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Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Ah, so Buffy is Jack's daughter! Now, what about these brothers of her she's talking about, hm?
Comments from author:
Yep Buffy is Jacks daughter, you might want to read the first story in the series, The Gift of a Family. It starts a little slow but it does become quite good if I do say so myself. (LOL) Her brothers are still to be revealed.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from clarityfades
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Shortie, but goodie. :) I liked seeing Jack's concern for Buffy, that was sweet. & I liked that he encouraged her to stop hiding her intelligence, can't wait to see just how smart she is! & I agree with Buffy, I wouldn't mind her brothers' kidnappers to come out of hiding so she can do a little ass-kicking & brother-saving. :D Good chapter! And I'm sorry I couldn't continue to be your beta for this story (as I was for your first in this series), but I'm expecting a baby in a very short time & can't commit to anything right now. Soon he will rule my world! LOL
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from bradsan
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You are doing good even without a beta reader. Can't wait what's next.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from RevDorothyL
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Butter, meet hot knife! (or Slayer sword, in this case -- not that the Super Soldier didn't get in more licks than a stick of butter is generally likely to do!)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from Shadowman
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Good story I hope you will update it soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from clarityfades
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Good chapter! Okay, I really liked that Buffy isn't instantly fitting in with everyone on base. I mean, I like that several people find her skills & intelligence to be of great worth/help...but I like that the "grunts" think she got her position because of nepotism. Proving them wrong will be quite satisfying for Buffy (it's always fun to see people have to eat crow!). LOL & I like that Buffy isn't tied down to one man or an "obvious" love already. I do hope for Daniel/Buffy--but it's the journey to get there that counts. Also, it's nice to see the general trust Buffy's Slayer dream, even though he's only heard about her dreams.
Comments from author:
Thank you for another awesome review. It is so good to hear what people like and don't like. I think things look good for Daniel and Buffy eventually to get together, but like you say it is the journey that counts and sometimes my writing goes off in unexpected directions. I also like the idea of Cam just not as much as Daniel.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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lol! Awesome! Can't wait to read more (tho I hope buffy doesn't date cam)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am curious though why you don't want her to date Cam?
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from spk
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Ecstatic to see this update. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from serenityselena
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they are really underestimating Buffy...
won't they be all shocked when they'll find out the truth about her? ... *huge smirk*
can't wait to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from alexceasar
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so happy to see this continued. Buffy is going to knock the socks off the Marines. I look forward to it.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nepotism and the Zurg." from RevDorothyL
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So glad to see you continuing with more updates on this.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pangera" from clarityfades
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Good chapter. I really liked Sam wanting to know more about Buffy, but doing it in an unobtrusive manner. & I liked that Buffy healed Egeria. Hope to see one of Buffy's dates soon! Seems like she's having a good time. LOL Just hope her intelligence doesn't bite her in the ass.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Also thank you for not just saying you liked it but what you liked. It helps.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pangera" from serenityselena
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another interesting adventure for Buffy and Sam`s discovery will probably complicate more Buffy`s already complicated life...
hope to read more soon :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pangera" from FireWolfe
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I was really happy to see an update. Great chapter and I hope there is more. Cliffies are evil.
FIRE
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pangera" from Rhyssia
Review:
..... I just got a glimmer. Pretender crossover?????

*eyes her new season1&2 of Pretender*

Hee!
Comments from author:
You are the first person to guess pretender since I posted the original hints back in Gift of a family chapter 26. An Old Mystery Revealed. It is a good guess I love pretender. since the review is public I won't say if you are right or wrong about it.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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