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Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from DieselDriver
Review:
Seems a bit disjointed compared to the previous story. Also, leaves me wondering what happens next. It says "the end?" but there has to be more. Still, very good and I hope you get inspired to continue.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from bradsan
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please update. I know you writing other stories who are promising but this one deserves an update too. So please try to spend some time at this one.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from Blackett
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Any chance that you will come back to this?

Edit: As long as you will come back to it at some point in the future(preferably not 20 years from now...*grins*) I am OK with it...I was interested in the Pretender connection:)

I hope that it will come back to you and you will start to write again to you liking.
Comments from author:
There is but I have been having problems with writing lately. I am not sure if or when I will be able to finish this. I lost all of my notes when my laptop crashed and several chapters too. I am sorry I am going to try and get more written this weekend but lately everything I write seems like garbage.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from nightshadowlife
Review:
love the chapters!!!!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from clarityfades
Review:
Thanks for the shout-out! I really liked that Daniel took Giles aside and questioned him about Giles' duty to Buffy as HIS Slayer. & I liked that Giles asked Daniel to take over for the time being (since Giles is busy rebuilding the Council)--though I hope Giles talks to Buffy about this change so she doesn't feel like he's just shoving her off on the nearest available brain. I also enjoyed the commentary during the video of the Council exploding--I'm totally thinking Travers was behind it, rather than the Dragon. Also, the Trust wants Buffy? Well, methinks they'll have a battle on their hands. & even if Travers left w/ some of the Cruciamentum serum, who's to say it will be as effective a second time on Buffy? Or that her ingenuity (like w/ psycho vamp during the test) wouldn't get her out of any situation the Trust may have her in? Great chapter, I look forward to more soon!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from RevDorothyL
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Figures, Travers would be recruited or suborned by the Trust. Birds of a feather, and all that.

Meanwhile, Daniel as Buffy's actual field watcher makes a lot of sense, right now.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from immortalsilence
Review:
love it thanks , more when you can pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Daniel being Buffy's unofficial Watcher makes sense...even if it would put a crimp in any possible relationship between them. Then again, Jack seems to be a big enough crimp at the moment, so Daniel might as well be her Watcher.

Can't say I'm surprised that Travers would be part of the Trust.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy’s Visitor." from serenityselena
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it`s good to see that Buffy is feeling so much better...
interesting developments...
looking forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from spk
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Ecstatic to see this update. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from immortalsilence
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love it thanks, more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Ah, so Buffy is Jack's daughter! Now, what about these brothers of her she's talking about, hm?
Comments from author:
Yep Buffy is Jacks daughter, you might want to read the first story in the series, The Gift of a Family. It starts a little slow but it does become quite good if I do say so myself. (LOL) Her brothers are still to be revealed.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from clarityfades
Review:
Shortie, but goodie. :) I liked seeing Jack's concern for Buffy, that was sweet. & I liked that he encouraged her to stop hiding her intelligence, can't wait to see just how smart she is! & I agree with Buffy, I wouldn't mind her brothers' kidnappers to come out of hiding so she can do a little ass-kicking & brother-saving. :D Good chapter! And I'm sorry I couldn't continue to be your beta for this story (as I was for your first in this series), but I'm expecting a baby in a very short time & can't commit to anything right now. Soon he will rule my world! LOL
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from bradsan
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You are doing good even without a beta reader. Can't wait what's next.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super-Soldier meet the Slayer." from RevDorothyL
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Butter, meet hot knife! (or Slayer sword, in this case -- not that the Super Soldier didn't get in more licks than a stick of butter is generally likely to do!)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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