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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Jearom
Review:
Oh I like how this is going so far! As revenge for using the loophole will the Harry assign her as liason to BPRD?
Comments from author:
You're assuming she doesn't go voluntarily. And that such a thing would be punishment; she'd be going to learn new things and stay with a good friend. Hardly a negative thing.
Review By [Jearom] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CameronYoung
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Ok, assuming that Hermione joins up with the BPRD, If Luna is Elphaba, will Hermione be Glinda or Galinda? Does that make Ron the Scarecrow? He does need a brain.

The King of No Pants salutes you for a job well done.
Comments from author:
Luna: Elphaba
Hermione: Glinda
Dawn: Oriens
Illyria: ...Illyria
Review By [CameronYoung] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from latina
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I love this idea!!! ^__^

I cannot wait for more. I'm curious on how Hermione is going to take everything. Once she processes things...will she go with the flow...or...freak out?

Keep up the good work!

-latina
Comments from author:
Hermione seems rather adaptive. I mean, look at how fast she adapted to the idea of a magical life; she got her letter and a month later, had read all her books and tried a few spells and everything?
Review By [latina] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Eureka
Review:
OK Love it and can't wait for more. Need something funny right about now.
Comments from author:
We'll see what I can do about that.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Well, I have to admit I didn't see that one coming. Hellboy, Hermione, and Luna... Why do I think the Wizarding govt. is in trouble?
Comments from author:
Probably because they're screwed. @_@
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
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Oh Joe. Yet another of your marvelous stories that is 37.4 degrees off sanity. I am loving your story so far and can't wait to read more. Especially when the Big Red Snarker meets the new Librarian. Lol! As a librarian, I'd take Hermione for my team any day.
Comments from author:
Well you have to admit, she looks the part.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from celebrindal
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I haven't ever read or seen anything with Hellboy (excepting previews for the movies) but I am digging the story anyway. Major, major thanks for calling bullshit on the Marriage Law crap and I especially like the references to 'be[ing] a pureblood's walking uterus' because that's exactly what it is.

Cheers to you for being awesome.
Comments from author:
I'm awesome!
Review By [celebrindal] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)Clavell
Review:
The Chaotic Good Samaritan? Ol' Red should have quite a reaction to that ("It's not bad enough I gotta work with ya, but do ya haveta go and copy my gun?"). MOAR PLEASE! :)
Comments from author:
He knows by this point; it was made by the same people for her and she's only brought it to England to be modified to accept a wand core so she doesn't need to fumble between her wand and her gun in mid-fight.
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Raider
Review:
I have to ask a really rather obvious question with a likely equally obvious answer....

is this story related to your other fic 'Overcome'?
Comments from author:
No.
Review By [Raider] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from slmncpm
Review:
*laughs* the wicked witch huh? i love that she named her gun chaotic good samaritan. yay!*hands you scones* i love the update and plead for more quickly if you don't mind.
Comments from author:
We'll see what happens.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ThomasS
Review:
I'll be honest, up until you introduced the dog I was thinking more along the lines of Dante from Devil May Cry than Hellboy, and on the first refrence to 'Red' I was thinking Buffy. Right around the second 'Red' refrence I started thinking Hellboy instead, but it still came as a little surprise.
Comments from author:
No, I was thinking hellhound that refined itself into barghest given the locale. Dante's under a glamour.
Review By [ThomasS] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Charming narrative, pacing and characterization that isn't too crackety because of the Hellboy crossover.
Comments from author:
Honestly, I think Luna de-cracks any fic because Luna is like, crack incarnate. So her being herself is just normal.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Meneldur
Review:
Intriguing chapter. I loved Luna's gun, the reference to D&D (though really, Paladin's can suck. Haven't they seen Miko from Order of the Stick?) and especially to Wicked. I love Elphaba, and this Luna is somewhat like her - as she noted.
i wonder what would have happened had Hermione gone ot Pansy... she might have been intorduced to Tracey or Daphne, who might be willing to agree to marrying her... or having a threesome. Maybe she'll meet them when she come to the Wizengamot - two more witches having found a loophole, and actually eager to enter a marriage?
Wonder what Red (and his father) have got to say about this marriage law, and the Wizarding World. I guess we'll find out soon enough. Until then, Meneldur.
Comments from author:
I have entire histories done up for both Daphne and Tracey that I carry across all my versions of the character these days; the two would actually be eligible to marry each other because my Daphne is a pureblood but my Tracey is a half-blood.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
Loving this story. Always disliked the "Hermione/Marriage Law" stories as they all have her giving up on fighting it after the first paragraph, which is a total misreading of her character. (remember "SPEW"? heh) . Can't wait for the Ministry/Wizangamot's reaction. Though my bet is after shock etc, they'd hastily try to amend the law to close her loophole. So she'd need to officially marry Luna before letting them find out, ie "fait accompli".
Considering how much prejudice Hagrid & the like face, Hellboy. Their heads would explode. Hm... Luna/Hermione might face charges of violating the 'secrets act' letting muggles know about their world. HB is a 'magical creature' and thus ok, but he works with muggles. Then again maybe that's for the American wizards to worry about? ie outside of Ministry jurisdiction ?
Most of all--not sure Molly W. is going to be happy about this. Heh.
Comments from author:
Run Hermione run!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from UncleKai
Review:
He. The way you develop this reminds me a bit of your first Hermione/Luna story, Soundtrack to Your Life. Only this works better, the Characters are older and more believable.

And... Dark Gothic Witch with a BIG GUNS? He... yeah!

No dull life for Hermione with that one.
Comments from author:
Pshaw, like Hermione would want a dull life.
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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