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Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from SledgeHammer
Review:
Giles 2.5, maybe? Ripper being 1.0, Rupert Giles being 2.0, and the upgraded Giles 2.5. The Iceberg Is Now MUCH Larger.
Comments from author:
Yes it is. I hope to get back to this soon. real life been a bit insane. Anyway thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from Genuka
Review:
*shakes head* evil evil evil author *continues shaking head and walks away before demanding the next chapter... or doing something stupid to get said chapter*
Comments from author:
I am so not evil. I am puting out a chapter every couple of days or so on these stories. How's that evil? So want to beta some more for me? I have this one and one more that is not even posted yet . That one has about 5 or 6 chapters done.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
cannot find words to express how twisted your mind is. very, very entertaining read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks I think. I do try. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. It has been a challenge to work lately. I will try to update it however.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am fighting writers block for this one. It just does not want to come out right. The review is appreciated it makes me want to get past the block.
Thanks again,
Fire
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 19 Thinking and change" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* famous last words Buffy. Famous last words.

More Please!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. I will be sending you updates for some works soon.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Busnsguy
Review:
This is going well and I am enjoying the story but you need to make the chapters longer to keep the flow going. i.e chapter 16 & 17 should have been one chapter.

Good luck
Comments from author:
I write when I have the time and what makes sense to me. I know some people can write long chapters and make them flow and make sense. I am not so skilled at that. I tend to do scenes or snippets. It's why I post several chapters at once. It's just the way I write. Sorry if its a little hard on you. Its the only way I can do it however. Keeping works to about 1000 to 1500 words is managable to me.
Thanks for the review and I am glad you had fun with this chapter.
Fire
Review By [Busnsguy] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Obsidian
Review:
Great chapter , keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Jaylynn
Review:
I liked the new chapter! I did notice a repeat at the end. The husband/doctor of the lady joyce helped handed her his card when they first started talking then again right before he leaves.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Genuka
Review:
Joyce isn't gonna be happy when she finds out about the changes until she remembers that it means that she can help patch Buffy back together again but that's still iffy. More please!
Comments from author:
No she's not going to be.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snared and Paired" from Obsidian
Review:
Great chapter. Wished it was longer but hey the chapter works. really works. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I try to keep my chapters around a 1000 or so words most times. It is easier to handle them.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snared and Paired" from Genuka
Review:
Oh now that is evil. You know they're gonna kill you right? I'd love to see that happen! More please!
Comments from author:
No dont think so. Because Buffy and Dawn and even Faith are cool with it. That will make it so Willow will like the idea. Sam and Jack they just need an excuse to be together a kid does that.

Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Obsidian
Review:
oh thats just... evil. But I love it!
Comments from author:
I'M not evil I just had to play with Giles lol.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Genuka
Review:
That was evil! Giles is gonna hate you! Brilliant and hilarious! More please!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks I could not resist lol. Glad you liked it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from Obsidian
Review:
Interesting story so far. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from Genuka
Review:
Great merger chappy! I hope to see another chapter out of you soon. For some ... interesting amusement you might check out my insane guide. *Mwahahahaha!!!!*

Oh wait you already have! *evil grin*
Comments from author:
Thanks, I did I loved it. I think I left you a review. It was funny and good.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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