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Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from immortalsilence
Review:
i always knew Travers was a demon, more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks I hate the guy and figured he had to be evil.

Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 17 Of the Good" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nick is the youngest immortal in the group, so if even he could detect that Travers was a deamon, that makes things very interesting. Now, different immortals have different gifts and talents, so I would like to see if this is a special talent that Nick has, like Duncan's is an extra-heightened sense for pre-immortals, and Cassandra has her "voice."
Comments from author:
Good catch. I wanted Nick to have his own talent. He may not quite get what he senses yet but it will be important as time goes on. He will be a Sunnydale cop after all.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13 Not Happy" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Quick drive or elapsed time? Not clear. Enjoying the characterization and the overall story.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it. Time elaped lol. I know quick drive but there was now way I was going to have them go road games lol.

Thanks for the review.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 9 Meeting and greeting" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked how you showed both men's POVs and didn't have an information dump.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16 Life's a soap" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I'm liking the story so far. It's entertaining to see the Sunnydale crew react to all the Immortals pouring in. Sending Quentin into the coffee shop with two Slayers already irritated at him with little sis in the vicinity and a group of White Hat Immortals witnessing? Sounds like a powder keg waiting for a spark.
Comments from author:
Yep he is an idiot for sure. LOl, I am afraid he will be in for a bit of a shock lol.

Thanks for the review.

Fire
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 Lawyers Part 2 Lost Connections" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. He's my What?

Hank Summers real name is Synder`??? rofl...ok i am now curios what more funny things
you pull out for us *g*.

2. Lost Connections

nice Info on how he knew Joyce and Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it. I am trying to make this fun.

Fire
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Cmiller
Review:
I don't expect a Faith/Giles pairing cuz I don't really like that pairing but it did bug me that he(Giles) never treated Faith the way at least he treated the rest of the scoobs even if it wasn't to the level of Buffy.
Comments from author:
It bothered me to. However, I think it was because he did not want a repeat of what happened with Kendra. I think he did not want Buffy to feel he was getting to close to Faith. He did that with Kendra and Buffy was clearly upset. I can see him going to the oppisite extreme to prevent that from happening. One fic I read suggested the mayor spelled them to help isolate Faith. That idea has merit. However, I am not going to steal the idea. The point is everyone is learning and healing I hope.
Thanks for the review and I am glad you liked it.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Blackett
Review:
very nice to have an update. i totally like it. " genius level"....nice touch

can't wait to see the two gangs together!
Comments from author:
It should be fun. Once certain people get over themeselves on both sides. :)
Fire
Review By [Blackett] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from ktweaver
Review:
Read this all in one go tonight. It's wonderful!
Comments from author:
Thanks, The challenge is fun. It makes one have to think on how to make it work. I just hope I can do it justices.
Fire
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from immortalsilence
Review:
wwaaa hooo loving the update, more when you can please
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I am working on it.

Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from Cmiller
Review:
I like that Giles is trying to make up for his mistake both with Buffy and Faith...I mean it seems cool that he is trying to get Faith someone that would look out for her(Faith) like he does with Buffy.
Comments from author:
Yeah the gan never admited their part in Faith's fall. It was like Buffy when she did not toe the line they tossed her. I really think it was the reason she went over to the mayor. She needed a feeling of family. For all his ills I think Wilkins loved Faith. Or at least as much as he was able to. Anyway glad you liked it. Giles has to redeem himself too. However don't expect a Giles Faith pairing that just freaks me out.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
It's just too funny that both the Slayers and Watchers are thinking of rebuilding the Council. Can't wait until they meet back up and share their 'radical' ideas with each other, only to find out they are already on the same page.
Comments from author:
Yeah Great minds and all that lol. I always hated that they made Buffy and Faith seem all brawn and no brains. That makes no sense to me. Faith had to be clever to survive on the streets as such young age. Buffy had fantastic SAT scores. I can so see them both being more if they did not get the short straw and become slayers. Kendra proved to be intelligent in the book area it follows to reason all slayer had that potential. Anyway glad you liked the idea.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 11 Understanding" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
HA! I love that the PTB are scared now, too! A Slayer-run Council before the fiasco with the First? There'd still need to be *some* trusted Watchers to help out though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know new watchers. That where the immortals come in. Can you think of better watchers? Fights aside they have a lot of experience and they know the supernatural world. Well most do. Plus they are awesome fighters. Methos will naturally know a lot of languages. I am debating bringing others in. I think that the people I mentioned are a good start if you include friends of Methos, Joe and Giles.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 11 Understanding" from Cmiller
Review:
*evil cackle* oh that was great...I love that the powers are scared sh*t less. anyway I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah well I wanted to twist the themes abit. See if it was possible to change things before the first. Anyway glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the support and reviews.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from Blackett
Review:
I think I have to declare myself a fan of yours but please tell me you will add to this story...it doesn't seem fair to just let it like this.....
Comments from author:
I am working on this and my other stories. I have over a dozen running right now. Most are not on this site. I try to be fair to them all. I am waiting for some chapters to come home from my beta's for this story. I am also working on the next chapters. Please be patient. The work will be updated as time on all sides allows.

Thanks for the support I love reviews. They so make my day.

Fire
Review By [Blackett] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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