spike is already chipped? Somehow I'm guessing this AU was brought about by someone's wish.

Edit: thanks.
Comments from author:
Not so much just a different timeline.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from MarzBar
Review:
Have I told you lately how much I love this tale?? Please give us more soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am glad you have enjoyed this work. It's been fun to write.

Fire
Review By [MarzBar] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from grd
Review:
Thank you for another chapter. Love how Spike saved Joyce. Nice twist on Travers. Did not see that coming.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I always thought Spike should be a hero even before the end. He was always fond of Joyce and Dawn. I think it is safe to say he was possessive of them. Because it would be a reason for him to be protective and loving. He was an unique vampire even before his soul.

Fire
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from Gideon
Review:
This is quite an interesting MegaSue AU :) Buffy and Faith are collecting a formidable group of allies through their association with Methos. Immortals galore, at least two or three watchers so far with more on the horizon. Virtually unlimited money and the revelation (to the reader anyway) that Buffy's whole family is pre-immortal and all three daughters are or will be slayerized. Nick has been pretty handy already by arresting Travers and they have just met!
I can just imagine how deadly the Slayers will become when trained by those immortals.
Also Spike has been chipped so I guess that means the Initiative is around somewhere?
Oh, and I almost forgot - Uncle Snyder as principal!
Comments from author:
They have to be this strong because everything is sped up. Adam and Glory along with Travers and ta few more surprises. Not all peaches and cream here. The gang will be facing a lot of big bads shortly. The back up will be needed.
Fire
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from immortalsilence
Review:
i always knew Travers was a demon, more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks I hate the guy and figured he had to be evil.

Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nick is the youngest immortal in the group, so if even he could detect that Travers was a deamon, that makes things very interesting. Now, different immortals have different gifts and talents, so I would like to see if this is a special talent that Nick has, like Duncan's is an extra-heightened sense for pre-immortals, and Cassandra has her "voice."
Comments from author:
Good catch. I wanted Nick to have his own talent. He may not quite get what he senses yet but it will be important as time goes on. He will be a Sunnydale cop after all.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13 Not Happy" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Quick drive or elapsed time? Not clear. Enjoying the characterization and the overall story.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it. Time elaped lol. I know quick drive but there was now way I was going to have them go road games lol.

Thanks for the review.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 9 Meeting and greeting" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked how you showed both men's POVs and didn't have an information dump.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16 Life's a soap" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I'm liking the story so far. It's entertaining to see the Sunnydale crew react to all the Immortals pouring in. Sending Quentin into the coffee shop with two Slayers already irritated at him with little sis in the vicinity and a group of White Hat Immortals witnessing? Sounds like a powder keg waiting for a spark.
Comments from author:
Yep he is an idiot for sure. LOl, I am afraid he will be in for a bit of a shock lol.

Thanks for the review.

Fire
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 Lawyers Part 2 Lost Connections" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. He's my What?

Hank Summers real name is Synder`??? rofl...ok i am now curios what more funny things
you pull out for us *g*.

2. Lost Connections

nice Info on how he knew Joyce and Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it. I am trying to make this fun.

Fire
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Cmiller
Review:
I don't expect a Faith/Giles pairing cuz I don't really like that pairing but it did bug me that he(Giles) never treated Faith the way at least he treated the rest of the scoobs even if it wasn't to the level of Buffy.
Comments from author:
It bothered me to. However, I think it was because he did not want a repeat of what happened with Kendra. I think he did not want Buffy to feel he was getting to close to Faith. He did that with Kendra and Buffy was clearly upset. I can see him going to the oppisite extreme to prevent that from happening. One fic I read suggested the mayor spelled them to help isolate Faith. That idea has merit. However, I am not going to steal the idea. The point is everyone is learning and healing I hope.
Thanks for the review and I am glad you liked it.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Blackett
Review:
very nice to have an update. i totally like it. " genius level"....nice touch

can't wait to see the two gangs together!
Comments from author:
It should be fun. Once certain people get over themeselves on both sides. :)
Fire
Review By [Blackett] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from ktweaver
Review:
Read this all in one go tonight. It's wonderful!
Comments from author:
Thanks, The challenge is fun. It makes one have to think on how to make it work. I just hope I can do it justices.
Fire
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from immortalsilence
Review:
wwaaa hooo loving the update, more when you can please
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I am working on it.

Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Cmiller
Review:
I like that Giles is trying to make up for his mistake both with Buffy and Faith...I mean it seems cool that he is trying to get Faith someone that would look out for her(Faith) like he does with Buffy.
Comments from author:
Yeah the gan never admited their part in Faith's fall. It was like Buffy when she did not toe the line they tossed her. I really think it was the reason she went over to the mayor. She needed a feeling of family. For all his ills I think Wilkins loved Faith. Or at least as much as he was able to. Anyway glad you liked it. Giles has to redeem himself too. However don't expect a Giles Faith pairing that just freaks me out.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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