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Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
cannot find words to express how twisted your mind is. very, very entertaining read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks I think. I do try. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. It has been a challenge to work lately. I will try to update it however.

Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am fighting writers block for this one. It just does not want to come out right. The review is appreciated it makes me want to get past the block.
Thanks again,
Fire
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 19 Thinking and change" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* famous last words Buffy. Famous last words.

More Please!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. I will be sending you updates for some works soon.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Busnsguy
Review:
This is going well and I am enjoying the story but you need to make the chapters longer to keep the flow going. i.e chapter 16 & 17 should have been one chapter.

Good luck
Comments from author:
I write when I have the time and what makes sense to me. I know some people can write long chapters and make them flow and make sense. I am not so skilled at that. I tend to do scenes or snippets. It's why I post several chapters at once. It's just the way I write. Sorry if its a little hard on you. Its the only way I can do it however. Keeping works to about 1000 to 1500 words is managable to me.
Thanks for the review and I am glad you had fun with this chapter.
Fire
Review By [Busnsguy] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Obsidian
Review:
Great chapter , keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Jaylynn
Review:
I liked the new chapter! I did notice a repeat at the end. The husband/doctor of the lady joyce helped handed her his card when they first started talking then again right before he leaves.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18 Marching Orders" from Genuka
Review:
Joyce isn't gonna be happy when she finds out about the changes until she remembers that it means that she can help patch Buffy back together again but that's still iffy. More please!
Comments from author:
No she's not going to be.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snared and Paired" from Obsidian
Review:
Great chapter. Wished it was longer but hey the chapter works. really works. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I try to keep my chapters around a 1000 or so words most times. It is easier to handle them.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snared and Paired" from Genuka
Review:
Oh now that is evil. You know they're gonna kill you right? I'd love to see that happen! More please!
Comments from author:
No dont think so. Because Buffy and Dawn and even Faith are cool with it. That will make it so Willow will like the idea. Sam and Jack they just need an excuse to be together a kid does that.

Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Obsidian
Review:
oh thats just... evil. But I love it!
Comments from author:
I'M not evil I just had to play with Giles lol.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from Genuka
Review:
That was evil! Giles is gonna hate you! Brilliant and hilarious! More please!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks I could not resist lol. Glad you liked it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from Obsidian
Review:
Interesting story so far. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

Fire
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from Genuka
Review:
Great merger chappy! I hope to see another chapter out of you soon. For some ... interesting amusement you might check out my insane guide. *Mwahahahaha!!!!*

Oh wait you already have! *evil grin*
Comments from author:
Thanks, I did I loved it. I think I left you a review. It was funny and good.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from deathgeonous
Review:
Very intereresting. Nice too. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks,
More is on its way soon.

Fire
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 15 An Accommodation" from michaelangelo
Review:
Ok I'm in a state of severe confuzzlement, this isn't a flame or meant in a negative way,I literally am baffled, very, very baffled.

there's Oz who was in the episode, but didn't join the gang untill several episodes later, and didn't become a werewolf until around episode 15, 9 months after Halloween. He was bit after tickling his nephew Jordy and was still wearing a band aid.

Faith who didn't turn up until series 3.

Ben who didn't show up until series 5 as a medical intern not a Doctor or Nurse which means he was about 1 year out of collage at the time.

The First was fully caged until that silly episode where Angel tried to kill himself and needed the concerted efforts of the bringers to give it the power to appear on the mortal plane and was only partially free when Buffy was magically resurrected after dying a mortal death.

I also have a piece of bad news that may shock, nay horrify you to know ... how can I put this .... Most British beer drinkers ... well they like to drink it cold and fizzy, I know, shocking isn't it?

OK like I said not a flame, just confused, I think a warning of extreme AU should be placed in the summery and a warning of 'characters out of place' and 'none canon relationships' in chapter one would help. Sorry to say once I saw Ben, Faith and the First appear I had to stop reading to save my fragile sanity :)
Comments from author:
I am sorry to cause confusion. One of the things I generally do with my works is mix and match seasons. I try to make it work out but it can disrupt the cannon as most people know it. It is why I list everything as AU.

As for the beer, my family likes it warm and they were the models for British people. I appoligize if it was offensive.

Sanity and my stories rarely go hand in hand. They take you on wild rides with twists and turns most people never expect. I have rewriten the Entire TOS of Star Trek long before the 2009 mess came out. I guess I am doing something similar here. I would hope you could suspend your disbelief and read on. If not I get it. Not everyone is an adventerous reader. Because Like I said I am not a sane writer. I do appreaciate the time you took to review this. As to author notes and warnings. I did put some in. But to many give away the plot before hand.

Fire
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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