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Review of chapter "Shifting Balance Back" from DHX
Review:
and chapter 3 is a jump the shark moment. first it reads like a hastily applied band aid. not only that i am actually disgusted with the 'cordelia for angel/Buffy for methos' thing you pulled it reads in-organically and forced, as if you can't help letting your shipping choices get in the way of building a decent and engaging story. in fact you have fallen into the horrid YAHF cliche where you're going to use the costumes to basically rewrite the characters to make your 'ships manifest.
Review By [DHX] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like your beginning. I look forward to your followup with much anticipation.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from Bluesnowman
Review:
pretty good so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from djhardim
Review:
Good beginning. Much as I like Giles, the Scoobies are going to need a trainer to help them reach their full potential.

I can't think of anything to say about Buffy and Willow.

For those who like Xander as Captain America, I recommend Bruneor's "Heir to Shield and Hammer" series.
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Series-484

Not much to say about Cordy, except that Charisma Carpenter was one of the actresses mentioned to play Wonder Woman when Joss was involved with that project. Cordy may discover that she has problems keeping covered with the classic Wonder Woman costume.

I disagree with your statement that Superman needs sunlight to live. While solar energy is the source of Superman's powers, he can get along just fine without it. My suggestion - deage Angel to around age 17 and adjust his power levels accordingly(Smallville).

Two other possiblities for Angel - Hugo Danner and Iron Munro.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hugo_Danner
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iron_Munro
Comments from author:
Actually that a good idea. I wanted to make it so Angel could be in the sun. I was thinking of making him like the superman from the 50's tv show not the all powerful one from more recent times.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from WEMB
Review:
Very interesting beginning. Hope you do continue this as I have yet to see a crossover with the Queen of Swords. Will have to look up Ms.Mystic though. Anyway we want more!
Comments from author:
I found Ms.Mystic on hero's wiki so she may end up appearing occ to those that know the character. But the description seemed to fit Willow.
Review By [WEMB] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
Plus Angel said he hated weak wimpy women."
--- ha.

made me laugh but also seemed a bit too easy - like when would angel ever say that?

still, interested to see strong costumes!
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This okay. I'd like to see more scenes dramatized.
Comments from author:
Thanks more will come soon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Everyone has a secret identity and Buffy's character might have been married to Methos, if you are going to make a Highlander crossover as well (Dr. Helm Queen of Swords? http://www.imdb.com/character/ch0132179/ ). Angel might turn to dust or become a day walker when the spell is over (Kryptonians powered by solar energy).
Comments from author:
LMAO oh yeh that is a possibility. Read my story Away Mission to Terra Beta and you will find I made Dr. Helm into Methos. Not sure if I will do that here though. I am still considering options.

Fire
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Altering Fate" from Cmiller
Review:
I liked this so far and I can't wait to see and read more.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Ms. Mystic, I have wait years for her appearence. I think she will bring an interesting tone to town.

Peace
Comments from author:
I am glad you like the idea. I could use some help with the character. I pulled it off a Hero list. I really do not know much about her other then what I read on wiki. She just seemed to fit Willow. If you could advise me I would be grateful.

Fire
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Oooooooooh a real full-length Xander as Cap YAHF! I've been wanting one of these forever.
Comments from author:
Well Xander, buffy and the gang will all be in it. Xander and the others will play supporting roles.

Fire
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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