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The Black Heir

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Some very interesting choices. The selection of the character is very different which opens all sorts of potential directions. Your decision not to rewrite the entire episode and only include the highlights and the changes was a good one and you did a really nice job with the new pieces and moving the story forward.

Sirius disowned. Xander showing as the heir because chaos re-wrote RAB's and JLH's history? If so why / how did the dark mark stay. Xander's registered as RAB's son, which means he didn't take the mark personally, and its generally accepted that getting marked is a process which requires consent. This is fan fic so automatically AU, but this is something I think really needs some major in story support to ensure credibility.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Great beginning.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darthridian
Review:
good start mate, just wondering why did the Black family tree still lists the Harris name? should it not have been Alexander Lavell Black? since the same thing happened to Jessica's because the tree gave her the Black name instead of Lavell Harris. any way good start mate hope to read more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Izabela
Review:
Good story. It would be nice if Xander quickly and easily got rid of the Dark Mark.
Review By [Izabela] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
You have misused homophones, capitalized words that shouldn't be, Death Eater(s) is two words, not one... to sum it up, it'd be in your best interests to find a beta.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluesnowman
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Looking forward to more, I can not think that Xander will react well to being a Deatheater. And I am curious if that magic will show to Buffy's senses.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ivanjedi
Review:
Something tells me things will get very screwy from this point onwards.
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Wonderful beginning! I love Regulus stories! I look forward to seeing where you take this one. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightowl
Review:
I think I read this on FF.net and I was very interested. I can't wait to read more. I like the twist on the halloween and the inclusion of Xander into the Black family. I wonder how he's gonna change due to Reg's influence and what will happen when the Order finds out about the changes in the Black Family power. Please update a lot.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great read but I'm not sure about the part where Xander is a Black and changes his looks etc.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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