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Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from Ailsam
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I have really enjoyed this story and its predecessor, is there any chance you might continue it? I'm really interested to see where you intend for it to go. Please!
Review By [Ailsam] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from spk
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Begging for more...it has been a year... :)
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pangera" from Vld
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Kidnapped genius half-brothers... could one be called Jarod?
Review By [Vld] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from DieselDriver
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Seems a bit disjointed compared to the previous story. Also, leaves me wondering what happens next. It says "the end?" but there has to be more. Still, very good and I hope you get inspired to continue.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from bradsan
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please update. I know you writing other stories who are promising but this one deserves an update too. So please try to spend some time at this one.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from Blackett
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Any chance that you will come back to this?

Edit: As long as you will come back to it at some point in the future(preferably not 20 years from now...*grins*) I am OK with it...I was interested in the Pretender connection:)

I hope that it will come back to you and you will start to write again to you liking.
Comments from author:
There is but I have been having problems with writing lately. I am not sure if or when I will be able to finish this. I lost all of my notes when my laptop crashed and several chapters too. I am sorry I am going to try and get more written this weekend but lately everything I write seems like garbage.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from nightshadowlife
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love the chapters!!!!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from clarityfades
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Thanks for the shout-out! I really liked that Daniel took Giles aside and questioned him about Giles' duty to Buffy as HIS Slayer. & I liked that Giles asked Daniel to take over for the time being (since Giles is busy rebuilding the Council)--though I hope Giles talks to Buffy about this change so she doesn't feel like he's just shoving her off on the nearest available brain. I also enjoyed the commentary during the video of the Council exploding--I'm totally thinking Travers was behind it, rather than the Dragon. Also, the Trust wants Buffy? Well, methinks they'll have a battle on their hands. & even if Travers left w/ some of the Cruciamentum serum, who's to say it will be as effective a second time on Buffy? Or that her ingenuity (like w/ psycho vamp during the test) wouldn't get her out of any situation the Trust may have her in? Great chapter, I look forward to more soon!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from RevDorothyL
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Figures, Travers would be recruited or suborned by the Trust. Birds of a feather, and all that.

Meanwhile, Daniel as Buffy's actual field watcher makes a lot of sense, right now.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from immortalsilence
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love it thanks , more when you can pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Daniel being Buffy's unofficial Watcher makes sense...even if it would put a crimp in any possible relationship between them. Then again, Jack seems to be a big enough crimp at the moment, so Daniel might as well be her Watcher.

Can't say I'm surprised that Travers would be part of the Trust.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from serenityselena
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it`s good to see that Buffy is feeling so much better...
interesting developments...
looking forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from spk
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Ecstatic to see this update. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from immortalsilence
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love it thanks, more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from BrownFinderth
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Ah, so Buffy is Jack's daughter! Now, what about these brothers of her she's talking about, hm?
Comments from author:
Yep Buffy is Jacks daughter, you might want to read the first story in the series, The Gift of a Family. It starts a little slow but it does become quite good if I do say so myself. (LOL) Her brothers are still to be revealed.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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