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Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from immortalsilence
Review:
loving the fic more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks more is on the way.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am working on them all slowly.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from Bobboky
Review:
good work
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from spk
Review:
Love the tussle between Adam & Giles. I could so see that happening. Can't wait for the match between Mac & Buffy...I'd pay to see that. :)
Comments from author:
It will be coming eventually. Thanks for the review and I am glad you enjoyed it.

Fire
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10 Road Trip" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh, loved that Ripper and Death got their frustrations out on each other for their mistakes. The test was one of only a few times on the show that I came close to hating Giles, but then I remember that he's been taught how important loyalty to the Watchers Council is - despite his brief sabbatical from them. The fact he went back would indicate that he learned that lesson more fully, and who knows, maybe they held it over his head that he owed them for it.
Comments from author:
Yeah it reminded me of a line someone once said. I do not remember exactly what show it was but it went something like this. I think it was Dylan Hunt when refering to Tyr. Try was a Neichian and Hunt trusted him to act like one.

"Do you trust him?"

"I trust him to be true to his nature."

The gist was that you can trust everyone to a certain point even if it is only trusting that they will act in their own interests. Buffy did that a lot. She trusted Spike to be Spike which was to say he would be an ally as long as it suited him. She forgot that Giles was loyal to the coucil trusting that the council had the best interest of the slayer in mind. He was a company man. While he liked Buffy at that point his loyalty was to the Council not the slayer or even Buffy personally. The council was loyal only to itself.
In Giles case it was a situation of following tradtion without understanding if it was worth following. He was loyal and blinded by that.

Buffy being young and an American was naive. She trusted Giles. I think her trust was tainted a little. Merrick Died to keep her safe. So she assumed all watchers were the same. A bad and almost deadly mistake.

Thanks for the review. I am glad you like it.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8 Changes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am working on it. However I have few other fics that need attention. Plus I really should do my homework for my college class sometime this before class on Tuesday :). I have started the homework but it is taking longer then I expected. So this type of writing has to wait. I have sent the next chapter to my beta so if it comes in I will post it. But other then that I am likely not going to write more until I buckle down and behave myself.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8 Changes" from hellbells
Review:
I hate to sound like Oliver but, "More Please."
Comments from author:
The next chaptet is done and gone to my beta. If it comes in I'll post it. Other then that RL school needs a bit of my attention. Unless of course I take a break :)

Fire
Review By [hellbells] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
That explanation of how Death came to be is very believable. Sad and disturbing, but believable. I'm very happy that Methos is telling them about Immortals before he changes Joyce.
Comments from author:
I was not going to at first but decided it be to big a shock otherwise. Anyway I am glad I made it believable.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhhhh loving this fic more chapters pretty pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks and I am working on it.
Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, nice beggining. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. More will be comig when I can.
Fire
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7 Death is Born" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good. Adam isn't being given a free-ride, but he's trying really hard to explain in a way that will be accepted.
Comments from author:
One of the things that drives me crazy is when modern culture trys to moralize or judge primitive times. That is unless they are willing to be judged by the same harsh standards. The one thing that drives me absolutely crazy is when we see history skewed. There are always reasons for what might appear to be pointless slauter. It may not be right or even moral but genrally there is a reason. It may be as simple as the warlord stubbed his toe that morning but there is a reason he slautered the villiage he attacked. The reason for the 4 Horsemen was never really explained. However I tried to give it a reason that might explain the disconnect Methos had as death. I do not excuse his behavior merly give a reason for him to have become death. Even Hitler had a reason to hate. He was rejected and took his hate to an extreme because of it. Of course Hitler was psycotic and I hope I do not portray Adam in that light. Anyway I hope this helps round out his character for this story at least.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Shock" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Mental note
Comments from author:
Not sure what you mean by this note but thanks for reviewing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4 Lost Connections 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good sense of the clock ticking down for Methos to save Joyce.

Coping has one "p" otherwise you're copping a feel

Here:

I love you all and I will be her to prove it. Weather you believe it or not you, Faith and Buffy need me here. "

I will be here.
Whether (the other one is the temperature outside).
Comments from author:
Thanks that slipped by spell check.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 Lawyers Part 2 Lost Connections" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I don't know the reference to the singer-activist but am enjoying that Buffy could be a both a foundling and not a pre-immortal. Interesting choice. Also by Buffy having to sign papers she could be at least 18 or possibly 21... but we still don't know if she's been to college yet or if they have graduated from high school yet (she could have turned 18 in the second part of her senior year). I love stories with Methos and am enjoying this so far.
Comments from author:
Yeh she is at least 18. I am trying to decide it I want her to be older. I am thinking 18 and still in high school. We will see. Some of this I have to rethink and fix a bit. It happens when you have three or for works going that are different at the same time. Yeah I know I am nuts. :)
Thanks for the review and insights makes me have to think and clarify better.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 6 Giles POV" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhhh i see a confession on the horizon more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I am working on it along with the others I have in progress. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Fire.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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