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The Wizard of Sunnydale

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Review of chapter "Chapter 9 (v1.1)" from StriderMew
Review:
great stuff... wonder what would happen if u start crossing this with Harry Potter. Xander could probably clean house once he manages to fine-tune his control over his magic.
Review By [StriderMew] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 (v1.1)" from Eureka
Review:
Sad
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (V1.1)" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (V1.1)" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written teen fumbling update.
Comments from author:
Indeed :D a teenager can sometimes develop five left feet all when they try to talk to a Girl/boy they like.

I am talking from experince here.
Seen it. Done it. Suffer the emotional pains.
And to all you teenaged boys and girls out there.

AGE do not make love any more easy or simple. We just learn to live and survive the humiliation better.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 (v1.1)" from Doodle
Review:
Hahahaha, Attack of the Dark Bowling Balls.

Keep up the good work. :)
Review By [Doodle] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 (v1.1)" from eriktheviking
Review:
A fun update with an unusual look into Snyder. I did think the bowling ball was going to be similar to the one in the movie Mystery Men at first. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. the Snyder side part was short but i had lots of fun writing it. trying to write down something that would make him not some one you would like but someone that would make you stop and say.
What could he have become if he chose a diffrent path of life.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 (v1.1)" from Vilkath
Review:
Poor bowling ball, I almost wished Xander would of taken it up as some kind of wizarding pet, it would be a great conversation piece. Have it patrolling outside of his eventual wizarding tower, have a sign 'Beware of the Bowling ball'.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 (v1.1)" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome, though now they have to worry about someone stealing the crystal ball if it stores power... or is it just a filter?
Comments from author:
Think about it as a combination of a energy filter and a high-capacity battery that store the energy inside it.
(Not permanent inside it. The energy slowly leaks out if left unused to long.)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (v1.1)" from sunamee
Review:
Interesting story. I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (v1.1)" from kayron
Review:
Okay. So Xander doesn't have the greatest aim. He is still mighty handy to have around! He seems to be learning pretty well!
Comments from author:
Thats becuse Xander keep forgetting to hit the target USE you EYES and WILLPOWER. NOT the body to aim.
So far Xander is trying to use his EYES and his Body to AIM at the direction he throwing his spells.

A High-wizard aiming at you can be standing with his arms hanging down or in his pocket. Then suddenly fireballs starts to fly at you direction.

On the other hand a High-wizard used to aiming that way would mostly likly have a hard time getting used to Guns.
Tony Harris first attempt to use a gun. "What do you mean i have to POINT THE GUN at the right direction. I am already looking at the target and wanted to hit it. IT still you fault i shot myself in the foot."
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (v1.1)" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (v1.1)" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update, I especially enjoyed the fun dialogue.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 (V1.1)" from kayron
Review:
I think that Buffy is trying to make Giles' head inflate until it pops!
Comments from author:
A girl got to have a hobby.
Should we inform her that a shotgun work faster ?
Review By [kayron] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 (V1.1)" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 (v1.1)" from Garmorn
Review:
I like the story ideal. Your basic concept is good but the story is choppy and you need to spend more time on researching your back ground material. Your time line is all off to a large degree. Keep writing and trying to improve your skills. I will continue to check out any new stories.
Comments from author:
Thanks you. And you are correct the time line IS a bit off. i did fail a bit in adjusting it correctly and when i discovered it i had written so much i did not have the heart to re-write everything.
But if you read more of my stories you discover I have evolved my writing style.

The Knight Away and Knight No more stories. I have just written and are finished with.
The Wizard of Sunnydale you are reading Right now. IS being written RIGHT now.

All others stories are OLD. Consider that i suffer from a dyslexic word-blind handicap and is a Swedish not English. i think i have lot of room for improvement. :D
Review By [Garmorn] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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