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Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Sweet! While the bits moved along quickly, they were deep enough to keep me following the context and the storyline. I feel I should mention that I'm totally creeped out by Greg-bug. Eegh. But I'm looking forward to seeing how Clark and Xander handle it. Plus, I really like this Lex Luthor. Not a bad guy, a little egotistical, but cool too. Claiming his life before his dad ruins it.

Just... yeah. I like.

I look forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from CageFire
Review:
Nice to see a new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from frankocsic
Review:
Yay, update! Enjoyed reading. Good job.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hi, Dan. Been so long since I read this I forgot that you had Cloe "read in."
Regarding your timelord looming theory - why would they drop their defective infants off on earth? Also which Gallifrey theory would you use - some thousands of years in Earth's future is their present day or they were an ancient Bablyon 5 type mythology civilization? I like the idea of there being some connection. Have you read Wajag's series where the main crossover is SG1 and Highlander? She also goes into the alien theory but in a different way.
Comments from author:
Primarily, the immortals would be the not quite offspring of the mythic 'other' in time lord mythology. This is the same not quite a Time Lord that the Doctor is born from. The one that was was the actual grandfather of Susan Foreman. As for why they set the Immortals on Earth, well where else would an elite society place their 'special' little brothers? They even set up a group of caretakers for them. The Watchers.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from stonegolem
Review:
Thrilled to see this updated.
It's awesome that even after such a long time since you updated you were able to slide right back into this story and it still read and felt the same as before. Seamless.
Review By [stonegolem] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Yay Crazy Dan! Haven't seen you update in a while. Always a fan of your stuff. Great part and can't wait to read more. Hope to see some updates on your other stuff to.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from DarkTopaz
Review:
glad to see this back I hope you keep writing.
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from LFW
Review:
Not much of a 'Smallville' fan but darn sure looking forward to your spin
And hopefully more 'Raising the Dead and Loving It' at least
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
It has been a long time. Update soon.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from Rob
Review:
So great to see more of this one.
Review By [Rob] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the newest chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more of your updates.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lucky Chapter 13" from Darksnider
Review:
It updated and it's still a fun read. Really enjoying Lex being mentored by Xander.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from BenjiC
Review:
You really should continue this. The premise is unique, the interactions between characters is refreshing and there is a distinct lack of emo. One of the best stories I have read on this site although it feels a bit rushed.
Hope you come back to it at some point.
Review By [BenjiC] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from KrisB
Review:
It's been awhile since I've read this one. My one suggestion at the moment on where to take this. Some how introduce Lex to Joyce as just "Xander's bud" or something and let Lex get attached/drawn in abit by her. Xander always had a thing for Joyce. This one didn't really seem to show it though.

I doubt that will happen as Dawn is likely to end up Xander's major task in life. Hmm... I've liked how you had Xander's road trip the only one that you really needed to add was Harley Quinn.

I like the idea out Lex/Xander building their own fortune from scratch the easily rivals Luthor Corp. Lex as being seen as the eccentric green guy that likes to have fun is different.

You know what would be really fun? Lex and Xander having a harem contest on who could build and keep up the most comptent and unquie harem of women/girls. ;) The only thing is that you'd need to some how add in Tara and Dawn just to give him a Sunnydale connection. Dawn ain't quite old enough now, but give her 5 years and a flash forward, and they'd be an interesting match.

I also think that tossing a female Amazo his way that started out on his path would be an interesting matchup. The only real problem with that is he would likely see her more as a sister than as a love interest.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from WCSII
Review:
... You get bored with what you're writing easily, don't you? Do you have anything that you've finished?
Review By [WCSII] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
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