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Review of chapter "Part 12 A New Order of Slayers and Watchers" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
It's just too funny that both the Slayers and Watchers are thinking of rebuilding the Council. Can't wait until they meet back up and share their 'radical' ideas with each other, only to find out they are already on the same page.
Comments from author:
Yeah Great minds and all that lol. I always hated that they made Buffy and Faith seem all brawn and no brains. That makes no sense to me. Faith had to be clever to survive on the streets as such young age. Buffy had fantastic SAT scores. I can so see them both being more if they did not get the short straw and become slayers. Kendra proved to be intelligent in the book area it follows to reason all slayer had that potential. Anyway glad you liked the idea.
Thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 11 Understanding" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
HA! I love that the PTB are scared now, too! A Slayer-run Council before the fiasco with the First? There'd still need to be *some* trusted Watchers to help out though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know new watchers. That where the immortals come in. Can you think of better watchers? Fights aside they have a lot of experience and they know the supernatural world. Well most do. Plus they are awesome fighters. Methos will naturally know a lot of languages. I am debating bringing others in. I think that the people I mentioned are a good start if you include friends of Methos, Joe and Giles.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 11 Understanding" from Cmiller
Review:
*evil cackle* oh that was great...I love that the powers are scared sh*t less. anyway I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah well I wanted to twist the themes abit. See if it was possible to change things before the first. Anyway glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the support and reviews.
Fire
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from Blackett
Review:
I think I have to declare myself a fan of yours but please tell me you will add to this story...it doesn't seem fair to just let it like this.....
Comments from author:
I am working on this and my other stories. I have over a dozen running right now. Most are not on this site. I try to be fair to them all. I am waiting for some chapters to come home from my beta's for this story. I am also working on the next chapters. Please be patient. The work will be updated as time on all sides allows.

Thanks for the support I love reviews. They so make my day.

Fire
Review By [Blackett] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from immortalsilence
Review:
loving the fic more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks more is on the way.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am working on them all slowly.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from Bobboky
Review:
good work
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from spk
Review:
Love the tussle between Adam & Giles. I could so see that happening. Can't wait for the match between Mac & Buffy...I'd pay to see that. :)
Comments from author:
It will be coming eventually. Thanks for the review and I am glad you enjoyed it.

Fire
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh, loved that Ripper and Death got their frustrations out on each other for their mistakes. The test was one of only a few times on the show that I came close to hating Giles, but then I remember that he's been taught how important loyalty to the Watchers Council is - despite his brief sabbatical from them. The fact he went back would indicate that he learned that lesson more fully, and who knows, maybe they held it over his head that he owed them for it.
Comments from author:
Yeah it reminded me of a line someone once said. I do not remember exactly what show it was but it went something like this. I think it was Dylan Hunt when refering to Tyr. Try was a Neichian and Hunt trusted him to act like one.

"Do you trust him?"

"I trust him to be true to his nature."

The gist was that you can trust everyone to a certain point even if it is only trusting that they will act in their own interests. Buffy did that a lot. She trusted Spike to be Spike which was to say he would be an ally as long as it suited him. She forgot that Giles was loyal to the coucil trusting that the council had the best interest of the slayer in mind. He was a company man. While he liked Buffy at that point his loyalty was to the Council not the slayer or even Buffy personally. The council was loyal only to itself.
In Giles case it was a situation of following tradtion without understanding if it was worth following. He was loyal and blinded by that.

Buffy being young and an American was naive. She trusted Giles. I think her trust was tainted a little. Merrick Died to keep her safe. So she assumed all watchers were the same. A bad and almost deadly mistake.

Thanks for the review. I am glad you like it.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8 Changes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am working on it. However I have few other fics that need attention. Plus I really should do my homework for my college class sometime this before class on Tuesday :). I have started the homework but it is taking longer then I expected. So this type of writing has to wait. I have sent the next chapter to my beta so if it comes in I will post it. But other then that I am likely not going to write more until I buckle down and behave myself.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8 Changes" from hellbells
Review:
I hate to sound like Oliver but, "More Please."
Comments from author:
The next chaptet is done and gone to my beta. If it comes in I'll post it. Other then that RL school needs a bit of my attention. Unless of course I take a break :)

Fire
Review By [hellbells] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
That explanation of how Death came to be is very believable. Sad and disturbing, but believable. I'm very happy that Methos is telling them about Immortals before he changes Joyce.
Comments from author:
I was not going to at first but decided it be to big a shock otherwise. Anyway I am glad I made it believable.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhhhh loving this fic more chapters pretty pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks and I am working on it.
Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, nice beggining. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. More will be comig when I can.
Fire
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good. Adam isn't being given a free-ride, but he's trying really hard to explain in a way that will be accepted.
Comments from author:
One of the things that drives me crazy is when modern culture trys to moralize or judge primitive times. That is unless they are willing to be judged by the same harsh standards. The one thing that drives me absolutely crazy is when we see history skewed. There are always reasons for what might appear to be pointless slauter. It may not be right or even moral but genrally there is a reason. It may be as simple as the warlord stubbed his toe that morning but there is a reason he slautered the villiage he attacked. The reason for the 4 Horsemen was never really explained. However I tried to give it a reason that might explain the disconnect Methos had as death. I do not excuse his behavior merly give a reason for him to have become death. Even Hitler had a reason to hate. He was rejected and took his hate to an extreme because of it. Of course Hitler was psycotic and I hope I do not portray Adam in that light. Anyway I hope this helps round out his character for this story at least.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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