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Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from lucyferr
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Don’t kill your father because you only have the one. Ok we can try to chant that one.

lol

I can’t believe I wished that you were my father before I knew you were my father!... First you fought with Daniel to get him to stay away from me. Then when I am on my date with Paul you show up and announce to the entire night club that I am horny.”

omg

How am I supposed to believe that you are sorry when you keep doing it?

Could make a country song out of that. You know, along the lines of 'How can I miss you if you won't go away'...

“Buffy!” He cried out looking between Jack and Buffy in apparent terror. His face was ghostly white and his hands were shaking wildly.

have I already said lol?

“I am just trying to vent my frustration with him but I keep breaking the equipment.”

there's something you don't hear every day

It was around the base in twenty minutes with a betting pool about if Jack would be able to intimidate Teal’c from leaving Buffy alone or not.

wonder if danny boy & sammy gal will place a bet

oh no Rodney... why do people keep persisting in placing McKay in fics? Are they preggers? I mean, he's about as desirable as pickles in ketchup!

So how did Buffy put that wotsit together? :-)
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from nightshadowlife
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lol awesome chapter! I love how you have Buffy playing the dumb/smart lol "barbie" blond. Hehe I love Rodney's character!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from HunterH
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Loved the first chapter can't wait to read more!
Review By [HunterH] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from FireWolfe
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Great start. I really like this series. The last story was good but seemed to end a bit abruptly. I was glad to see a sequel that might round it out some. It was and is interesting to read. I look forward to seeing where you take Buffy in this series.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from clarityfades
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Ooh! I love that the first chappie in the next story was already posted! YAY!!!! LOL I really liked seeing a kinda "months in review" version of Buffy dealing w/ Jack's overprotectiveness. It was pretty perfect, in my opinion. & I love that the whole base knows that Jack's just waiting to smash anyone who tries to date his daughter. LMAO & I really really enjoyed the Teal'c/Buffy convo, especially them agreeing to become "spartners" (nice word, by the way--very Buffy). That was fun. Terrific first chapter!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from spk
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Great start! Love the arguing between Buffy & Jack...so perfectly in-character. I also love the twist with Buffy putting together the artifact in Sam's office. Can't wait to see where you take this and what else it ends up crossing with. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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Nice start to the new series. I've enjoyed the whole thing so far.

Just an FYI - in chapter 29 of the first story you spelled Dr Janet Fraiser's name as "Frasure". I don't know if that was the only time, it's just the one I noticed.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from sijkelly
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Great start to the sequel. I will admit that i was still laughing from reading the last chapter of the gift of a family. Whenever will Jack learn. Loving the series. Can't wait for more,please please pretty please update soon.
Review By [sijkelly] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Agh! Smarmy McKay...ick! It's okay if Jack threatens him. So Buffy can only hang with the girls and Teal'c? Kinda limits her friendship pool.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Grass Isn’t Greener on the Other Side" from SnakeFox
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Great start on the sequel, can't wait to see where you take it ^_^

Also, just wanted to say thanks for putting up the first chapter right after the last chapter of the last story. Don't think I've ever seen someone do that before, and it's so convenient. I mean, I'm sure I read somewhere that TtH is supposed to email you if a new story in a series is posted as long as you have the previous story tracked, but I've never had it happen. Makes it difficult to keep up with new additions to your favourite series, especially if you don't check the Latest Stories page regularly. So yeah, thanks for doing it this way, I'm glad I'm not gonna miss this sequel in the sea of new uploads as I might've if it hadn't gone up for a few days/weeks/etc.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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