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Review of chapter "Part 5 Shock" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Mental note
Comments from author:
Not sure what you mean by this note but thanks for reviewing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4 Lost Connections 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good sense of the clock ticking down for Methos to save Joyce.

Coping has one "p" otherwise you're copping a feel

Here:

I love you all and I will be her to prove it. Weather you believe it or not you, Faith and Buffy need me here. "

I will be here.
Whether (the other one is the temperature outside).
Comments from author:
Thanks that slipped by spell check.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1 Lawyers Part 2 Lost Connections" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I don't know the reference to the singer-activist but am enjoying that Buffy could be a both a foundling and not a pre-immortal. Interesting choice. Also by Buffy having to sign papers she could be at least 18 or possibly 21... but we still don't know if she's been to college yet or if they have graduated from high school yet (she could have turned 18 in the second part of her senior year). I love stories with Methos and am enjoying this so far.
Comments from author:
Yeh she is at least 18. I am trying to decide it I want her to be older. I am thinking 18 and still in high school. We will see. Some of this I have to rethink and fix a bit. It happens when you have three or for works going that are different at the same time. Yeah I know I am nuts. :)
Thanks for the review and insights makes me have to think and clarify better.
Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 6 Giles POV" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhhh i see a confession on the horizon more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks,
I am working on it along with the others I have in progress. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Fire.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5 Shock" from hellbells
Review:
I have the patience to see how the story evolves. I am looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks more will be comeing as soon as possible.

Fire
Review By [hellbells] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Shock" from twlight
Review:
I love this story so far. The idea that Hank is related to princepal Snyder is rather funny. Having all of these imortals and pre imortals is rather interesting I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I know it seems implasable at first sight but there is a reason for a lot of what I will be doing. Dawn is made from Buffy so she will be pre-immortal naturually. Joyce always was pre-immortal and Faith well she necessary for what I have planned later in the story line. Methos will figure out why so many are this way as we go along. There will be a prophesy or two dealing with this. Just not ready to reveal it yet. I could not resist with Snyder it was just a bit of levity to make me smile.
Review By [twlight] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5 Shock" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhh a whole immortal family can't wait to see what buffy has to say about that more pretty please
Comments from author:
Yep it going to be a new twist and turn or so.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4 Lost Connections 2" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Two things, one not doesn't equal note... please fix in the last chapter. That being said you should probably read back over the whole story fixing words here and there. While the whole thing reads more like a journal than a story, it's a bit frustrating with the large blocks of text. Maybe try to actually let the other characters do stuff? Either way it's your story but it would be better with some editing.

Second point, Methos wouldn't have given the Buffy's "dad" anything after what he did. He would have found a quiet place to put the bastard into the dirt. Probably after cutting him up into pieces.
Comments from author:
Expediency is often done in battle. Hank will pay trust me on this one. Methos is a master at tactics so he will win in the end. Thanks for the advice and I will edit it.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4 Lost Connections 2" from WolfWriter
Review:
Cool! Methos is going to deliver a smackdown on the Watchers!!!

Could it be both? Let's face it, both organizations are full of corruption, vice and other kinds of ickiness. They need to be shaken up, down, in, out, forwards, backwards, and sideways. With a grand finale of being put into a blender, frapped, baked into a pie and served up as an offering to Artemis/Diana.
Comments from author:
Thanks and maybe to both. That is a rather good idea.

Fire
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3 Explanations and Acceptance" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhhhh loving it loving it loving it, more pretty please
Comments from author:
Thanks I am working on it.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3 Explanations and Acceptance" from evilredknight
Review:
So more questions.

As a foundling Buffy is an immortal? I mean the Lawyer does call her the immortal slayer.
Does that mean she's basically 16 forever?
The age she violently died at the hands of the master?
How come she does not appear to feel the quickening? Wheres her trainer?
Does the Hell-mouth interfere?

The story implies at this point that Dawn was naturally conceived and born.
Is she still the key? Is she pre-immortal?
Which comes back to Joyce being pre-immortal and not able to conceive.

Inquiring minds wanna know.
Comments from author:
Dawn was made from Buffy. As to the age thing. That will be dealt with as we go on. Joyce married Adam who would have told her he was sterile. She may or may not have known about herself. I have not decided on that part yet. The monks made up fake memories for everyone. I have yet to decide what they will be.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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